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FF: Paper Roses [Chp 17, Pg 76] 10/07 (Page 34)

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shay1990

WHY???

Why would you do this?!

Why would you leave us with such a delicious cliffanger???

Cry

But moving on' This was one hell of an update. Shitting hell, you had me hooked from the first line, right up until the very last word.

I have so much praise for you right now! Clap

My favourite part this time was the way you depicted the way in which Arnav just forgets his inhibitions and just squeezes her hand. This bit was portrayed so beautifully. Such a simple action, yet you've managed to put so much feeling behind it. You managed to show just how much this simple thing can mean to someone. I love the way how at that moment, Arnav just doesn't care. Their connection just seems so pure and so deep. And the way Khushi instantly feels at ease when she feels this. *Sighs* Day Dreaming I love how you've made their relationship so serene and simplistic, considering their chaotic lives. You really make their love (so far) seem like a safe haven.

Secondly, I LOVE LOVE LOVE all the action when they intercept Shyams deal! Holy mother of f**k Pinks, it was so amazing! This is why I love this FF' It's bloody well got everything!!! And also because I love action man Arnav (what a man he is Day Dreaming) And with this in mind, I'll move on to the fact of Aman.

I love Aman in this!! I literally laugh out loud at his dialogues! I especially liked the NK/Arnav/Aman convo towards the end.

This line: "Yeh you mean like the fat-bellied man that you shot down," 

Coupled with Arnav almost choking on his drink was amazingly done! Aman is the best!!!

So, now on to the main part. When Khushi tends to Arnavs wound'. WOOOW! Words cannot express how beautifully this was written out. The sheer passion that ALREADY seeps from them is just... Wow! I love the way Arnavs resolve just breaks completely when he hears her say: "You know showing your pain doesn't weaken you,"

It's like he can't hold it in and longer ' which is perfectly timed considering Khushi seems to be going manic sensing the similarities between Arnav and Arnav.  This is so exciting Pinks.

So I think I should stop there' but I won't.

Because Angelica??? This is so intriguing yet so confusing! Am I missing something? Or is this one of the hints you were mentioning? This chest?? What is in it??

Ok now I am definitely stopping' Because I'm falling asleep lol Ouch

No more words, just remarkable. Clap

(And that I can't wait for the next update) LOL

Mwahahaha! Because I'm evil Wink LOL and aahh I just get so tempted to leave cliffhangers for this one! 

Aww thank you so much! Hug

Aah spot on! This is their safe haven I want it to be what keeps them going in life, what gives them strength and lets them fight back for what is right. I'm so happy when you guys catch onto these little things because oh dear lord I get so excited when these thoughts just pop up into my head. And yeyy! I'm so so happy that you like the hand squeeze. Through that one action I wanted to depict his trepidation, his insecurities, his mind over heart rational and then Khushis own securities, her own fears but then how it finally happens and they both just let go.

Aah thank you thank you thank you! Heart
Haha! I think that was actually one of the sole purposes for starting off this fic in the first place; to imagine Arnav, his bulging muscles, his calculative mind all put into action. I dunno there's something just too hot about imagining Barun Sobti as a government agent shooting people down! Mwaha LOL

Aman! I love Aman too! Well I love all three but Aman is the clear favourite Tongue. I love writing out their banter. Big smile

Aww thank you! Big smile I found it quite difficult to get the Khushi treating Arnav scene out of my mind properly at first. Like I knew the way I wanted it to go but I had no freaking idea as to how to actually put it down. But finally after hours of writers block it's there and I'm so glad you like it! 

And yes Khushi is going to like bust a vein if she does not find out soon! Lol

Yes yes! It is one of the hints! Big smile and oh I have so much planned with this hint for the next update! Tihihihi!

Shay! Thank you so so much for your amazing amazing comment! I love you! But you know that LOL. I get so happy reading your comments and they mean so much! Hug Hug Hug

Lotsa Love your way!! xx

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhadraprasad

Awesome update...Was he going to reveal he was Arnav...Thx for the PM

Yep Smile x
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 94pranjali

Loved it!!Big smile
Yay...i hope Arnav finally tells her the truth!!
Update soon!!Smile
Waitin fr the nxt part!!Big smile

Haha thank you! I'll try to get it up by tonight :) x
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rainbow_petals

wow i was feeling like all these things were happening in front of me
wow amazing writing.. don't have word to describe how much suspense and thrill your words create in my mind
i hope arnav will tell her all things,..
still clueless about angelica thing..
and yes coz of sprinkle in... and this one i have started considering aakash negativeLOL
update soon..
thanks for this supe brilliant update..

Aah thank you so much!! Big smile
Tongue more of the Angelica mystery will be revealed in the next update Wink
LOL aw no! Actually about Aakash in this one hmmm... his character hasn't properly been revealed yet Wink so ya never know :P. 
Thank you so much for your lovely comment! xx

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 5:04am | IP Logged
happy to read this..
good you are continuing.. Big smile
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by the_breeze

How woman, how do you manage to find such AWESOME & APT quotes EACH AND EVERY SINGLE TIME???????? Confused Just what do you put in Google's search bar eh??? Wink Cmon share your secret with me, I mean there has got to be some skill that you have which helps you find such great quotes and even more fabulous pictures' Every time on your blog, whether it be A Sprinkle Of Stardust or Paper Roses, the image you have put up with the chapters is just so correct and fitting that I am simply left stunned at the perfection you portray' Kudos dear'. Clap

  

See this is what I LOVE! Arnav's inner conflict, his need to comfort and protect her, but at the same time he understands the consequences of that and also keeping in mind his current job at Shyam's place he realizes that telling her the truth might not be the best option at the moment' This turmoil, this tangled mass of emotions is what makes your writing such a pleasure to read Thumbs Up' Coming to Khushi, a part of her doubts that he is Arnav but no matter what her subconscious knows the truth, has sensed it and she refuses to feel afraid in his presence and implicitly trusts him with herself' Such unsaid emotions are just so realistic and tangible that it just pulls you into the story and makes you feel what the characters are going through'. Approve

 

*Squeals in joy and excitement* ooohhh I LOVE THE HOUSE!! I LOVE THE HOUSE!!!

Hug  Dancing


The entire para of what happens when Aman walks up to them and what he sees the two doing subconsciously, his comparison of the two and his final conclusion just left me SPEECHLESS!!!!! It was that good dear' that good' I applaud you for the brilliant writing in that one para which is undoubtedly the highlight of the update for me'. Clap Clap Clap

 

The minute the door shuts behind Khushi, Arnav turns into this Bond style, gun wielding, (HOT AND DROOLWORTHY) cop!! Boy am I in heaven imagining Barun Sobti in that scene!!! He becomes all business and directly steers Aman to the problem at hand' The way the guys casually joke about Aman's  death being a spanner in the works was just so fun and relaxed' I have said this before & I will say it again, the camaraderie the guys share in your FF is simply lovable!!! Heart

 

Ohkay, the creep just got creepier' What the hell did he do to Diya?????????? Angry Dead

 

The entire fight scene had me on edge man! That was very well written, the anxiety, the tension, the sheer need to get the other side out of the picture was so well'. Even after such a day, NK can joke around, see this is what I Love about your characters, they all have their hearts in the right place'. LOL

""Sometimes I get worried NKs trying to seduce the enemy. Way too much gel on a boy that's going out to battle," Arnav added in just as a can was flung his way and he caught it right on time, ducking slightly."  HOWLARIOUS!!! ROFL

 

 

The way he can't seem to form coherent sentences around her is so cute Embarrassed' Awww she tends to his wounds for him, am I sensing a deeper symbolic meaning here????? Also now that I think of it, what was with Angelica and the trunk??? Does it contain her belongings from the past???  Shocked

 


Awww the moment they shared at the end was simply adorable' I loved this update' I tell you the pace of this FF is just amazing' I hope you get well soon, thnx for the update dear (even though you weren't a 100% fine) Heart

 


Lotsa love and take care Hug

 

 


LOL! LOL That's my lil secret Tongue kidding :P I actually have tonnes just written down. Most of the ones I've been using lately are Tyler Knott Gregson ones and I just get them off his blog. My other quotes are usually out of poems or books I've read. So yeah too much time! Too much time! LOL

And the pictures yeh just random tumblr flickr trolling Tongue I have tonnes of those just saved too :S :P. It's quite sad lol. But thank you so much! I love your appreciation of my quotes and images! Hug

Aww thank you! I love conflicted Arnav (as you probably can tell from both A Sprinkle of... and this one) LOL there's just something about a man confused of his emotions and actions that gets me going LOL. Aw thank you so much! You know I always love reading your insightful comments! How you just analyse everything perfect to the T! Aaah I love you!

yeyyy!!! Dancing I love it too!!! AAhhh! I saw it and was like! Omg omg omg!! This has got to be Arnavs house! Like he just has to have a cool house! Too much 007 I tell you! LOL

Aw thank you so much! I'm so happy that you like it! Big smile and this is why I love Aman because there is so much that I can write through his character. And yes it's also something I've always wanted to do; describe the differences in the two characters. Even in the show you know they are complete opposites but I wanted to describe that in more detail. So I'm glad I've done something right Big smile.

LOL as I mentioned earlier, I'm currently on overdose of 007! Like I've watched Skyfall too many times and it's just making my imagination run wild LOL. Haha and ikr! Barun Sobti, all sweat, blood, guns, in action shooting down the bad guys! Aaahh! That was one of the sole purposes of this FF! Lol so that I could imagine Barun Sobti doing all of that! He just needs to do an action drama sometime in his career! 

Aah I'm so glad you love their banter! I love writing it out!

Hmmm.. Wait and find out? Tongue

LOL NK is just so hilarious and everything I think about him just comes out with the comedy factor attached Tongue. Yes they all have their hearts in the right place. 

LOL a tongue-tied Arnav! Poor thing :P. And deeper symbolic meaning hmmm... Wink :P.

Angelica and her trunk carries with it a future revelation... Next update Wink

Thank you so so much!! You know I love you and your amazing comments! Honestly! When I see your name with a comment I get so excited and happy! Thank you thank you so much!

And I'm all good now hun thank you! Big smile

Heart Lotsa love! Tc ! Hug xx

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shamin1

cliffhanger...cliffhanger...i m sure the ever disturbing aman or HP will ruin the moment...hey m not givin any ideas...i so wish she comes to know he is arnavEmbarrassed

now coming to ur writing dear...what more should i say...i salute u for the details u go through while writing...it makes it more vivid and exciting...i get lost reading ur FF...please continue and update soon...Big smile

Cliffhanger indeed! LOL Loolll no no you haven't given me any ideas but it won't be Aman or HP this time ;P. 
Thank you so much! Your comment really means a lot! xx
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Suchi.P

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OMG OMG OMG!!! Please please please tell me that he is gonna tell his chutki that he is her arnav!! I don't want my hopes to break!!!Broken Heart
Love NK and Aman, they soo bring the humor and fun in Arnav's life and now his Khushi will being the smile and happiness and love, hopefully!!Day Dreaming
I loved how she didn't hesitate or question him before helping him in dressing his wound because trust me if I saw that I would faint, 1. due to hotness 2. due to the condition of the guy in front of me and 3. due to hotness Blushing Wink

Thanks for the PM and my my you did update fast! I never knew you will take me 'update soon' so seriously WinkLOL Well now that you did I will say next time 'update sooner'Wink

Suchi x

:( sorry if that happens this time round hun but *wink* *wink* you have to give Khushi a chance to find out on her own? What would be the fun in him telling her? :P. Okay giving too much away! LOL
Aah I love Aman and NK too! And yes Khushi will bring all that is missing into his life... soon..

LOL tbh so would I, just out of the hotness that I imagine would be emanating off of him. Aaah *drools then faints* lol

Aw I'm so sorry this one is taking it's time :(. I've just had so much work piling up lately. But will try to get it up by tonight Wink 

Pinks x

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