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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
I'm here :D Pulling an all-nighter has its advantages :)

EDIT:

Anjali's confusion and then her realization and Yash's support and slight insecurity. Ever since you said day before yesterday that you were gonna post a Yash-Anjali update I have been waiting to read this but could not picture how you would do this. And you never disappoint - like always you give a picture to our and your character's thoughts through text. 


Edited by Risha.J - 29 November 2012 at 5:20pm

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
Lets talk! Thats going to be the most interesting conversation ever. And we are already aware that both parties will be immensely satisfied at the end of it.  

I loved how you've drawn that fine line between reverent love and the love of a woman who is truly herself, her boldest self. There is beauty in both, but in some ways the latter is fuller, more flourished and strong. 

And he was prepared, Sisters - for our Doctor was no coward! - he was prepared to endure it. Even if she sobbed as if her only love had been killed, he would take it in for her sake. Oh, don't we just love the Doctor ! 


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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
You always leave me hungry for more. Only you make all the three heroins equally needed. Showing anjali to be so naive at first n thn so bold now. Nice change in her. Yash truly deserves Someone equally challenging Or should i saw RAW. Well death of Shyam at least gt the these two some time away from all, gaining in the privacy of their bathroom cubicle. The intimacy between thm was so raw the first time. I was hoping a little more exaggeration or might i say wordy description of the bathroom sex. Specially describing how anjali enjoyed the newest fantasy.
But still the last sentence got the sly smile on my face too. Our Yash is nothing if not Anjali's savior.   May it be from untrustfull shyam or the lustfull appetite of anjali. After all both have been through they truly deserve unobjected happiness in all forms.

Please dont forget our Mrs R who seems to be enjoying being a tease to Mr R infront of Boondi.

Desparately waiting for next update.

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Yash's Anjali is more of a woman than was Shaym's Anjali. 
Every man has that cell which gets triggered wherever an ex of his woman is considered. Doctor, no doubt, not a coward, but still a man... A human.
And Sometimes, conversations don't need words. They just don't..

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Damn! Missed so much!

MAYYAAA Heart

Main aa gayi LOL

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
Mayaaa the last update was perfect yaar. OMG cannot get over it!!! I love this Anjali so much and how you described her feelings towards Yash and Shyam and how much it differs. Really enjoyed it!

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 9:11pm | IP Logged
THank you for the last few updates.
They were lovely. 
Enjoyed each and every one of them.
Have a wonderful weekend off.

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
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