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FF: Paper Roses [Chp 17, Pg 76] 10/07 (Page 38)

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 9:25am | IP Logged
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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 5:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dreamyshadows

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For the record, I hate the woman above^. Just kidding. I love her because she's just amazing. Still, she took my place -.- 

Anyhoo,

Oh my god, this was so blastedly amazing! The way you wind the mystery is just bloody brilliant Pinks! Its like I think I know where this is heading but because you write the thriller aspect so well, I dont know half the time!

Hmm, Arnav and Khushi's reactions are just so bloody interesting to read about. Although I do feel bad for the both of them, especially Khushi. And not to mention, you've done a stellar job describing her feelings. Well done!

Angelicaa..ab inke baare mein kya kaha jaaye? Confused

Please dont tell me something will happen to my poor Khushi baby! I hope she'll be fine! Cry

WAIT WAIT WAIT

THE WHO THE WHEN THE WHAAA????

Woman, Angelica is Anjali? HIS SISTER? 

Daat deni padegi Pinks. Wah wah Clap Amazing! In no way did I see that coming. f**king brilliant mate Big smile

Shay, you took my place. W*F? -.-

Loved it Pinks! Great job hon Smile
Avi

*Edited again:

NEXT TIME THE FIRST SPOT IS MINE OKAY SHAY? YEAH. OKAY.

Lol! LOL Shay's stalking skills have improved! She's too fast! 

Aww thank you so much! Hug I'm glad I'm able to catch you out Tongue.

No no don't worry I don't think I'll be that evil to her... but hmmm... let's see.

Bwahaahaha! Tongue yes Angelica is Anjali! Haha! 

Avi! Thank you so much! It really means so much! Aah I love you! Thank you! 

Hug Heart xx

P.S. Shay, Avi is not happy LOL. I'll let you res first when Shay updates (hopefully soon Tongue) okay Avi? LOLxx

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shay1990

You sly devil you!!!

I'm going to start from the bottom, because this just HAS to be mentioned first.

Angelica is Anjali?!?!
And... Is she a hooker?

That's some big ass twist right there lol. I really don't know know where to start Pinks... The whole chapter was just so intense and so amazing.

I feel so unbelievably bad for Arnav right now (I now officially love himEmbarrassed) He built himself up to the brink of telling her; his restlessness was so unbearably cute that i just wanted to hold him. The way he couldn't let her go, just kept a hold of her as he willed himself to tell her - i love how in that moment he was once again so completely ready to give in to her.

His torment when NK told him about Angelica/Anjali... He's literally so torn at the moment, and this was so clearly portrayal via his thoughts at the hospital. He has literally gone from being in his safe haven to a hell in the matter of minutes and it was so heart-breaking to read Cry

And i don't know what Anjali has supposedly done - but i love that Arnav can put everything aside for her, no matter how much he tries to convince himself that he doesn't care. It really does show how much of a decent person he is. Thus enforcing my earlier point of the fact that i am now completely in love with his character Hug

Oh my, bechari Khushi... Where to even begin??? The poor thing has literally waited years for him; who she's been yearning for and it comes out like this. It must have hit her like a brick to the face lol.
To be in such an intense moment with a man that you think might be the love of your life, and then BAM - NK comes along and confirms this, along with the horrifying reality (for her) that he may be in love with someone else. It's like finding your life and having it taken away from you straight the way Disapprove
Like, we all know that Khushi has nothing to worry about Wink but i really do feel for her. Her first and foremost happiness lies with the fact that she has finally found him, and you can tell that she really doesn't blame him for anything. She's even reasoning wit the fact that he could have potentially found someone else. I love her sincerity - it's so endearing. Poor thing is so torn as well. Her happiness and heartbreak all rolled in to one.

There's one thing I'm confused about though... Anjali with a letter to Khushi? From Diya Nayak?
What does this mean Pinks?? Another mystery??

Why do you torture us like this Cry Does this mean that Anjali has something to do with her affiliation with this whole situation?

This was honestly such a brilliant chapter Pinks. You've managed to show the pain that all 3 characters (Arnav/Khushi/Anjali) hold, so beautifully. Everyone is in pieces right now, and it was depicted perfectly.
I don't think i need to tell you that i will be eagerly awaiting the next update Wink

And a further LOL to Avi down below LOL It's so on next time LOL

Amazing update Pinks... You know i love you right? Embarrassed Hug
Shay X



Looll LOL yes bwaha! Angelica is Anjali! Haha! 
And yes she is a hooker well high class escort.

Aw thank you so much Shay! Hug

Aww yey! You love Arnav! Aah that makes me so happy! I'm glad that everyone's seeing him through his layers now because I really wanted to get that across. 

NK ruining the moment just at the right time LOL (btw I was planning to make it Aman but he always seems to ruin RabbaVes in the actual show so I changed it Tongue)
Aah! I love the way you've put that! "Safe haven to a hell" that's just perfect!

Anjali has attempted to commit suicide, I'll actually explain it in the next chapter but yeh that's what she's done. Yey! You love this Arnav! Dancing If only he was real :( why can't fictional characters become non-fictional? LOL

NK basically gave the mans identity away, foolish NK LOL but see I just wanted Khushi to find out on her own because now she has a chance to step out of that peaceful state she's in Wink. Okay too much info, I'll shut up Tongue.

Yes! LOL it's also supposed to sort of clear the confusion, but I dunno if it came out that way :S. It's supposed to show that Diya and Khushi are in fact two different people Wink. And the rest of it I will reveal later.

Aww Shay thank you so so much! I love you and your awesome comment! 

I am actually going to try and update this one a bit quicker, I've created so many twists in this story that if I wait out a bit longer I'll probably end up confusing myself LOL. 4 FFs on the one go was possibly not a good idea Tongue

Aaah! I love you! Thank you thank you thank you for this lovely comment! Hug Heart

And aw poor Avi I'm sure she'll find some way to beat you next time LOL

xxx

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonia_92

his SISTER? Dear lord. there's a shock and relief. phew. so we can safely assume now that anjali gave up her happiness to assure arnavs happiness?

LOL yes! She is! Tongue

Hmm well she sort of did but there's more to it than that Wink
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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 6:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shamin1

OMG angelica is anjali... whoa!! what a mess...but i love this mess...now khushi can't run away plz...khushi dear at least wait for an explanation...but i loved it and eagerly waiting for more...c u n happy diwali

Happy Diwali!

I'm sure Khushi will give him a chance Wink 

And thank you! 
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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shagun05

gal u surely know how to keep me awake after each update by making me think about the cliffhanger again and again!!!!
but so good chapter! now khushi knows that the person is arnav and i wonder what will come next now
lovely chapter...
thanks for the PM and HAPPY DIWALI!!!!!!!!!

Lol LOL I know way too many cliff hangers in this one but if I don't end it on cliff hangers the updates just become way too long and then I can't even proof-read them properly Tongue
Thank you so much!
And happy Diwali to you too! x
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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DropofDew

Originally posted by dreamyshadows

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For the record, I hate the woman above^. Just kidding. I love her because she's just amazing. Still, she took my place -.- 

Anyhoo,

Oh my god, this was so blastedly amazing! The way you wind the mystery is just bloody brilliant Pinks! Its like I think I know where this is heading but because you write the thriller aspect so well, I dont know half the time!

Hmm, Arnav and Khushi's reactions are just so bloody interesting to read about. Although I do feel bad for the both of them, especially Khushi. And not to mention, you've done a stellar job describing her feelings. Well done!

Angelicaa..ab inke baare mein kya kaha jaaye? Confused

Please dont tell me something will happen to my poor Khushi baby! I hope she'll be fine! Cry

WAIT WAIT WAIT

THE WHO THE WHEN THE WHAAA????

Woman, Angelica is Anjali? HIS SISTER? 

Daat deni padegi Pinks. Wah wah Clap Amazing! In no way did I see that coming. f**king brilliant mate Big smile

Shay, you took my place. W*F? -.-

Loved it Pinks! Great job hon Smile
Avi

*Edited again:

NEXT TIME THE FIRST SPOT IS MINE OKAY SHAY? YEAH. OKAY.

Lol! LOL Shay's stalking skills have improved! She's too fast! 

Aww thank you so much! Hug I'm glad I'm able to catch you out Tongue.

No no don't worry I don't think I'll be that evil to her... but hmmm... let's see.

Bwahaahaha! Tongue yes Angelica is Anjali! Haha! 

Avi! Thank you so much! It really means so much! Aah I love you! Thank you! 

Hug Heart xx

P.S. Shay, Avi is not happy LOL. I'll let you res first when Shay updates (hopefully soon Tongue) okay Avi? LOLxx

I KNOW AND I HATE HER FOR IT. Jk. She's the love of my life B) 

Mehh both you and Shay love the suspense, hena? -.-

Dont say that Pinks! You're amazing and you know it :')

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
Wo What an update.. SUPERB...!!! Clap

Continue soon honey...Smile

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