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SS - What happens next? (My take) (Page 3)

mighty01 Newbie
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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 2:26am | IP Logged

superbly written...in fact I think you must be this shows lead writer...summoning up all the characters just perfectly...just wish they had shown the actual show the way you had written...

but in fact everything was written in such detail that everything was just like a moving picture in mind...thats the hallmark of a good writer...once again hats off to you

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 4:08am | IP Logged
very well written, thanks for this beautiful write up. I read he entire write up from start to finish without any pauses. ClapClapClapClap

You deserve a hug Hug

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Dear friend Jonaki,

First things first. You are an excellent writer. It was pleasure reading, thank you so much you have responded to my request. Thank you sooo much for the writeup.

Frankly speaking Mohan and Megha conversations were very well written. Situational and mature. Ek baat kahu, you are diehard Mohan fan. So am i. I could sense it in your writing.

Mohan Megha reconcile is well written. You retained the NBT feel althrough.

Indu ko jo jatka diya. bahut achha laga padke. Mmast hai.

Megha ka simplicity aur uske jasbat ek dum sahi dala hai. kuch usparbhi reham karthi tho shayad aur thoda achha lagta. wo kya hai na main Megha ko bhi utni hi pasand karthi hoon jitni Mohan ko.

Megha ek aisi character hai, jo jaldi maane ya manane walo me se nahi hai. Ye agar tumhe yaad hai tho Nanhi kehti hai apni spiderman se..ki

"meri mummy thodi different hai. Itni jaldi nahi maanthi. "

"Agar mummy gussa hai tho maan bhi jayegi tum chinta mat karo"

par agar hum gaur kare wo jab bhi kisi se pyaar kiya tho use ji jaan se nibhaya. socho kitni muskile sahi usne bhi. Remember Guru ye baat kehtha hai Mohan se. During Rashmi case.

"Bhaiya Megha didi dosti ki hai tumse tho kitni achi si nibharahi hai na"

wo har rishte ko nibhana jaanthi hai. chahe kuch bhi hojaye. kitne bhi muskile aaye wo kabhi nahi jhuki. starting se dekhlo, uska swargwasi pati Amar, phir uska court ka phaisla, apne maa aur papaji pe uska vishwas. Sanjay ke prati uska vyawahar, wo maafi maangne chaligayi us ghadhe jaise aadmi se, jab ki uski khud ki koi galti hi nahi thi.

Renu bhabhi jo hamesha tane deti rehti hai, kabhi palat ke jawab nahi diya.

Aur jiji, wo usko tho apna maa hi maanthi hogi, jo har baat usse aake batadeti hain. Dukh main ya sukh main.

yahan tak ki uski friend Prerna, uske liye bhi usne koshih kiya cheeze sudharne ke liye.

Aur apne Mohan ko wo jab jaana, uske jaan ko jab khatra thi, tab bhi wahi thi uske jaan bachane main.

I think the list will go endless for Meghas character.

Mohan se jab use pyar hua wo kabhi bhi nahi jataya, wo Mohan ke liye sab khushiyan hi chahi thi.

Mohan aur Megha ka pair na kuch khatta aur meetha hai. jab ye do mil jaaye na tho kya baat hai, zindagi ka mazaa aajaye.

Overall your story writing is fabulous. Thanks a lot once again. Clap

Sach kahu, aaj NBT ka episode nahi hai na, par aisa lagtha hai ki humne ek bahut hi achhi maha episode aaj dekhliya hai. Jo hamere CVs ke bhi  bas ki baat nahi thi.


Edited by naina2010 - 06 September 2012 at 6:44am

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
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Wonderful!!!!!
Read the whole story in one go...and I loved it. Very beautifully penned down. While reading I could visualize the story...and it really touched me. Mohan - Megha's turmoil and Guru's repentance...so well written. You should write more. I'll read your stories even if NBT gets back on track (hoping against hope Ouch)
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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Hello everyone,
Thanks so much for reading my short story. I really appreciate your comments, and thank you for being so encouraging.

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