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-khushi- About Last Night: Email: me@mayahill.com (Page 123)

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 8:53am | IP Logged
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I'm so tired and scared and lonely. I wish Madam Boondi would share her milk with me?

Boondi would share.
She would also do the-moon-and-back embrace and kiss to comfort you.
That's the sort of heroine she is!
maya
 
we were sharing as you were speaking Embarrassed
 

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Mayaaa! I'm off to sleep. Where's my bedtime story? 

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
Maaya...

When will you start the project on Saleem?

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 8:42am | IP Logged
 
 
This is Boondi
Boondi is now awake after the fairytale night
Boondi now sits, Bondi now awaits for another one.
 
Take care.


Edited by masam - 28 November 2012 at 8:43am

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Many of you have written to ask whether I intend to continue style-serializing
-khushi-. 

And, after consulting my heart and speaking with those Sisters who are always
ready to re-align my wheels (in the most tender-Sisterly way!)----I have decided
to re-commit myself even more deeply to The Sisterhood [as a unique community]
and to further develop The Styled-Serial [as an experimental genre]. 

I want to share more-more-more of the Raizada-Malhotra-Behl Universe. I want to
excavate this captivating creature, Saleem Naqvi---and introduce you to the
heroine who will out-cool out-game out-wit him.
And, yes, I want to see a "boondi" button on the website with her own
styled-serial. 

True---a significant door is closing elsewhere, but my heart compels me to
continue. This work has worth because I feel the heart of The Sisterhood beating
alongside my efforts. 

I ask that my Sisters continue to bless my efforts, continue to GOLD HEART me,
continue to recommend the website---and I will truly try to make this a genuine
daily serial again, even if the episodes are short and arrive at all hours!

A Yash-Anjali episode WAS written yesterday and I'll edit, style and post it
later today.

Much love,
maya hill

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Sisters:

27.11.2012 episode of -khushi- is up.

Calendar is here.


Thank you,

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
I have too much catching up to do. 

High School hates me. But not too worry, the feeling is mutual. This post shall be edited to accommodate the comments for 11|27|12

Apologies. 

Edited*

Aah, Yash, Yash...I think that I have come to appreciate your Yash further more as time goes by. Your Arnav had an instantaneous charm to him; a certain quality that made him flash continuously in my mind.

But Yash...he was more subdued, not completely open to the reader as a character should be. He has an extremely earthy feel to him, and that feeling never fails to liven me up. His genteel nature is streaked with hints of masculinity that every woman finds endearing, and his intellect is at par with his compassionate nature.

What I loved was his hesitant admission of Anjali being married before she'd met him. Yes, it is not easy to let that go is it? Unfortunately, it isn't a case of "out of sight, out of mind" for him. Even when Shyam was not in front of them, he weighed on their minds precisely for that very reason. But I concede, Yash is a man who handles the scorn extremely well. 

His understanding of his newly wedded wife left me speechless, and so did your brilliant parallelisms. Amazing Maya! The coupling in the bathroom was beautiful. Explanatory, but elusive in that comfortable way. 

Aah, another beauty; Anjali. 

Her angst is painful and understandable in the same breath. To lose a man she loved so deeply, albeit not the way she has loved Yash, but a man she has loved nonetheless; how does one cope with that? There are of course, expected reactions that Society lays out for you, but I think Anjali has discovered the repercussions of following Society blindly far too well. After all, she never did question her first husband. 

She intrigues me, and so do her reactions. A temptress one minute, a blushing virgin in the other!
Oh, how absolutely delightful!

Wonderful Maya, and I really apologize for the tardy notes. But what to do, I have a lot going on lately.

Avi



Edited by dreamyshadows - 30 November 2012 at 9:41pm

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 5:02pm | IP Logged
I love this chapter, the attention to details was so endearing, Yash moving to a neutral bedroom, his fathers watch and Anajli surprising him... These two were truly destined for each other as well as very own Arnav and Khushi

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