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-khushi- About Last Night: Email: me@mayahill.com (Page 46)

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 4:16am | IP Logged
@5th oct...
haiye..
boondi is always adorable...
pari makes me feel curious n sad everytime she remembers her marriage...

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 4:39am | IP Logged
awesome update
liked aman and pari convo
continue soon

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
very nice update maya..Smile

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Love the last two style boards but the first one wont open. Dunno, though if it's my problem but if it is not, then letting you know!

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Among the wedding drama I loved how you ended your October 5th update. What Aman says to Pari...about it's not how you begin. Wow, for me you not back so many Arnav and Khushi, you made me smile with hope for Aman and Pari. Hope you are having a good weekend.

Edited by purplelove - 06 October 2012 at 8:39am

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Shyam, this man is unrelenting. But the way you have molded, scripted his character , that every moment we see his name flash on the screen, we feel an unusual tension creep through us.

Khushi's strength, her power to keep speaking, not let through her fear for Arnav get across the man on the other end of the phone, is applaud worthy. Makes me proud of her.

Then Pari and Khushi's relationship is so beautiful. They come to me like long-lost sisters.

The Boondi-Yash interaction, the scene is imaginable, easy to visualize. I don't think I'll ever get tired of saying how adorable the kid is.

And then Aman, his words for Pari, they way they converse, the tiny gestures are so sensual, so evocative, that we are left thinking about them, long after reading the episode.

Oh and I did jump, dance and twirl about realizing that Arnav and Khushi are married. Finally!  

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
awesome update boondi is just adorable n love the styleboards n loved aman n pari conversation n "it's not habout ow you begin"  n khushi n arnav are finally married loved the update

Edited by drunkiiebabe - 06 October 2012 at 6:42pm

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
Love this story. Have read it from the beginning a few times now. Please update more regularly. Looking forward to the next part.

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