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pixiegirl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
Arnav truly dug his grave with this...

"Why can't you be like other wives?" he asked. And, yes, Sisters, he was mocking her now. Enjoying every moment, of course. "Why do you have to kill a man to prove your love? It's Karwa Chauth tomorrow. Put the loaded gun down and fast for me instead."

What was he thinking, even for the blithely rude Arnav, these lines are unacceptable... Rally he asked her to put down the loaded gun & don the churi & observe fast for him?!?!?!? Shocked

Now Maya, as mentioned before, I am in love with his hotness Arnav Singh Raizada, but didn't he push his luck a tad bit this time with his audacity in ordering our heroine numero uno to be like "other wives"??? Really???? Shocked

Why is our hero bordering on chauvinism so... Unhappy

"She felt so good tucked against him. Why couldn't she need him like this more often?"

Is our heroine destined only to be relegated to being his arm candy?? NEVER!!!!

Must say she needs to set the record straight ASAP with him on this grave issue, or else, she may end up being just that, arm candy...

His mocking of her concern for him necessitates some intervention on the part of us sistahs to impart some much needed wisdom on our heroine numero uno. Wink

Although, have to say, our heroine did redeem herself somewhat with her refusal for her concern to be treated insignificantly, with her follow-up...

"But if Shyam slips out of this trap as well, then you will have to kill him."

"Agreed," Arnav said, holding his hand up in the boy scout salute.

"Aman," Khushi said, "you are a witness to this."

Aman also saluted."

Hope she continues to lead the bull by his nose, we sistahs would be, uhm, so delighted Big smile

P.S. Can't stop laughing at this line...
"Pari thought the jar contained chutney."

Edited by pixiegirl - 03 November 2012 at 5:59pm

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Anamika100 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Loved Arnav, Aman and Khushi conversation about why it did not make sense to kill Shyam.  This was like a comedy skit.  Very enjoyable.

And Pari thought the Neem paste was chutney...haha.

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peepli IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
Pari thought it was, only you can come up with such wit among plans to kill someone..

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reflorated IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 1:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Inked

Originally posted by V323

<font size="2">Yes PLEASE write yourself into the story.</font>


<font size="2">Herione No. 5:Ms. Maya Hill</font>

<font size="2"><strong>Chopra's sultry assistant. (Like Della Street and Perry Mason... except well, the love story thing. Somehow, I cannot imagine chopra and you together! LOL ) Hasa dream of seeing her name on print. Is a hardcore romantic, loves chutney (thats another thing we have in common, just btw), impeccable sense of style, Socially awkward (it is not funny how we have similar traits); and soon to be appointed for the security of Mrs. Khushi Raizada. How does that sound?</font>


<font size="2">-V</font>

YOU are one dangerous Sister, Sister! I actually found myself plotting over morning coffee how to include myself in -khushi-. It makes sense.This would formalize what everyone already knows: that I live more in my fictional world than in my real world.

Sure! Why not?
I've always maintained that this story's a madcap playful romp [i.e not Dostoevsky] so why not break all the rules of narrative fiction?


I feel very special when somebody calls me dangerous!! I feel like Lara Croft or something LOL!!

Ahaha!! So should I look forward to seeing the beautifully elusive Maya Hill, with steely grey eyes, enquiring about last night? ;)

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JalebiJane Goldie

Joined: 11 March 2012
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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 6:06am | IP Logged

The 03.11.2012 episode of -khushi- is up.

Calendar for previous episodes here.

Thank you,

Edited by Inked - 04 November 2012 at 6:06am

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reflorated IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
So Arnav is actually going to follow up with Khushi's plan??


I have this feeling that Arnav would have gone on with planA Had he not found out about Khushi being threatened with Shyam

Aman and Pari's conversation was hilarious!!

Edited by V323 - 04 November 2012 at 6:30am

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masam Goldie

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Oh how dextrous he is! Now matter how quixotic she sounded, he so agrees with her.
Oh you puckish Raizada!

My favorite part being Aman's and Par's convo.

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ElenaElenor Senior Member

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Gobsmacked- he is actually going through with it?!
Pari and Aman's conversation was hilarious- 'Don't eat' and the sad face about the chutney.

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