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OS: Deewana kar raha hain..[part 4 on pg 12]

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:31pm | IP Logged

MY VERY FIRST OS, PLease do read if you have nothing interesting to do...:)

Deewana kar raha tera roop yeh sunehra..

Director: RK sir the shot is something like this  Heroine will be standing there with her sister and you will be observing her from that corner of the room...n then the song will start...you will slowly approach her...and hold out your hand...she will glare at you and before she can refuse you will slowly turn to her sister and ask her to the dance to make her jealous...She will just start walking away...but you will hold her wrist and pull her close and then who deewana kar raha tera roop wala song sequence...

RK: Par main toh heroine se nafrat karta hoon..why will I want to dance with her?

Director: Sir wohi toh different hai na story mein...hero truly hates heroine so wants every second of her life to be with him, so he can make her suffer...

RK: Teek hai Teek hai...woh heroine ready huyi ki nahi?

Director: Aathi hogi sir..tabh takh aap dance practice kar lijiye...

RK: Director saab yaad rakhiye RK kisika intezaar nahi karta...samja dijiye usse...hogi woh producer saab ki beti..par jiss din RK ne project chod di...us din uski filmi career ki toh..[Smirks] Bittujiii!!! Bittujiii!!!

Bittuji: Ji Chief...kuch chahiye tha?

RK: Nahi aapki yaad aa rahi thi ..toh bula liya...[sarcastic smile]

Bittuji: Kya chief aap bhi na...

RK: Yeh story ka idea inhe kahan se mila...humare zindagi se bahut mel kata ha...Zindagi se yaad aya ...biwi kahan hai?

Bittuji: Aur kahan woh choreographer ki assistant bani help kar rahi hain...

RK: Jab se uss Raj ne uske chawlwale dance ki news coverage dekh li..tabh se biwi ke toh pair jameen pe nahin rukte...titli ki tarah mandrathi rahthi hai uss Raj ke aas pass...uske parr katne padenge...but sacchi badi moti chamdi hain...Uske MAALIK ke saamne saari sachai aaneke baad bhi yeh hi kahthi rahi ki tasveere maine nahi chapi hai...[slight anger building up...]

RK rolls his hand into a fist and flashback scene...

RK: BIWII...meine sasurji koh toh saari sachai bata di...abh tumhe lagta hoga ki hisaab bara bar...par galat...abh toh khel shuru hua hai,...aag se khelneki bahut hi buri aadat hai tumhe BIWI...[holding madhu's hand really tightly] abh haath toh jhalengehi...

Madhu: [tears were brimming in her eyes...but she didn't flinch or blink and stared back at RK] Tum apne aap koh samjthe kya ho...main tumse kahthi rahi ki maine woh tasveere nahi chapvayi...par tum kissi ki baat sunte kahan hoon??

RK: BAS!!! Biwi..scene toda toh change karo...har waqt ek hi dialogue...log bore ho jayenge...Pahele dhoka do...fir aankh mein aansoon barke bhol doon...[Immitating Madhu's feeble voice]...maine kuch nahi kiya...mein nirdosh hoon...shay shay Biwi..tumhe shobha nahi deta...tum RK ki Biwi ho...toda style hona chahiye...

Madhu reaching her sherni avatar...finally push him away and frees herself from his hold...and walks towards Maalik's room... but just then Trishna and Paddy arrive..

Trishna:  Maa ..dekh aa gayi teri bechari beti...Aayiye Mrs. Kundra..aapki ke baare mein pooch rahe the Maalik...Unhe batiye kaise aapne RK koh faasa aur..

Madhu just ignores her and enters Maalik's room and closes the door from inside...RK smugly tells bye to Sasuma and Sauteli Saali and walks out and sits in his car...

Madhu comes out after 5 mins and starts walking on the road...It's raining heavily

RK: [Sees Madhu walking on the road and lowers his window] Chalo biwi humme shooting pe jaana hai abh...

Madhu continues walking...he lowers his window and calls out again...but madhu is in a trance...he holds her hand...she comes back to reality and jerks her hand free..

RK: oh ho itna gussa..achi baat nahi hai yeh , Biwi...apne pati ke saath koi aisa vavhar karta hai kya..apni maryada mein raho biwi[smirking]

Madhu: Aaj tumne apni saari hade todh di Mr. Rishab Kundra.abh main tumhari koi baat nahi sunongi ...

RK: [Still smirking] 40 lakh!!! 40 lakh pe kareeda hai tumhe maine biwi...tum meri 9th naukrani hoon..

Madhu: Galat...40 lakh mein tumhne Maalik ki zindagi bachayi aur is wajah se main tumhare saath thi...par aaj tumhne Maalik koh Zinda hi maar diya...aur main abh woh contract nahi maanthi...

RK: Contract toh tumhe nibana padega Biwi..par agar tum baarish mein bheega na chahthi hoon..shauk se bheego...main Natraj studio mein hoon..shooting teek 1:00 bhaje shuru hogi...tabh takh pahonch jaana...nahi toh...Tick tok tick tok...[he drives off smiling]

End of flash back

Bittuji: Haan chief..yeh middle class log bade hi ajeeb hote hai. Jhoot bolna toh yeh apne maa ke pett se seekh kea athe hai. Par aapne bhi inhe kisi layak nahi choda...uss din ke baad joh aapne media koh inke peeche choda hai...inke life ki saari baatein bahar aa rahi hai...Sirf ek galti hoo gayi un media walonse...woh Sauteli behan..kya naam hai uska..haan trishna koh badnaam karne ke chakkar mein...bhabhiji ka naam kar gaye...

Start of flashback 2

News reporter: Yeh dekhiye...RK ki Saali ji Trishna ji kiss tarah naach rahi hain chawl mein...aur abh dekhiye unki laila...maaf kijiye ga...biwi...woh bhi shuru ho gayi...shayad yeh inn behonoka shauk tha...yaaa shayad...yeh mohaleke ladko ko lijaneka tareeka tha...

Aaja nachele dance sequence...

RK: [Watching this in his exercise room]...bittu ji inse kahiye..abh RK ki laila uski BIWI ban gayi hai...zara adabh se baat kare[smirking]

Bittuji: Ji chief!

RK is running on thread mill...n he switches off the television...still smirking

Bittu's Phone rings..

Bittuji: Hellooo...oh haan Raj ji..ji kahiye...chief zara busy hai...kya !!! aapkoh bhabhiji se baat karni hain?? :O

RK stops running abruptly...

Bittuji: Kyun? Aap koh bhabhiji ka dance pasand aaya...aur aap chahte hai ki woh RK ke film ke liye aapki assistant bane...parr meera ji koh kya hua? Oh ho...unki pair mein fracture ho gaya...teek hai mein chief se baat karke aap koh call karta hoon...haan ji...ok byee..

Chief!!! Aap yakin nahi karenge Raj ji kya keh rahe the...

RK: Maine sab sun liya...shayad yeh accha idea hoga...Yeh Raj toh sabko daath tha rahtha hai..

Bittuji: Haan chief...[mumbling to himself] kabhi kabar toh woh aapko bhi nahi chodta...

RK: kya kahan bittuji

Bittu: Kuch nahi chief...toh mein haan kar doon?

RK: Haan kar dijiye..

End of flashback 2...

Raj: RK!! RK! Chalo practice kar lo...iss song mein meine waltz aur ballroom dancing ka mix daala hai...Madhu heroine ke aane takh tum uski jagah le lijiye...

RK: [smirking and mumbling so only bittuji can listen]...Heroine..yeh toh heroine ki maa bhi nahi ho sakthi!!!...parr abh ayega mazaa...

Raj: RK tum uske haath koh yun pakdoge...fir usse apni oor keechlena..

Rk holds madhu's hand..n she fidgits a little...n then he pulls her hard...harder than required and she crashes onto his chest...her flicks fly over her face and RK is lost looking at her eyes...

So guys, how is it?..this is my first attempt at writing anything creative ever...so be a little lenient...I don't know the correct way of separating moods and actions...so I have tried my own way of doing it...please do comment...n let me know if you liked it or hated it.:)

P.S: please pardon the typos'ADJUST OK PLEASE!! ;)

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Updated the next part...hope you like it..

Part 2 (Page 4)

Part 3 (Page 8)

Part 4 (page 12)




Edited by expectappu - 13 September 2012 at 1:57pm

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
btw...hindi to english writing conversion mein agar koi galthi ho gayi ho...toh...bachi samaj ke maaf kar dijiye...:)..

btw..this isn't the complete OS...I will continue if you guyz are interested...


Edited by expectappu - 05 September 2012 at 9:49pm
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Nice =)

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by adventure_gurl

loved it


Thanks...Embarrassed...btw corrected some typos...which creeped in due to word..Big smile
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Originally posted by TheDarkKnight

Nice =)


Glad you liked it...Embarrassed

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awesome..
waiting for next prt

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
yes, write the next part -- RK lost in M's eyes but doesnt want to accpet that she is having an effect on him :)Heart

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