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FF: Paper Roses [Chp 17, Pg 76] 10/07 (Page 65)

ManmarziyanTeri Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by diyadivya

hatsoff arnav
shyam u nvr in ur wildest drmz hav thought ds wud happnBig smile
awsum updt
hav bn catchng up vth ur ffs 
awsumly wrttn 
plz do pm me fr futr updts 

Yep! That boy is hot and smart Wink LOL.
Thank you! And hope you like the other ones too! xx

ManmarziyanTeri Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arnshi

ah finally an update and too a wonderful one...superb ...uff another cliff update very soonLOL

Aww thank you! 
Haha! Dude this FF is incomplete without cliff-hangers Wink LOL x

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ManmarziyanTeri Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shijinareneesh

Look look who is here...after a long time...welcome back lady...
That was a fabulous update and a lengthy one too...not complaining more welcoming...though we know nothing gng to happen to Arnav,still were scared,guessing its Akash who on the otherside...
And now one more MU ,now by seeing him there she will surely think about him wrongly,poor girl her brain is in deep mess...but Arnav is there to correct the MU right???so here we waiting for the next overdose(btw Arshi together never be overdose)of Arhilicious update...soon soon soon please...

Lol thank you thank you, it feels good to be back LOL
It's Aakash on the other side? Are you onto something there? Wink 
That's true, I'm actually so happy that it's back to Arshi again now, I hate to write Arshiless updates but I guess I can't set the scene without keeping them apart :( *humph* 
Thank you for this! xx
ManmarziyanTeri Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
Oh god! It's been a month since I last updated! I don't even know why! Like urgh time is flying! It's times fault! I blame time! LOL
Sorry guys! 

Anyways here you go... First a lil (very slightly long) note...

Now I know this isn't the most favourite of stories out there and I probably don't have as many readers as I expected for this one. But I've decided to keep on updating it instead of throwing the "either comment or I'll never update this again" line at you guys.

I'm genuinely really really thankful to all of the lovely readers that appreciate it and have stuck with it. I love you guys so much! And thank you for taking the time out to leave your amazing comments (for all of those that do). 

This is probably the only story that I have where the plot came to me from the beginning to the end. Like I've got it all planned and I just don't want to cut it short abruptly and want to write out the whole complete story. 

But I do have a request, if you do read this story and you don't comment then I request that you please do. As much as I want to keep writing this, regularly frequent updates will be difficult if there is decreased interest towards it. So please please comment if you like it. Thanks! xx

...And now that we've got that out of the way...

Update anyone? Arshi anyone? 


Chapter 16 - Of Promises That We'll Keep


We are made to break

but it is in the pieces 

we will find ourselves.

- Tyler Knott Gregson


They both continued to stare at each other, their equally confused gazes battling against each other. Her hazel spheres began to drown in the tears that welled up in her eyes and he had to use every brink of control he owned from preventing himself from kneeling down and wiping them away. 

Khushi watched in shock, unable to draw breath, unable to swallow, her throat felt parched, her words left in a heap somewhere in a dark corner of her mind. All of her thoughts were conflicting, her heart pounded away in her chest, echoing in her ears, drowning out everything else. She didn't know what to make of this anymore, of him, of her, of where she was. Her past and her present were intermingling with each other, confusing her all the more till she wasn't sure of what to think, of what to believe; her heart or her mind. 

There was too much that stood against him, she'd seen too much and yet her heart refused to believe any of it. It was stuck on that Arnav that she'd known all those years ago, the one she had sneaked sugar-free jalebis off to, the one that always protected her and she wasn't ready to let go of that Arnav.

He bent forward quietly, without uttering a word, his face somewhat devoid of expression as he attempted to mask his every feeling and emotion. First he would have to allow her to let it all out, all of her misconceptions and judgements and only then would she be empty and ready enough to hear the truth.

She glared at him, her soft hazel eyes taking on a darker edge, he was playing around with her. It was probably one of those mind games that he had learned through the years and she wasn't going to give into it. She flinched slightly as his hands moved down further, as the cloth over her mouth fell and his fingers reached for the knot at her hands.

"What are you doing?" Her voice was calm, on edge, the fact that she was still confused clear in the tone of her voice, the feel of his body so close to hers sending down shivers down her spine.

"Untying you," he replied quietly, his voice not giving anything away.

"Why?" She questioned again.

He took a deep breath in, then let his eyes meet hers, they were unnervingly calm, on level with his, unflinching.

"Well I can't carry you on a chair, so I thought it'd be easier if I untied you," he stated matter-of-factly, as if it was the most obvious thing.

She blinked several times, unable to fully comprehend him as he kneeled down and undid the knots at her legs. She ignored her instinct to stand up and make a run for it and instead watched him. He was tall and muscular, with a lean frame. He wiped the dust off of his black combats and then his t-shirt.

"What do you want from me?" She finally questioned, she couldn't be bothered playing around the bush, she wanted answers, she wanted him to at least defend himself.

What was happening? Arnav was lost for a little while, where was the Khushi that he had been expecting? The one with fiery eyes and screamed out questions? And who was this woman with a calm demeanour that had replaced her? He was taken aback and lost for words for a few seconds.

He sighed, moving back to watch her eyes once more, inquisitive, large hazel spheres, dark long lashes, she was breathtakingly beautiful. He gulped, trying to think of words to say, he was never good with them and right now if he messed up with so much as one syllable she would surely jump to more of her conclusions.

Finally taking a deep breath in he decided to just go with the first thing that came to his mind. "Trust?" At first it was a question, as if he was actually speaking to himself and he watched as her brows furrowed in confusion to that. "I want you to trust me," he finally stated, his voice a barely audible whisper and she felt herself leaning forward of her own accord.

"I don't... I don't understand," she struggled with her words, completely taken aback.

He sat back a little then, watching her for a while. "I...I don't know if you remember," he swallowed and looked down at his hands as he spoke, "years ago, I made a  promise to you, when you were known as Chutki and we were both really young."

She stared at him with her eyes wide, she didn't know where this was going and she wasn't sure of how to react.

"I promised that I would always protect you," he finally said, his voice almost a whisper, "and I guess, all these years later, I'm finally getting the chance to keep that promise," a slight smile spread across his lips as he spoke those last few words and looked back up again to meet her eyes.

She felt her breath catch in her throat, her thoughts scatter into fragments and she was sure she had forgotten the functioning of her own limbs. She was drowning in those chocolate brown puddles, the ones that she had been so used to. She could still remember the tinkling laughter and the innocence hidden in those words.

She had been getting bullied by a couple of girls at school, they'd ruined her lunch for several days in a row and she'd finally given in and gone ahead and told Arnav.

They sat on the wall that ran around the large tree at one end of Arnav's house, silent tears were trailing down her face as she narrated the story to him, her small floral dress swaying against her knees to the beat of the wind. She kept on clasping then unclasping her small hands, she wasn't a coward but she wasn't much against bullies either. 

She was trying to move away from hiding behind the shield that was Arnav, but she had finally given in. 

She heard him snap another thin twig between his fingers then pick up another one that had been lying at the roots of the tree. She watched him for a few seconds from the corner of her eyes, he looked angry and she wasn't surprised. They'd always had this unspoken agreement, he had always protected her and maybe he felt that she had wronged him in some way by not telling him. 

"I told you so that you could tell them off, not scowl at me," she muttered under her breath and his head snapped around towards her. 

He glared at her for a few seconds before speaking. "You'd agreed when you started school that you'd tell me everything," he said making a face and she understood immediately, that was why he was angry. 

"Okay fine," a small smile adorned her face now, her eyes lit up. She moved her hand over his and let her fingers rest there. "I promise to always tell you when I'm troubled or in trouble, happy?" She smiled as he considered her for a few more minutes. His lips still set on a scowl. 

Sighing he too finally gave in as a corner of his lips lifted, "and I'll promise to always protect you," he stated, the truth of that statement not lost in the sincerity of his eyes. 

"Promise?" She held out her little pinky finger. 

"Promise," he accepted, wrapping his pinky finger around hers. 

She felt slight tears prick her eyes as she considered his words, the very same sincerity in his eyes and she couldn't deny him.

He continued to speak though, he really badly needed her to trust him. "I know that the situation isn't perfect, that you have a lot of questions and I have a lot of answers to give."

She continued to sit there, in that same position, as if he had never untied her, lost in his words and his eyes.

"And I will give you them," he promised, not breaking eye contact for a second, "you just have to know that you can trust me, that there is nothing in this world that I would not forsake to protect you," he didn't even know where his words were coming from but he was glad for them.

She gulped, she hadn't been expecting this, she didn't know what to do.

"Please Khushi, just until I get you out, until you're safe..."

"I trust you," she mumbled quietly cutting him off, tears brimming the edges of her eyes.

"... Until I have you somewhere where..." He stopped mid-sentence, he'd almost missed her words, "what?" He questioned, his voice low.

She nodded slowly, "I trust you," she said it again, her voice a sort of whisper.

"Thank you," he said, a gentle smile spreading across his face, as smile that made Khushi shed the last remaining shrouds of guilt, a smile that she had always been able to recognise.


Inder Jha sat on his armchair, his hands folded together as if in prayer at his lips as he considered the situation and his son's reckless doing. It had been one mistake after another and now clearly he had landed himself in this mess by trying to complete two jobs at the one time.

"Shyam," he finally began to speak, Inder Jha was an old man now and the weight of his age resounded off of his deep voice. He moved slightly forward in his chair, letting their eyes remain level with each other. "I am not sure you understand the importance of these two tasks," he finally stated.

"Of course I do father," Shyam protested, attempting to justify himself but Inder simply waved him off.

"I do not care Shyam, I do not have time for any of your reasons. This is the time, we are reaching a peak, once we get the dice rolling the rest will fall like dominos," he tried to explain.

Shyam's face twitched as he attempted to mask and control his anger. Why did his father not understand that he was trying?

"But father, they are onto us, they know of our every move, what the hell am I supposed to do?!" He demanded, losing all sense of patience.

Inder slammed his hand down on the coffee table suddenly, making the contents of it and the glass rattle. "You are supposed to do one thing at a time!" He exclaimed.

"Forget the girl! The girl is not important right now! What is important are the attacks! Seven weeks, seven days, seven ATTACKS! We have it planned! Your nonsense with that useless girl is getting in the way!" Inder continued to scream till he was almost out of breath.

Shyam ground his teeth together, "if we do not get the girl father, they will have evidence to convict me," he spoke through gritted teeth.

"SHYAM!" Inder was now furious, his son had always been impulsive, dangerous yet over-confident and that would one day lead to his downfall. "You will do as I say! I will deal with the girl!"


Arnav fixed the bluetooth to his ear as Khushi came to stand next to him, "now I want you to trust me and listen and do as I say until we get out. Is that okay?" He asked, not really looking at her for fear that he'd see something he wouldn't want to again.

She nodded slowly, still not quite sure again how she felt about all of it. But she had no other option but to trust him, her heart headed none of her other choices. Those words weren't new to her, she'd heard them many times before and she'd always trusted them, so why not now?

He held his hand out then, his eyes catching her gaze before he dropped his eyes and looked away, waiting for her to take it, to give him permission.

She stared at it for what felt like a long time, the roughened skin, the darkly etched lines of his destiny before she finally placed her tender fingers then her hand over his.

He was sure he stopped breathing for a few seconds, the small weight of her hands causing his heart to race and gallop, but he had to focus on the mission at hand before he lost himself completely.


"We are good to go!" Aman's voice came through the other end. "I've bypassed all of the cameras so unless any of Shyam's f**kers have the brains to detect me and hack me out we're good to go," he stated grinning to himself.

Arnav's fingers went around Khushi's hand of their own accord as her eyes glanced between his face and their intertwined hands, how perfect it looked.

"I've got you down this end," NK's voice came through, "I've got Kamal pretty much out cold for a good few hours so I'll take the tunnel and you take the main exit," he instructed.

"Got it!" Arnav agreed then began to pull at Khushi's hand before coming to a stop again, causing her to collide off of him. She looked up instantly, her eyes wide as she felt him stiffen, an unknown emotion momentarily flicker over his eyes before he regained his composure.

"Er.. Can I have your dupatta?" She stared back, her eyes wide, why did he want her dupatta?

"It'll lead them off of our trail," he said, trying to convince her and without another word she pulled it from around her neck and handed it over to him.

He let his fingers sink into it for a few seconds, the soft material of it, he had one very similar to this with him, he'd always had it, it was the only memory of her that he had.

"NK get me as I come out, I've got Khushi's dupatta, leave it in the tunnel," he instructed.

"Aha! I like it! Arnav you are such an intelligent Romeo," NK smirked as Aman laughed in the background.

"Shut up!" Arnav warned through gritted teeth.

"Okay okay cool down there baby, you're going to scare bhabi jee," NK laughed again.

"NK I'm not going to warn you again!"

He showed the door open nearly slamming it into NK, as NK jumped back just in time.

"Dude! Don't kill me just yet!" NK exclaimed then looking over at the girl behind Arnav, waved to her, grinning like an idiot as Arnav continued to glare at him. He thrust the dupatta into NK's hand, then walked past him, pulling her with him.

NK watched them for a few minutes before he too pulled Kamal out, she was beautiful, her small frame, her large eyes and her quivering lips. No wonder the stone hearted Arnav was so smitten over her.


NK climbed back into his SUV and dialled Arnav's number, still watching the wisps of smoke in the distance. 

He picked up on the sixth ring, the fact that his mind was on other things clear from his tone of voice. 

"That's it done Arnav, I'm heading back to Shyam's den," he let Arnav know. They both hated killing innocents but it was something that had to be done, it was a part of their job. 

Arnav nodded to himself, not at all new to the distance in NK's voice, it was the worst part of the job and somewhere it stabbed him even more that this time he'd done it for his own gain. 

"Thanks NK, I owe you one," he said as a slight smell spread over NK's face. 

"Usually I would have said no dude don't worry about it but since you don't owe anyone anything usually, I'm going to keep it in mind," he chuckled as Arnav smirked back. 

"Right I'll let you go Arnav, you take care of your damsel in distress!" And with that he ended the call. 

Arnav looked to Khushi one more time, he'd been stealing glances at her all throughout the journey. There were so many aspects to her that were still the same, her small button nose that always gave her blushing away, her large inquisitive hazel spheres, her small petal lips. 

There had been a time when he had known her like his own heartbeat, when fears had been few and their ears had echoed with their own laughter. When she had trusted him without words and he had taken it for granted. But those times were now well in the past, to her he was a stranger, probably no different from the men that had taken their worlds and turned them upside down. But he had to convince her that he was still her Arnav, Chutki's Arnav that had vowed to always protect her, that had always read the qualms in her eyes. 

She had to know how much he yearned for her, how much he had regretted not turning back round all those years ago, how much he needed her. 

He would have to convince her because to live with her thinking of him as a monster would be a life half lived. 

He eased the gear stick into second and took the exit to the left. 

Khushi's eyes widened suddenly and she nearly jumped out of her seat. She tried to piece together the memories as the wrought iron gates came into full view, the paint slightly peeled, the gate slightly ajar. 

She could never mistake the large oak tree in the distance, she had found herself here, drawn to it of her own accord a couple of years ago, when the memories had become too much to bear. 

She turned around suddenly, her eyes clashing with his gaze. They were both thinking the same thoughts, their memories had become one, this was the place where they had first become friends. 


It's been a long time 

since someone looked at me that way. 

It's like you knew me, 

and all the things I couldn't say

- Together, The xx


Now you know what to do...

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swatim318 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 6:30pm | IP Logged

first of all sorry for the late edit... too tied up now a days... ufff, i never knew that finding a job in the UK is such a pain in the ___ ... big challenge...

neways, coming to the update..

ok out of the line... but u know what thought came to my mind when i saw ur update PM for this story...  "kab se is pyaasi zameen par paani ki ek boond tak nahi padi, aaj yaha toofaaan aayega.."WinkLOL if u know what i mean eh...WinkWink

oh what a relief... wheeewww... khushi doesn't think him as her kidnapper...

like arnav.. even i was keeping my fingers crossed...would she say that she trust him.. and she did..Embarrassed

i hope everything goes fine between them... soon enough..

aarrgghhh... this shyam... i hated him already.. n now his father... God what are they planning... Seven days Seven attacks..(nail biting)...and his father told him to leave khushi matter for him..ConfusedShocked.. now what????? God I am soo worried...

I LOve Aman and NK.. they are sweethearts... what wud arnav do without them..Wink.. hehehe.. NK is hilarious...i hope they have good bonding with khushi too...

wooowww what a dupatta idea.. kya dimaag hai bande ka (i mean pinks kaWink).. smart eh...

hey woowww he took her to their memorable place... n khushi remembers this place... awww... i m sooo looking forward to the next update yaar... plz dun take a month to update this time.. pretty please...

oh the update is over like a pooof.. i know it was long but it felt like it ended as soon as it started.. i need more arshi... puleeejj...

awesome continuation of the story dahling...

and thanks for the pm...

and ya once again.. JALDI UPDATE KARNA this time...(pleading...)


Edited by swatim318 - 17 September 2013 at 4:40pm
swatim318 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DropofDew

Aaahhh! Swati! I'm sure I've said this so many time but I love you sooo much! You make me blush with your lovely comments! I can't appreciate you enough! Like literally you leave me grinning like an idiot! Embarrassed

I read your comment whilst walking through town and I started walking around looking like a psycho, smiling to myself! LOL See what you do to me!

I love you! Hug

Loolll "aasmaan se tapka khajoor mein atka" LOL that's so funny and it's so apt as well! Haha!

Yep Shyam's father is a gangster, it was briefly mentioned in like the chapter before this one. Shyam's father used to smuggle weapons along with Arnav's father and he was the one behind the murder of Arnav and Khushi's parents. 

Looll! Okay here you go, yeh wala update has oodles of Arshi ;)... Only Arshi! Well of course with the NK-Aman duo, how can I forget them eh? LOL And of course a bit of the psychotic Shyam, just so that you guys know that he's still around you know Wink LOL.

I love you too! I'm sure my updates are incomplete without your awesomely fantabulous comments! 


I know u love me honey... Tell me something i dunno..WinkLOL

ha ha.. did u really... awww... welll i am glad i made u smile though sweets..

oh yeah.. sorry for missing tht imp point (shyam's father).. just went thru tht chapter..

wooowww... oodles of Arshi..Dancing... oh i can handle NK-Aman.. they are sweethearts... but shyam,..Angry no comments...

well.. i cant resist commenting on ur stories honey, u write soo awesome... but yaa lately havent been able to go through Asya Fic update.. wud do that too soon, promise.. (they are nt arshi u see.. not my faultWink)

now let me read the update... comment on the update... well on my above comment..


Edited by swatim318 - 13 September 2013 at 6:42pm
beenish248 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Speechless pinks Smile
superb update Clap
oh how much i love nk and aman .. They both r such a sweethearts i love them ( little less then my hero Arnav LOL )
I want ko kill that shyam arggghhh Angry
Another cliffhanger ...
eagerly waiting for next update ...
shreya11mehra IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Another cliffy update. ..
 I love dis part..

VEry nicely written...

 Dn a superb job

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