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-khushi- About Last Night: Email: me@mayahill.com (Page 103)

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
lovely man
Saleem Naqvi .. i was kinda surprised how Arnav didnt felt uneasy like usually he feels when sum other men  praises khushi... but you cleared the Air .. Arnav looks up at him as a mentor
Wow Strong introduction
Cant wait :)

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 2:42am | IP Logged
I can't stay away from -khushi- now, can I? 

Saleem Naqvi seems very enigmatic and somewhat of a father figure to Arnav. Glad to know that despite what we adamantly believe, Mr. Raizada does have friends. Apparently, he knows about Shyam and Arnav's decision too. I am in very cautious awe of him.

Btw, I'm loving your Hrithik Roshan styleboards lately. Another man I am in awe of... How can someone be so heartbreakingly beautiful, nai?

I notice that it is the Arnav styleboards where he features... Wonder why that is. Is he your picture of ASR?

Lastly, Maya everyday I come to appreciate how much I love and depend on your work. Now that 4Lions has gone on and executed my favourite show, I cherish your talent more and more everyday.

Thank you, Dil se.

Edited:

Just finished some university presentations and headed to -khushi- for a much needed break. This episode still makes me giggly and dreamy-eyed and umm... lusty? Your description of an early morning Arnav is so scrumptious and lush. 


Edited by Risha.J - 10 December 2012 at 5:42am

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 2:42am | IP Logged
So, I just caught up with all the 'episodes'. Be sure you'll receive a PM from me very soon because I will not be able to keep it in my tummy very long, how brilliant I think Khushi is. (if you prefer an email or something else instead of a PM, do let me know) 

The characters you sketch are to die for. Like Arnav and Yash weren't enough now we have Saleem too!  I am now doomed to have severely unrealistic expectations from men in future. Sigh. 

And wow, Arnav reveres somebody? Thats a guy I want to know more about! And what was Button doing looking up media updates ? Oh and I hope she wears the Pari special negligee tonight! :D :D 



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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 3:10am | IP Logged
What a lovely intro for Saleem naqvi maya
Loved this update

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 3:17am | IP Logged
interesting update Maya..really intriguing..& Saleem's character again brought me to the edge of my seat, very well sketched...good going.. keep it up...please do continue soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..Smile 

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 5:11am | IP Logged
the way you described him made me stop re-read then read it alud, then read it aloud to my sister!
damn amazing description!!!
 
the entire paragraph regarding the type of man he is... left me wanting him!!
LOVE when you introduce new characters
 
You never repeat an idea or make this story boring!
 
seriously love it!
 
LOVE the relationship A and S have... very interested by it.
Cant wait to see what happens!

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vgedin

So, I just caught up with all the 'episodes'. Be sure you'll receive a PM from me very soon because I will not be able to keep it in my tummy very long, how brilliant I think Khushi is. (if you prefer an email or something else instead of a PM, do let me know) 

The characters you sketch are to die for. Like Arnav and Yash weren't enough now we have Saleem too!  I am now doomed to have severely unrealistic expectations from men in future. Sigh. 

And wow, Arnav reveres somebody? Thats a guy I want to know more about! And what was Button doing looking up media updates ? Oh and I hope she wears the Pari special negligee tonight! :D :D 

 
@Bold/Huge THAT IS ME!!! :(


Edited by V323 - 09 November 2012 at 9:06am

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 9:07am | IP Logged
AAAHHH NEW ADDITION. SALEEM NAQVI
 
That man is mine Mayaaa!!!!
 
HE IS MINE.

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