Posted: 30 October 2012 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by the_breeze
Originally posted by DropofDew
OMG, praise the lord that you like OPTION 2... Personally I was hoping for that one... Man am I relieved
... Awww, thnx for the response to my comment dearie... And I feel happy that I have got a Arnav style hint!
So am gonna put my detective brain to work and figure this one out!
Hmmm... The chapter begins wonderfully, with Arnav having flashbacks and realization dawns on him... It's such a feel good chapter that I can't describe how glad I was that finally he knows who she really is and why it's more imperative that Shyam never reaches her... His emotions when he accepts what his heart has to say are simply beautiful dear... I mean especially this para:
"He moved his hand away again, his fingers still unwilling to let go, they carried with them the urge to touch her, to never let go, to interlock his fingers through hers and keep them in that embrace forever. He wanted to take her into his arms, kiss away her every worry to listen to her for days on end, watch the features of her face as it changed from word to word, the tiny changing intensities of the light that sparked in her eyes every time she spoke. But for now he had to make sure, although he knew it he had to make sure."
Aman is a darling yaar! How I wish I could give him a bear hug for being sooo darn helpful and perfect in timing... He has all the answers !!!!
Basically he is the info guru! Whatever you need details about just give Aman a PC and an internet connection and you are good to go!!
I simply love the camaraderie the guys share in your FF.. Their reactions and statements are simply hilarious yet realistic and that just adds to the charm of this FF...
Aman's reaction was justified and Arnav's reaction just blew me away... You have a talent for portraying emotions very accurately and it just amazes me how you make me feel what the character might be feeling at that point of time... Great work dear...
Hmmm, his sudden change in demeanour has caught Khushi off guard but she knows that she is safe with him and follows him without much questioning... I love the bond these two share... They dont require words at all, their eyes and heart do all the talking and it's just adorable to read...
So, my brain isn't upto it's usual decoding speed and hence am not making any guesses at all right now but rest assured I will... I just wanna say that the pace of this FF is fantastic and I love it... Please continue soon...
thnx a ton for the PM dear! take care and lotsa love
I think I would've landed myself in a huge mess if I had gone with option 1 so yes I guess I should be relieved too
Awww omg thank you so so much!
I just love you! You know that was just one of those paragraphs where everything just seemed to flow right and I was actually so happy with it. I can't tell you how happy I am at the fact that that specific one was the one that you like the most!
I absolutely love Aman! I will send a bear hug his way on your behalf
. Haha omg! That's perfect! The guru of info indeed! Aww thank you!
Yep the Mallik Murders - there's obviously a lot to it that'll unravel bit by bit but yes a bit too much Criminal Minds these days and this is what it does to me
. And yes the incident obviously shapes a huge part of their characters right now accompanied by what they were like to start off with. Through this I always want to portray that their past is only ever a distant memory and how they have moulded as people as an effect of it. It's of course taking on from the show and this optimistic outlook that Khushi always has towards life, it's just amazing when someone is like that and I wanted to bring that forward through this so I love the fact that you love this aspect of Khushi! :D
Awww thank you that means so much!
Aww and yeyy! You've put it exactly right! It's clearly evident that there's something there through their unsaid words and actions despite te fact that Arnav's just found out and Khushi still doesn't know.
Aaahhh I just love love love you and your AMAZING comments! Thank you so much! They never fail to put a smile on my face!