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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
Maya Hill has posted a new item, '09.10.2012'

"What's left to do?" 

"Deflower the bride," Khushi whispered into her husband's ear. And as she happened to be in the vicinity of his earlobe, she gave it a nip, before stepping away.

But remember, Sisters, this was Arnav Singh Raizada—would such a man allow chunks to be bitten off him without reprisal? She was wrenched [...]


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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
Loved it

the First couple is always great.  They rarely disappoint.

Poor Buaji. The multifarious uses her name is put to by both couples...tut tut

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
Maya, I am so in love with your first couple Embarrassed

Loved their repartee so much, each one trying to outdo the other. Absolutely loved it, although, I am having jitters about the plan cooking in Khushi's head. If there was ever a woman determined to bring her own death, Khushi is the one. Ouch

I hope though before she dies an untimely death at the hands of her livid husband, I want to see her patch up the impasse between my other favorite couple...

Looking forward to your next update. As always, loved your style board. 

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Loved Ms Gupta ooops Mrs Laad Governor...  Wink You know you have made this couple such a way that how much read about them just not feel sufficient. I guess i could read n read about this story without even thinking of break. That's power of your writing Maya.
Pari dancing with Boondi really made me sad. Apart from Aman no one will be able to tell that she's just learnt about her mrg to be end shortly.
I like the confidence of Arnav on Aman. He has very keenly observed Aman for years, Again it shows what a relationship they shared. So Arnav thinks Aman loves Pari which i really think true.
I wonder what's planning in Khusi's mind now.
And Khushi kept her promise—for that day.
But next i am sure she will not keep quite and try to help the couple in her own way. I am just scared it doesn't create a rift between both the couples. Aman shouldn't think Pari has confined Khusi with their secrets .. I am really waiting what to happen next ...
Where is Yash n Anjali. They seems to be Gayab after Mrg, Romancing somewhere Wink 

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 2:06am | IP Logged
The magic you have created with your words.. Sigh.
I'm in love with Your Arhi.
Pari made me feel sad, dancing away her misery. But I see Detective Khushi on her way! 

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 2:23am | IP Logged
nice update Maya...i like the way the story is going...so Aman, Pari's state has been put in front of Khushi to an extent..that is good...i'am sure Khushi would do all it takes to make Aman & Pari realize their love for each other..& about what Arnav told Khushi of Aman & Pari's past that is really intriguing...i want to know more about Aman & Pari..good job... i hope Arnav too helps Khushi with Aman & Pari...update soon...waiting for the next update eagerly..Smile

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 2:25am | IP Logged
So the Laad Governor wants an untouched bride, interesting. Oh oh no Khushi is going to do a Mr Chopra act now, that will also be interesting.

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Sisters:

I will post 10.10.2012 of -khushi- later today.

However, I have added some more styleboards [these are specifically inspired by Tanishq's Nikah Collection]. 


Enjoy!--I sense this is the last of rich dress and heavy jewellery for a bit,  as my heroines are telling me they want to romp around in lingerie for the next few days. (ah! those saucy girls!)

 

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