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ElenaElenor Senior Member
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 2:47am | IP Logged
'Leave me with atleast one'
 
 
The last three updates have been mesmorizing. I particularly like how you have carried on with Arnav and Khushi's story- their touch, their feelings, their love- nothing has changed but now they have both matured in their relationship, are more accepting and are familiar with each other's feelings. How his eyes speak out to her and she acknowledges what he is trying to convey- beautiful.
 
 
 
Yash and Anjali's story touches my heart. Destiny has snatched something away from them but presented them with something special- it makes you want to believe in... 'Everything happens for the best' and rightfully so. When I read about them, I can say they are made for each other.
 
 
Pari and Aman- mysterious. I still want to learn more about them before I can form any opinions of them as a couple.
 
 
 
I was away for a few days and realized how much I missed this story- update withdrawals.
 
 
Elenor


Edited by Elena123 - 19 September 2012 at 2:52am

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JalebiJane

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 5:07am | IP Logged
18/9/12

That was such a beautiful episode, Maya.

I have always loved Yash for his straight-forward, bang on nature. His statements, his gestures - they all are so charismatic.

"Leave me with at least one, Mr. Raizada."

Anjali realized that Arnav had forgotten about the child in his arms. Her Chotte was clearly ready for fatherhood.


The above lines just made me feel so warm!!

Great update!

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Loved the last few updates! I'm really interested to see the story behind how Yash adopted Boondi - Awww she's just sooo cute!
Can't wait for Arnav-Khushi and Yash-Anjali to be 'very properly married!'

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Tamai toh maru dil jeeti lidhu :D


I will come back with a proper comment in a while :)

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Awesome update Maya as always, "Can you please leave me with one?" - Very sweet. Arnav is going to make an awesome father for sure.

Aww Khushi needs to feel like a bride that was cute but seriously, she needs to come up with a better nick name for ASR...

the "Uncleji" makes me want to cringe every time, sowwie. Unhappy It sounds so unclassy for ASR, it sounds so "dehaati" if you know the meaning of the word Maya :( But again, that is purely my personal opinion Maya, feel free to use it if you like it...

But a great update Maya. I really liked the way ASR felt hurt that Khushi doesn't feel like a bride, coz he's gone out of his way to make her feel like one IMO. But he still was willing to acquiesce to her demands & needs. He is such a sweetheart when he wants to be, isn't he?? Big smile

Sorry about not having responded to your PM yet, will do so now, but if it's happening again, it is really disgusting to say the least... People have no ethics whatsoever. Sheesh!

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
@18th sept...
arnav forgot handing back boondi !
like dis change in arnav...

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Sorry for just disappearing! Given you my email ID. Lovely update!

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged


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