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-khushi- About Last Night: Email: me@mayahill.com (Page 37)

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 10:06am | IP Logged
i simply love this ff...always look forward to read the next update...awesome writing..Smile

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
What a wonderful chapter!

Complete in all senses.  
Visual (thanks for the double dose of styleboards), 
Emotional (Mummy inside and outside), 
Drama (suspense about Mr. R), 
Adorable (Boondi)

Thank youBig smile

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
awesome update boondi is so adorable n love aman n pari n the suspense about Mr.R n pari signal to khushi to know the arrival of the prince charming loved the update

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 8:49pm | IP Logged
Loved the last two updates Maya, wow! now your FF is turning into a thriller...

Okay, who followed Arnav and why?? Aman's reply was awesome... 

"No," he replied, flatly. "If Mr. Raizada was in danger, I would not be standing here speaking to you. I would be with him."

He is such a gem of a guy!!

So is Pari... Heart

Pari met Khushi's eyes and whispered, "your prince has come!" Khushi's eyes widened in question. Pari enlarged with a smile, "I asked Aman to start the music when Mr. R arrived'as a signal to you."

P.S. I love your style boards. Heart


Edited by pixiegirl - 29 September 2012 at 8:50pm

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
I haven't been commenting for a long long time! Sorry! I usually read them on my phone, and it is hard to write comments from it!

But thank you for writing such a beautiful serial! I honestly do believe that you would make a great script writer! And this is the only thing keeping me from completely giving up on the show. In hope that one day, they would show at least 5% of what you do everyday!

Today's update! Loved Madame Boondi!

If I may, she is MY first heroine! :')

Has the attitude, the power, and the intelligence to pull it off too!

And her calling Anjali mommy - inside and outside made my eyes mist. Perfect scene.

Khushi's concern, and Boondi's calm solution. Beautiful!

I am in love, Maya. That too with a story.

Healthy? Probably not. Do I care? Not even a little bit! :')


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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
The styleboards are stunning - sensual elegance in my eyes!

Boondi is...so achingly adorable!! Such a madam, a sweet innocent yet astute little girl. And she calls Anjali mummy inside OMG!! You know when you look at cute pictures of cute fluffy things and your breath hitches because nothing on earth should be that cute? That's how I felt about her statement!! Heart Just wonderful!

So has Arnav avoided being followed from RM? I hope so! I hope everything goes as planned and Shyam is foiled!

Pari and Aman: both just wonderful characters that have been beautifully created or fleshed out by you. And if I was in danger I would want Aman as my right hand man - the man's middle name is stoicism! 

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Hello Maya,

How are you? This week I spent catching up on your August and September updates.   Big smile   To say I am happy to finally able to read all of them is an understatement.


Please consider this your virtual standing ovation. Clap

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Maya, sorry another post...

How could I be so remiss in not mentioning Ms. Boondi today?? To say she brought a lump to my throat would be an understatement. She is an absolute darling, muuaaah.

 "I'm going to call you Mummy inside and outside."

Awww how adorable can she get.

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