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inocence Senior Member

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
no pari no...dont give can persuade aman!!!!

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ElenaElenor Senior Member

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Brilliant chapter, it gave an insight into the mysterious and cautious Aman.  The guilt, the redemption, the hurt. Let me start of by the  closing dialogue- he admitted to his feelings? Letting her know what he felt.
Pari letting him know how much she needs him in her life in her drunken state and Aman telling her how much he fears to be around her- he is afraid of crossing any lines or breaking the walls that he has built around him- to keep her away from him.
Raizada's in some sense have affected their relationship. Hoping the stay at the Raizada house will move their relationship forward.

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snoopy84 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 5:26am | IP Logged

Poor Aman and Pari hope they both reconsider wonder why they are afraid to be together when the attraction is so obvious

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reflorated IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 5:28am | IP Logged
I have not read the chapter yet, and then Aashifa told me pari gave up.

Dead. I am dying. I haven't read yet, but if Pari is giving up... Yes, I am dying.

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prerna1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 5:40am | IP Logged
nice part
poor Pari
continue soon

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-Risha- Goldie

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged
I dunno but I'm secretly glad that Pari did not beg. If she has another plan to keep Aman without really letting him know... that's ok too.

But about Aman, I feel so many different emotions... exasperation, pity, appreciation... but surprisingly, I'm not mad at him!

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AngelTeen IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Pari just got her single tear moment AGAIN. 

Aman, make up for it and make up for it FAST!

Such an idiot! Apne boss se sab seekha, ab yeh bhi seekh! Bewakoof! WHY must men like him (and the earlier version of his Boss who makes an appearance now and then even so far along) berate themselves in privacy and speak truth without any cover or rather half truths without letting their own feelings in?! TELL HER WHAT YOU FEEL, IDIOT!

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mistyrains IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 9:33am | IP Logged
This chapter had me teary eyed throughout, and I think I cried a bit at the last line. It is ironic how well they understand each other, yet, not. Like always, your in-depth knowledge of capturing each emotion, each thought that might have crossed through Aman or Pari's mind, and then so effortlessly conveying it to us, making us emote, awes me, inspires me. 

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