MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 8 - Page 4

Congrats on the new thread, the update was simply superb.

Loved it
tooo update
maan suffered soo much after death of his parents feeling bad fir him
now deir love journey is going to start
awsome

just read your ff.

nice story.

simply amazing.loved it,.

ed d update.i feel tears in my eyes.Maan ne sach hi kaha ki woh gadha tha jo apne dil ki baat hi nahin samjha.chalo tubelight jali to bhale hi der se jali.Maan babu jaldi se apni choke change karwa lo kahin aisa na ho ki agli baar phir se jalne me time lage

congrats for the new thread..

lovely update

love the way how maan expressed his feelings

such a beautiful update jst luvd it... had tears in my eyes bth happy n sad... keep goin
cn u gve d link f ur al ff especialy til death do us apart
i jst luvd dat ff
hve read it a lot f tme
thnx:)

omg.. dis ws sucha beautiful update n an absolute emotional ride..

Honestly... i loved it dat u made Maan say evrything that ws a part of him..
I absolutely dnt mind dis.. sachhi...
because it felt so much lyk Maan laid himself out in front of Geet to let her mould him... fill him wd love... curb his loneliness and let him free...
It was all vry beautifully written by you Ritzy di...

m soo glad u came up wd dis part... 😃

love u Ritzy di... ❤️
my love n hugs to Rhia..Jiju n Ayush... 😳
n especially tell Rhia dat i miss her... she is my baby... ❤️

That was so overwhelming...love.