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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Sorry! Will update tomorrow! Ermm
Can't right now! Have to run!

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Eagerly will be waiting for update tomoro

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Beautifully Written !!! 

But i am having a feeling that She is not Kidnapped ...Its some kind of a prank ...Is it kya?? Do continue soon yaar ,,,,,,,,,,,,Damn curious to know about it :) 

LOved the way you have wriiten Shaan's Emotions & expressions. very well articulated :) Loved it 

Continue soon .

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
HI annieSmile
nice one!!!! but too short
 Khanak is really kidnapped? Is that a pranck?? 
Waiting for next one eagerlySmile
Happy Weekend Annie
come soon ...

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
awesome update...
actually i have a doubt Is khanak really kidnapped or she is playing a prank???
waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:15am | IP Logged
og god u r torturing us bt stopping at dis point...LOLLOL
dis is damm soo gud...did any1 kidnapped her??????ShockedShocked
hope shaan finds her soon...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 4:44am | IP Logged
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Meanwhile, Khanak had, by now, realised that she had been captured by a gang of 3 goons. Two of them were holding her tightly on either side. One's hand on her mouth and the other's on her waist. She felt creepy, as she registered this.

Goon 1: Well, well, well! (his voice dropping low at the last) Look at this pretty, shimmering and twinkly Beauty that awaits.. (in a sing song manner) Oh! Pretty mate! (eyeing her from head to toe as he chewed on his toothpick, while walking up to her)

As he brought his ugly, smelling mouth near hers, she felt her dupatta sliding down her back, and then ripped from her. The goon had ripped the cloth and thrown it aside.
Khanak having no choice, kicked him hard on his groin. But the force was not trained properly and her feet went higher and hit his stomach, pushing him a few feet away.

Goon 1: (stunned and holding his stomach, while writhing in pain) Woah! This gal got some guts, eh? (straightening) This is gonna be fun, eh? (dusting his shirt and charging at her) This IS gonna be fun!

As he said it, he started ripping off her sleeves on both sides, while, her big embers widened as saucers induced with horror. He then held her face tightly in between his fingers, converging her lips, so she wouldn't make any noise.
Tears of reddened shame and disgust made their way out of her embers, feeling helpless and praying for Shaan to come, or anybody to come, help her. She tried to wriggle out of their vice like grip, but failed as they tightened their hold further, almost immobilizing her. She closed her eyes fiercely and tried to prevent him from staining her soul, by opposing his charges. She didn't see anything but could hear and feel and even smell his pungent mouth odour that was teamed with heavy alcohol and onions.
Her nails dug into her palms until her knuckles were white, as she grit her teeth to numb out her senses. 
She felt the goon's hold loosen on her face.
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"Don't you even think of it!"
She heard a husky voice say.

The goon turned to see who it was, when a flash of black thundered on his eyes and he felt himself crashing down on the ground on his side. A faint crack resounded the walls of the dead alley, and a sudden stinging pain throbbed underneath his shaggy jaw as he tried to lift his head to see the source of that Punch.

Shaan could see Khanak in the hold of two more goons. One of them, loosened their grip and proceeded to attack.

Goon 2: Bring it on Man! (beckoning and raising his fist)
But before he could even put in force to his forearm, he was rather punched in the face flattening his pointed nose, and kicked hard in the jewels.

Shaan: (fiercely) Don't you dare do that to my girl!

The third goon's eyes had widened like saucers, and his eyes were on the verge of popping out of their sockets. He definitely was shaking like a leaf and having no other choice left Khanak and started running, rather stumbling in the other direction, for his Life. The other two helped each other and followed their companion as Shaan jerked forward to scare them.
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Is that a cliffhanger?? Oh yes it is!!LOL Wink
Tell me how it was!!!!

Annie


Edited by PhoenixRadar - 09 September 2012 at 4:59am

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Heyyy AnnieBig smile

its just SuperbClap... loved it.Big smile
loved Shaan's entry like a Hero... no doubt HE is a heroWink.
really enjoyed this update.
why did u stop here??? awww so badCry.
update soon, ok!!Embarrassed

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