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Arhi FF:Comeback arnavji! Link the thread #2 given (Page 134)

kirthiarshi Senior Member

Joined: 14 August 2012
Posts: 641

Posted: 01 May 2013 at 6:48am | IP Logged
ur story is different n goodSmile
it has a good plot but is very confusing at times, like whom does muskan actually love!!! nk or sid or arnav?ConfusedConfused
muskan is a very strong character and thats good tooBig smileBig smile
but showing khushi as a weakling who always runs away into the kitchen and crying is badOuch
she took care of ASR's empire in his absence.Clap so show her lot more stronger.WinkWink arnav should turn his head n heart towards her, not just because of her tears but also her skills, beauty, confidence, knowledge, care n everything!Embarrassed i dont want her to fight n use guns like muskan but a women can also be strong without these, with their willpower and confidence.Thumbs Up i want khushi to be like that. please change her like that in ur story.Smile
and the way arnav is inclined towards muskan might be natural as he recognizes only her in the house to be his own. but the way muskan is looking at both arnav n nk is confusing.Confused
and moreover he cant just come and carry khushi in his arms like that when he thinks that she is someone else's wife right? so i think he should be away from her in this stage where he himself is not very sure about what he s feeling for her.Wacko
and please make muskan's flashback more clear. there are so many bits n pieces about her past that its confusing to bring them together.
please dont think am taunting. these are just my suggestions. hope it helps Smile
u have a very different thinking! bravo Clap Thumbs Up Approve

arhi101 IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4163

Posted: 01 May 2013 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Who does Muskaan actually love?
Poor khushi although she needs to be strong and try attracting arnav towards her
Continue soon
Thanx for the pm
rehsanzsobti IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 January 2012
Posts: 4916

Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:19am | IP Logged
when will arnav gain his memory back
akshiankita IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 April 2011
Posts: 4513

Posted: 01 May 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
nice update:D
sspoorthy IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 March 2012
Posts: 8214

Posted: 01 May 2013 at 10:01am | IP Logged
poor khushi too hurt with arnav's love towards that muskaan
amazing update
loved it
thanks for the PM
mim15 Goldie

Joined: 28 February 2012
Posts: 1177

Posted: 02 May 2013 at 2:27am | IP Logged
frm dis update i understand 1thing dat arnav dnt love khushi anymore..he love muskaan nw..yup he got attract to khushi bt its nt love...d way he show his concern for muskaan i dnt thnk khushi wl take dat makes me very sad..i thnk nw khushi should avoid arnav or make jealous arnav...may b dn arnav could remember nythn...i knw muskan z nice bt i dnt like d way she get attention frm arnav...i seriously think khushi should avoid him..
saima4744 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 21 February 2012
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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 3:08am | IP Logged
it is so emotional dear.
uring read i was sad.
spvd IF-Addictz

Joined: 22 December 2007
Posts: 51593

Posted: 02 May 2013 at 3:09am | IP Logged
part 13
poor Muskaan...
feel sorry for her...
cont soon...

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