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-khushi- About Last Night: Email: me@mayahill.com (Page 62)

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Maya, I will leave my comments by tomorrow :)

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JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Prepare to be ravaged, Virgin

Now that is a very vexatious message, would awaken the monster of any innocent girl.
Arnav and his foxy ways.

Khushi's turmoil from blush to mortification regarding Aakash and her Laad Governer was actually hilarious.


this place where he saw his greatest conquest and his only weakness waiting upon his bed.
Love the statement, love the style board!

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Uh-mazing Maya, loved it. I knew you would somehow not deprive us of our lead pair's wedding night even if AnYash weren't going to be enjoying theirs, but right now, I am only interested in the "deflowering of the bride" of our main heroine, not the other one.

Wow! "Prepare to be ravaged, Virgin."
Now that one statement sent my mind into a tizzy, can't wait for the groom to begin his "ravaging". Embarrassed

But are you sure, he'll have the stars smiling on him for such a delectable process??? Didn't our very own heroine numero uno, say something to the contrary??

"Virgin? If her husband wants an untouched woman, she would give him one. She would be so virginal that it would take hours—nay, days!—for him to melt away her apprehensions and inhibitions. Oh, she would make him work for it! "

Oh how I want to see Arnav beg for his release from that torture. Hmmm so waiting for your next update & please don't do a "ramanchi" on us by giving us an AnYash update next...

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
fantastic update love the style board
"prepare to be ravaged, virgin" wow
"his greatest conquest and his only weakness waiting upon his bed"  love the statement
waiting to see wat under the bed
 

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 7:12pm | IP Logged
Khushi will do us sisters justice if she tortures him for even a  day as a "virgin"!! Loved the update and please don't disappoint us in the update Maya, by the way is Pari drunk yet !!!

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 9:02pm | IP Logged

Prepare to be ravaged, Virgin. – Our dear man, you don't have to clarify when you refer to him Maya, we only know one such man, is capable of being this business like in his intentions, He knows his client(Khushi) and is committing to deliver as the terms of the marriage is agreed upon.

Khushi never, I mean never ceases to surprise me, her reactions the play of emotions in her heart and on her face are as beautifully unique like her.

"this place where he saw his greatest conquest and his only weakness waiting upon his bed" Here too his business mind does not rest, to put down on his life's resume, the lone factor which is both his strength and weakness, his wife.

PS – I hope the faux virgin acts as virginal as her heart and body permits.

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
I am sure you will understand how relaxed i feel when Arnav returned home. Seriously with that shyam's phone call and no body even knows about that i was anxious and worried about Arnav's departure and Khusi's reactions. 
After this part my love for Arnav really increased ten folds. I thought there will be message of why he's out or something like that . and Khusi will freakout. But Arnav knows better. Khusi's transformation from a blushing bride to an embarrassed sister-in-law and then the turmoil of confusion on LG was lovely. Only she can pull so much expression in one go. Embarrassed
this place where he saw his greatest conquest and his only weakness waiting upon his bed
What could a man ask for more  here ???

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 12:33am | IP Logged
very nice update maya...good going...Smile

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