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pixiegirl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Hey Maya rest up, hope you feel better soon. :)

About the last update, is Khushi's 6th sense working again??? I think it might be, right?

So the intruder really came for Arnav?? Scary, Shyamu trying to take revenge, hope there are no incidents at the wedding :(

Boodi is a delctable bundle of joy, I wouldn't mind nibbling myself, I love the way you describe her antics, she seems ultra-adorable, truly, nibble-worthy! Heart

But asking Khushi to "think" before acting isn't that a lost cause?? Or does the hubby have superior powers that we sistahs do not??? 

Edited by pixiegirl - 24 September 2012 at 10:17am

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ElenaElenor Senior Member

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Take care Maya! Get well soon.
The scene with Boondi was adorable. How true- a young girl only stays still when she being beautified. She reminds me of my nieces, lipgloss is seen as a prized possession.
Was Khushi right? Woman's intuition? That the man was there to harm Arnav in a way. Someone who works for Shyam? I hope everything runs smoothly.
The wedding is almost here- eeep. Loved the styleboard. 

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sochanatha Goldie

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
hey...take your time n take care of yourself as well...

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lazyleaves IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 1:56am | IP Logged
18th September

"I just..I want to feel like a proper bride."

His own hand closed over her hand, resting on his chest, and he asked, "have I failed to meet that need, Button?" He calls her Button and I Blushing Why?

Arnav is such a passionate lover. Sigh! Wish I had a magic wand and I could get him out of your story and into my life!

They are remembering the old days. The Nainital trip, the mehendi scene ( I really don't remember how many times I have seen that scene. That is my most favourite scene ever!)

My Yash and Anjali have arrived :D

I liked the honesty between these two. It is an indication for a lifetime of blissful bond :)

The businessman is here. Yash signed without reading because he knows that Arnav will never do a thing which makes Anjali unhappy. This is a point where both agree to each other completely. I can see the bromance building up :)

"Leave me with at least one, Mr. Raizada." This is probably one of the best lines of this story :)

Anjali realized that Arnav had forgotten about the child in his arms. Her Chotte was clearly ready for fatherhood. He is more than ready. Let the news come out which I know will be after the marriage :)

Fab update Maya :)

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lazyleaves IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
19th September

A portion of the population living on this planet is fortunate enough to be perceived as faultless in spite of all their faults.* We all know such people. Indeed, Arnav Singh Raizada is one who belongs to this select set.
Nothing and I repeat nothing can define his character better than this. You nailed it Maya :)

Their conversation was totally Arnav and Khushi :)

This media I tell you! Leave our couple alone!

Yes," her voice dropping low, she added, "I'm wearing it to please my lover. He is fond of plants." Her lover is forever pleased by her ;)

"Shouldn't you be dressing to please your husband-to-be, Miss Gupta?" he teased. "It's time to forget about your lover now." True. Time to get Ms. Gupta out :P

"Forget Arnav Selfish Raizada?" she laughed. "Impossible! Who can forget such a specimen?" @underline: LOL

He smiled at her impertinence. He felt the need to come to the Laad Governor's defence.  "Give your new husband a chance, Miss Gupta,"

Shoot! Who is it?

Why is she running? She is pregnant! She is so impulsive!

Gun or Camera (It is problematic both ways!)

I am worried!

Edited by lazyleaves - 25 September 2012 at 2:21am

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lazyleaves IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
21st September

I loved how you showed the cliched scene and then the actual one :D

Only you can do this Maya :D

You remember that police scene? I had really liked Arnav's acting there. I loved his dialogue that we are not used to seeing police and we don't want to either :P

The higher he had risen in the corporate world, the higher his antipathy for the media had grown. If it was not such an unforgivable misuse of vocabulary, I would say, Sisters, that Arnav Singh Raizada's abhorrence for the press had surpassed its pinnacle. Kisi ko bhi gussa aayega boss! And this is ASR we are talking about. Ghusaa to hamesha uski naak pe rehta hai (NK style) LOL

Aman has already done his homework as always :D

"Unbelievable!" Arnav spat out. Chasing an intruder–! He had some work to do on his wife. And, he would address that Button once he was done with Aman. Button tu go gayi :D

Five things ROFL  So Saale Saahib has learnt something from Jee-Ja-Ji already.

These fine touches makes your work all the more interesting :)

The marriage will be early now :D

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MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 2:57am | IP Logged
waiting for the next update eagerly..Smile

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nikita_88 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Get well soon! And I hope you had a great week with your dad! 

I have been so busy I have not been commenting much on mayahill or here. 
The build up to the wedding has been amazing... I just can't wait to see what happens and I wonder how the Yash and Anjali wedding will pan out in light of the case with Shyam. 

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