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Arhi FF:Comeback arnavji! Link the thread #2 given (Page 100)

BornToShipArShi IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 4:26am | IP Logged
don't stop this storyBroken Heart
its really sad when a nice story is stopped halfway bcoz of what sm people sayBroken Heart
a big tree always attracts the woodman's axe
the update was awesomeThumbs Up
the scene between ASR and junior ASR was hilarious.wished it ringed a bell in arnav's mind
muskaan's character is grey n mysterious-thats what i like abt her

pls do continue the story

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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 5:52am | IP Logged
please don't stop it yaar .it is very good one .as a reader i think the story is that one which can touch our heart ...with any emotion...sadness ,happiness ,jealousy...
u make a wonderful story ...wonderful plot .it a request please don't stop   
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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 6:02am | IP Logged
You had pretty god likes and comments so please continue here and update.If you decide to leave IF because of someone you are encouraging them and they will continue this with others..so please don't give your attention to such attentiongainers.. leave them..enjoy your ability to write and let us too enjoy reading your story..
Nice update. Muskaan loves Arnav but she gave Arnav to Khushi and Khushi started to get her love...thats what Nk's questions reply shows..
He looked at the window
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 6:18am | IP Logged
nice update but can't see so much separation between Arnav and Khusi...
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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 8:29am | IP Logged
awesome part...
muskaan loves arnav...Shocked
update soon...
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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arshifan2012

hi guys...im fine now...thanks for all the wishes...here's chapter 8...hope you enjoy it...and please do "like" it and leave a comment!!!!





Chapter 8:

"Who are you???" asked muskaan only to stared back at dangerously.





She got her answers when she saw them taking out their swords and moving towards her. "Oh no you don't...you think those swords will scare me off!!!!" she exclaimed.





She jumped on a higher place and took her gun out. She started firing. Then she felt someone behind her. Actually she had seen the shadow of the person. She turned around and kicked him in the right place and he fell down instantly. Another man came up and was about to cut her head when she caught hold of the sword...her palms started to bleed in the process...but she managed to kick that man too...






From upstairs , two pair of eyes were watching her , as she was fighting...




"Khalid bhai...she still remembers each and every tactic you taught her..." and old man huffed.





Khalid bhai smiled. "I know...i just wanted to test her...and by now...she might have figured out that its just a training..." he whispered. The other man looked up at him and then at muskaan..."Aleayah was destined to fight against her abbu(father) and she will fight...she has to win against her father...who unfortunately is my big brother..." sighed khalid bhai...





They looked down at their only hope...fighting against the world's most dangerous fighters...and winning against them..."I hope she doesn't hurt herself in the process!!!" cried the other man. "Don't worry...she won't...she is Nazim's daughter after all..." he looked at her. "I wish she would ever call me abbu!!!" he sighed.





"Well...by blood she is your daughter...isn't she??" asked the old man. He saw a lone tear escape khalid bhai's eyes. "Yes...yes she is...but unfortunately...i can't tell her that...if she comes to know that i left her just to keep her mother safe...she would ask me why i didn't tell her...and at the end of it all...she would leave me...and right now...she needs me...i am the main reason why Nazim is after her...to kill her and i won't let anything happen to her...even if it means that she needs to protect herself like this!!!" he said with a certain stiffness. The old man knew that khalid bhai loved muskaan emmensely...who wouldn't love such a pretty and charming girl anyways...???

Dude I am Nazim's Daughter!!! My father's name is also Nazim!!! :))



Edited by HeBarun21 - 29 March 2013 at 9:15am
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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Amazing chapter
Plzzz update soon dear
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 11:34am | IP Logged
New reader!!!
Dude ur story is AWESUM!!!!
Poor Khushi... I feel bad for her!!!
Plzz continue soon... Nd plzz be kind enuff to send me PM's please!!!! :))

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