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-khushi- About Last Night: Email: me@mayahill.com (Page 56)

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Thank you for introducing Pari's character in this story.
 I just adore her, respect her and feel for her. I never thought i would feel so strongly for an other character than Khusi or Boondi ( in this story) but with Pari i just not able to hold back. Without her this wedding would have incomplete ..
I loved that she replied back to Aman. At least Aman gave some reaction.

I simply love the fact in this journey that the women you showed are very powerful in every emotions.

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 8:53am | IP Logged
@10.10.12
awww d ending...i hope things improve for pari...

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
YAY!!! *runs to read*

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 1:44pm | IP Logged

I adore your styleboards, they match the heroines so aptly, you truly are such a fashionista !!

I hope Aman realizes that if he claims to know everything about her, he should know Pari loves him and he cannot let her go.  Please let them get re married and Khushi and Boondi arrange it..

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
"You will get drunk," he clarified. "and I'll get you home safely."

i looovee this line!!!
oooh yeyey i wana read more !!!

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Firstly, I adore the style boards. Where 10/10/12 was all ornate, 11/10/12 was more of.. Pari. Jovial and care-free.

And with the latest update, you met my expectations, Maya. I commented last time that I see an intention in Aman's words and I sure was rewarded with more!

She was habituated to loss.
She lacked the courage to take his hand, but she longed for its comfort.

They all described her turmoil and her guarded feelings so smoothly. Totally stirring.

You will get drunk," he clarified. "and I'll get you home safely."

What a way of being a player and a gentleman at the same time! But that makes me question his intention again. Is he making memories to hold onto or he won't let Pari go?
Great going, Maya.

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
I don't get a good feeling in this.

Is it some kind of Pari's bucket list which Aman wants to fulfill? So, he is firm on his plans of leaving her, isn't he?

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