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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 6:47am | IP Logged
11th September


Maya, we love butterflies, we love 'Jab We Met', what else do we love? Oh yes I love -khushi-, so do you. And I love you Hug Do you love 'you'?



The family doing something for Khushi for the first time collectively while she sits like a princess. Very rare indeed Ouch


"Can you do my mending first?" LOL  Maya, I am laughing like crazy here LOL



She gasped, slid the door close, and dashed to the bathroom to slip on her clothes.
 
Naughty naughty babua. No bing bing before the marriage. I am sure he will not be allowed to sleep with her in the same room tonight :D


Tradition [and cinematic precedence] requires that a singing-dancing competition must take place at some point during a wedding. 
How true! LOL


the competition would be between the two grooms. And the champion would be decided by the two brides they were commissioned to amuse this evening. Now this super interesting. Maya itna dimaag kaha se aaya? Wah it rhymed LOL


Aman: I'll sing and dance. You stand and beat a drum.

Arnav: You sing? You dance?!

Aman: Without pleasure. And, only when its absolutely necessary. Maya kindly provide us with a list of things that Aman cannot do!


See Maya I love you so much that I returned back Arnav and Aman although I had kidnapped them. Ekdum good girl ki tarah Wink
Wink



Edited by lazyleaves - 11 September 2012 at 9:31am

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
@11th Sep

Arnav and Aman Conversation - I am still ROFLROFLROFL
I am in team Arnav.


Arnav.. Arnav...Arnav..


Edited by swetha_ch - 11 September 2012 at 7:00am

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged

Maya – Was this update, good enough?

Kalyaani – pardon my French, it was f**king brilliant

Maya – Oh come on, I have done better, you agree?

Kalyaani – No, the best is yet to come, this is close

Maya – Khushi is the only story you are biased to, your word does not matter

Kalyaani – Are you questioning me?

Maya – No, but have you not read better

Kalyaani – This is unacceptable, you are good, like it or lump it

Maya – Fine, I am sorry; I don't doubt your loyalty as a reader

Kalyaani – Don't apologize, don't doubt me again

Maya – Am I that good?

Kalyaani – f**king amazing…...Maya

Maya – Alright then, what do I do next?

Kalyaani – Get down to writing the next update

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
I mother promise to you maya! Ill get back to commenting properly tomorrow. Lol.

Two words for today, esp Aman and Arnav: 'F**king Amazing!' (all women love bromance)

edited:

Are Pari and Aman inspired by Shahid Kareena in Jab we met? Pari seems like geet but dunno about Aman. Altho this i did notice that this update was very desi-filmy. So i get the Jab we met part.

Edited by Risha.J - 12 September 2012 at 4:10am

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
I am yet to recover from the Arnav Aman fuc***g conversation ROFL
The start of the part was one of the best start of this story so far. I could see/feel how Khusi must be feeling with all the preparation going around her.  I had an idea that Yash will surely drag Arnav to this sangeet competition but never thought Arnav will agree . And when he did i thought may be there is some hidden talent of singing he can do but Aman is too good man..
Aman: I don't do anything I don't excel at. You know that. Sir.
Really can't wait for Aman's performance...

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kalyaani

Maya ' Alright then, what do I do next?

Kalyaani ' Get down to writing the next update


Oh, all that praise from you, Kalyaani, and you don't even give me a day off to play!
You are a harsh task mistress, indeed!
MayaSmile

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Inked

Originally posted by Kalyaani

Maya ' Alright then, what do I do next?

Kalyaani ' Get down to writing the next update


Oh, all that praise from you, Kalyaani, and you don't even give me a day off to play!
You are a harsh task mistress, indeed!
MayaSmile
 
Na...na.. not fair...did I set a time limit? I should in future, go on then play a bit, but make the next update just as good (why bother I know it will be, as always)

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kalyaani

Maya ' Was this update, good enough?

Kalyaani ' pardon my French, it was f**king brilliant

Maya ' Oh come on, I have done better, you agree?

Kalyaani ' No, the best is yet to come, this is close

Maya ' Khushi is the only story you are biased to, your word does not matter

Kalyaani ' Are you questioning me?

Maya ' No, but have you not read better

Kalyaani ' This is unacceptable, you are good, like it or lump it

Maya ' Fine, I am sorry; I don't doubt your loyalty as a reader

Kalyaani ' Don't apologize, don't doubt me again

Maya ' Am I that good?

Kalyaani ' f**king amazing'...Maya

Maya ' Alright then, what do I do next?

Kalyaani ' Get down to writing the next update



Kalyaani! your comments are also as good as your stories! simply amazing!Big smile

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