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Born To Be Mine Part 24 updated 18/01/2013 (Page 8)

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
Part 3

 

 

It was morning & he got up he looked at the clock it was 6.30 am .. he went inside the wash room & got freshed his self .. came out & got ready to go to office.. he came down & met the family members at the table..

A; akash r u ready ? 

Akash ; yeah bhai .. 

Anjali ; it's noot even 8.00 yet & u guys r going to office? 

a; di akash is going to tem..

Akash ; di we r hving a meeting .. so we r going ..

Anaji; meeting temple ?? having a meeting in the temple ? 

akash ; shushh di .. di i'm going to meet her dn't scream plz.. arnav smiled on which akashh told .. lol both of them left the house gving a smile on anjali's face.. 

arnav drove to the temple .. he stopped the car .. all the time while he was driving akash was looking at the mirror & adjusting his self .. ;)

A; akash we hv come to the temple.. 

Akash; ok bhai few minutes.. this hair is stupid some times... 

A; he looked at akash & smiled .. ok akash be on time ok .. 

akash left the car to meet his lady love.. ..payal was at the temple waiting for him .. she sw him & came towards him .. 

Payal ; akash ji .. thank god u were on time.. 

Akash; payal ji is all ready for the pooja ? lol the bubbly girl khushi comes there.. 

K; hi jijaji.. 

Akash; aa hi khushi ji ..

K; jijaji  jiji was thinking abt u all the day .. she couldn't even sleep last night .. akash looked at payal .. lol 

*at the car * 

Arnav drives to AR .. but he suddenly see akash's mobile at his seat .. 

A; ohh shit akash has left the 4n .. he turned the car back & again drove to the temple.. 

*at the temple*

Khushi & her friends (some small children ) where walking in the temple.. they playing while walking .. they playing while walking .. arnav got down & walked inside the temple searching for akash .. khushi was walking backwards playing with the children & having a thali on the hand.. arnav was now close to khushi .. she was moving back & back.. the children.. screamed .. rakshas...

K; what .. 

kids; di behind u the rakshas.. she turned with the thali & bumped on him .. the thali flew up & the sindoor splashed on their face..  she was abt to fall but he catches her.. for few seconds they were looking at each other .. then she got up hanging on his neck .. made her dupatta on place & was looking around for her thali .. her face was full of sindoor ..& even his face was.. she looked at him in an angry look and ran the kids followed her .. this was the 2nd meeting of them .. yet both ddn't talk .. he sw akash with payal & he walked towards them .. & they were surprised to see him like dt .. the face full of sindoor & he ... at the temple ... impossible.. 

A; akash .. i came to gv ur 4n ..

Akash; bhaii sindoor on ur face.. he ddnt answer it .. 

A; akash if ur done let's leave ? 

Akash ; payal ji will meet on another day ok .. bye .. he smiled . & she too smiled.. 
both of them walked towards the car.. arnav got in ..and akash was about to get in ... but he heard khushi calling him name..
K; jijaji.. she came running near the car but arnav was covered by akash .. jijaji .. jiji told to gv u this.. 
A; khushi ji ..wt is this..
K; ohhffoo jijaji .. this is what my lovely jiji made for u some parata.. she winked at him .. gving a childish clap .. arnav heard her voice .. but not yet the face.. 
A; akash blushed thank u khushi ji .. he moved & she turned .. arnav only can see her back.. akash got inside.. arnav looked down to start the car .. then khushi came infrnt of the car but yet turned behind.. once he looked up she turned to face him .. he sw her clearly .. he was gazing at the way she turned.. the hair .. her dupatta all turned with her self .. he sw the same old thing for so much of times as flash backs in this moment .. she screamed from out jiji... and ran towards payal .. arnav was witnessing this.. but khushi ddn't see yet.. she ddn't know dt this rakshas was her jiji's jeet ji :) 
akash looked at khushi for the scream of "jiji" 
Akash; this girl is really mad..  arnav gave a blank look to akash.. 
A; u know her ? 
Akash ; ofcoz bhai .. why now she came & spoke to me.. she is khushi .. payal ji 's sister.. 
A; really ? 
Akash ; haan bhai .. why do u know her ? 
A; no ..  no .. he smiled from inside.. but he ddn't know why .. 
Akash;bhai sometimes i think how can they be sisters .. bcoz payal is very silent ..slow .. but khushi ji is different .. screaming bubbly .. naughty .. he laughed.. arnav drove towards RM .. bcoz he really wanted a change .. as his face & clothes were full of sindoor ..


Edited by Keshini4u - 26 September 2012 at 9:52pm

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this is nice update

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sree_dey

Osum bhabhi

lol bhabi !! :D hahaha thnx bhabi !!  
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Keshini4u

Originally posted by sree_dey

Osum bhabhi

lol bhabi !! :D hahaha thnx bhabi !!
our akashji's wife ROFL

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Awesome update !! Khushi is seriously crazy man !

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sree_dey

Originally posted by Keshini4u

Originally posted by sree_dey

Osum bhabhi

lol bhabi !! :D hahaha thnx bhabi !!
our akashji's wife ROFL

chiii sree :( nahii arnav's :P   

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