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OS: Deewana kar raha hain..[part 4 on pg 12] (Page 4)

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nitya

It was fun reading it.
Waiting 4 u 2 cont soon :-)
u connected d aaja nachle , hospital and rain seq and other parts very nicely.
Dd was actually was helping vd in d dance seq along wid d choreo. In sbs segment


Embarrassed...various stories keep running through my mind regarding rishbala...but i always shied away from writing them, coz i am a more technical person...i can think of concepts ..but writing stories around them is difficult...but I am finallly trying...i actually got inspired from the aaja nachele sequence...n the way Roma was lost in Madhu...n also the fact that RK had asked her to help him with his lines...I have some more thoughts in mind...hopefully you guys will like them...Wink

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 7:16am | IP Logged
awesome 

good one

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Wow...loved it dear...plz continue with next part and pm me...

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NANDY_BRU

awesome 

good one


Thank you...Embarrassed
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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dreamyjennice

Wow...loved it dear...plz continue with next part and pm me...


Thanks...n will definitely send out PMs.
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Part 2

Rk holds Madhu's hand..n she fidgets a little...n then he pulls her hard...harder than required and she crashes onto his chest...her flicks fly over her face and RK is lost looking at her eyes...but unlike previous instances, Madhu lowers her eyes and avoids eye contact'it had been the same since the hospital incident'

She was acting as if RK didn't exist'as if he didn't matter to her'she was indifferent to him'This was irking RK more than he was willing to accept'getting the media involved in all this was his way of seeking her attention'.as he had already figured out'the only thing that got Madhu's attention was her so called "family"'n he was lashing out at them hoping she would react'but alas'

A million thoughts were going through RK's head'when Raj interrupted him'

Raj: No! No RK, not like that'I know the hero hates the heroine'but it still has to look beautiful'wait 'I will show you how it's supposed to be done'Madhu darling come here'

RK just slightly raised his eyebrow on hearing this'but he didn't make a big deal of it'

Raj then demonstrated how to pull the Heroine close firmly, but yet without looking too aggressive'then he took Madhu's left hand and placed it over his right shoulder'n he took her right hand in his own'n then he placed his right hand on her waist'at this Madhu got a little uncomfortable'but no one seemed to notice this except for RK'Though this was a very common thing in the industry and he himself had done it so many times before'he still didn't like Raj putting his hand on Madhu's waist'But before he could do anything about it'Raj and Madhu started waltzing'

This was the first time the entire unit was seeing Madhu dance'n that included RK as well'though RK had heard the news coverage of the Aaja Nachele dance sequence multiple times 'he had never seen it'but one look at Madhu now'n he knew why Raj had called asking for her'

RK was completely mesmerized by the dance'.it was the most graceful thing he had seen'Raj was leading Madhu 'but Madhu was holding her own'every twirl was magical'every lift was breathtaking'her asymmetrical anarkali was flowing beautifully'

Meanwhile Bittuji appeared out of nowhere'

Bittuji: Bhabhiji nach accha leti hain'mujhe laga tha yeh uss Trishna jaisi dancer hongi'but inn mein kuch toh adha hain'ek tehhrav sa hain'.

RK, who is still lost in Madhu'just nods in acceptance'but he realizes what he just did and snaps out of it'

RK: Kya bittuji'isse aap adha kehte hain?...yeh toh koi bhi kar sakta hai'Raj'I am ready'lemme try practicing'

 

Raj stops dancing and tells RK and Madhu to take their positions'

RK holds Madhu's hand and pulls her close'this time with the right amount of strength'she comes closer to him'but yet no eye contact'getting furious RK repeats Raj's steps and puts Madhu's hand on his shoulder and takes her other hand in his left'now it was time to place his hand over her waist'he loved doing this anyway'so he gently held her on her waist'but unlike Raj'instead of starting to dance..he instinctively pulled her closer'Madhu jerked a little'n looked up for a split second'RK was just about to smirk when she lowered her eyes again'

Irritated a little'RK started leading the dance'.in the background Raj was giving him the beats'123..123'

Rk started off nice and slow'but Madhu's total lack of reaction started to get to him'n then he started to get a little aggressive'he started pulling her with force..n then purposefully twirled her swiftly'the tempo kept rising'

Raj wanted to stop RK'but the director 'who was watching from afar'stopped him'This was exactly the kind of passion he wanted'RK was getting more and more aggressive'but Madhu was still avoiding eye contact'yet his moves were so demanding that she needed his support multiple times'she never fumbled on any step'but instead of a slow ballad'the dance was turning passionate' he would twirl her away from him and then pull her closer'each time the force of the pulls kept increasing and the distance between them kept reducing'

The entire crew was lost in this dance'.no one dared stop them'all eyes were stuck on them..Raj had stopped giving his beats a long time ago'as they weren't going with the dance anymore'then RK pulled her close one last time'.n stopped'one of his hands was holding her hand..n the other was tightly wrapped around her 'pinning her against him'both of them were breathing heavy'

The entire crew, including Raj and the director started to clap'RK and Madhu looked around'finally they came back to reality'in the past few minutes the world had ceased to exist for them' finally Madhu collected herself and slightly pushed RK away'RK reluctantly released her'

 

But just as Madhu was about to move away'she swayed a little'RK immediately held her'she looked like she was about to faint'so RK touched her face to shake her slightly and he realized that her fever had come back'

He would have stopped the shooting and left for home'but already many days had been wasted'so he reluctantly called Bittuji'

RK: Bittuji..[Bittu didn't reply]'[then he bellowed] ...BITTUJI'emphasizing each syllable'

Bittuji came running'.

Bittuji: Haan chief kya hua?? [all flustered]

RK: Biwi ki tabiyat teek nahi hai..usse ghar le jayiye'

Bittuji: Jee chief'Main Chandu [the driver] koh boldonga'wo unhe ghar chod ayega'

RK: Maine Chandu se nahi'aapse kahan hai'aur jitna kahan jaye utna hi kijiye'apni akal laganeki zaroorat nahi hai'

Bittuji: Ji Chief..[little sad]

RK: [realizing that he was a bit too harsh to Bittu..] Isliye keh raha hoon'kyunki main nahi chahta ki yeh Chandu koh chakma deke sasuma ke paas chali jayein'

Madhu feels better again'n pushes RK and frees herself from his grip'RK is a little stunned'but he lets go of her'

Bittuji escorts Madhu to the car'but Chandu is missing'

Bittuji: nalayak hai sab ke sab'Aap yahin rukhiye madhu bhabhi main Chandu koh doond ke aata hoon'

Madhu just nods'once Bittuji leaves'she rests on the car'coz she is still feeling weak'.

All of a sudden out of nowhere'a bunch a reports surround her'she is trapped from all corners..n all of them are shouting some gibberish at her'

Reporter1: Madhuji, Sikhander ji ke khulase ke baare mein aapko kya kehna hai?

Reporter 2: Kya RK Sikhander ji koh kabhi maaf karenge?

Reporter 3: Apni maa se maafi mangva ke aapko kya mila?

Reporter 4: Kya RK aapko marta hai?

'

Madhu couldn't decipher much'all she heard was RK, Sikhander..Padminiji'her head started to spin again'but she held on'

Just then Bittuji returns with the keys'he tries to get to Madhu..but is unable to'after trying several times'he goes back to the studio running'

Bittuji: [shouting and panting]..Chief!..CHIEF!! CHIEF!

RK: [who was still dancing 'stops immediately]'Kya hua Bittuji?'kaunsa toofan aa gaya?

Bittuji: Chief'bahar mediawalone Madhu bhabhi koh gher liya hain'maine bahut koshish ki 'unn takh pahonchneki'par wo bahut saare hain'aur shayad'madhu bhabhi koh firse chakkar aa raha hai'wo gadi koh pakad ke khadi thi'.isliye..wo wahan se hil nahi paa rahi hain'

Listening to the last part'RK snatches the keys from Bittuji and runs out..n bittuji follows'

Seeing RK the reporters move away from Madhu and mob RK'but RK'swiftly moves through them , trying to get to Madhu'the reporters are still hurling questions after questions at him'but he couldn't hear anything'Madhu was looking as if she will faint any second'

Finally after struggling a little and with a little help from Bittuji he reaches her..n just in time'few more seconds in the sun and Madhu would have collapsed there'he takes her hand and tries to take her to the passenger seat'[RK in front and Madhu behind]

But the reporters come between them and he is unable to see her'the only thing connecting them was their hand'he shoves the reporters away and pulls her close'then he moves her ahead of him and puts his arms around her'n takes her to the passenger seat'He opens the car door for her'n once she is seated'asks her to lock the door manually'

Then he takes control of the wheel and drives away'leaving the media and Bittuji behind'

Paparazzi now close in on Bittu and surround him'they yell the same questions all over again'

Bittuji: Arrey bhai'ek ek karke bolo'aise toh mujhe kuch nahi samjega'haan batayiye aapko kya poochna hai?

Reporter 1: Sikhanderji ke khulase ke baare mein aapko kya kehna hai?

Bittuji: [all confused]..Kaunsa khulasa bhai? Kya kahan Sikhander ne?

To be continued'



Edited by expectappu - 06 September 2012 at 10:37pm

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
very well written please pm me after updating

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
Every good...well written

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