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Born To Be Mine Part 24 updated 18/01/2013 (Page 85)

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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Superb update...loved it...eagerly waiting fr d next update..
Thanx fr d pm...
Continue soon...

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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 3:18am | IP Logged
thnx All
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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 1:35am | IP Logged
good update

loved it

update soon

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 5:23am | IP Logged
poor Khushi :(

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 5:32am | IP Logged
thank god everything is sorted out :)

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:01am | IP Logged
@Keshini4u: Nyc story!!!!Smile

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Amazing yawr Kesh!!!
Loved it...
continue soon!

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Sohan71 Newbie
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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 8:49am | IP Logged
This story had promise but its been executed poorly, it's a written story not a text message for goodness sake!!  Aside from the text like writing you also need an editor...do you even proof read before posting?  Its even worse when you are writing mature content so poorly.  I'm sorry if this sounds harsh but this kind of amateurism and sloppiness makes the difference between readers choosing to read or not and in this case it's definitely NOT which is a shame when the story could be good.Angry

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