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FF: Paper Roses [Chp 17, Pg 76] 10/07 (Page 27)

bhadraprasad IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:10am | IP Logged
Awesome update...Thank god ,Arnav finally realised it is his Chutki...Thanks for the PM

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archa2810 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
at least arnav knows about khushi now

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dva2vra IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged

no words to comment

i mean the way story is growing its interesting

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PastelBeauty IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Great chapter. Well written Smile

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the_breeze Goldie

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DropofDew

Originally posted by the_breeze

Awww dear,  I was so touched by your response to my comment!!! Made me feel very happy!! Hmmm, ok I'll let you keep the Angelica suspense for longer. Terrorism eh??? Hadn't gone down that road. Confused

The interaction on the car was simply adorable, less of words, more of emotions and I gotta say I love it when these two are left alone... Their feelings are much more prominent and strong at that time... He unconsciously knows it's his duty to protect her, she has realized that he is the one from her past... they both feel a connection but both are reluctant to act on it, both have their insecurities and problems, both are under immense danger, both are in it together yet they are apart... Aahhh, I am a goner!!! Day Dreaming

Oh my, Shyam is gonna bust a vein.. Man he seems totally deranged here.. Oh I hope Arnav is able to keep Khushi away from the psycho pervert Dead Angry Censored

OMG dint see that one coming' Damnit HE WAS MARRIED??????????????????????????? Aiyyo, this aint good at all. She resembles his WIFE??? Oh why did this have to be sooo twisted. This is not good. Pinch

Go AMAN. I salute the man for being so quick on his toes and finding out such valuable info in timeClap

Ah he is disarming her eh??? Oh I like his moves!!!!

HE BROUGHT JALEBIES FOR HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That flashback was so damn adorable yaar! I mean even as kids, he was protective of her, trying to keep her happy, telling others off for hurting her, bringing the smile back on her face.Oh my, that was a good clarification dear, that she dint have a proper name while growing up, that's why there aint no record of her till age 12, coz that's when she was adopted leading her to get a new name and a new identity Smile

WHAT THE HELL?????? I just make the connection that Chutki is Khushi, Arnav thinks Khushi cant be Dia, Khushi and Arnav share a past, Shyam's wife was a Nayak, Nayak was Chutki's surname, that just leads me to two conclusions: 

1.   Chutki is Khushi, Khushi is Dia, Memory loss in the accident and etc etc

2.   Khushi had an elder sister/twin who looked exactly like her, whose name was Dia, who married Shyam and our Khushi hasn't been tainted by his shadow till date 

So it's either of the two, it's up to you to tell me which one Is true! Oh my that rhymed!!!! Great story dear, just update soon soon soon LOL

Thnx for the PM sweetie! lotsa love Heart

Aww I absolutely love your analysis of Arshi together alone in the car. See this is why I could forever write FFs on Arshi, there are just such prominent layers to their characters that I can mould and re-mould them in all sorts of ways in stories. I also love writing about them when they are alone, it's just always easier to bring about the stronger aspects of their emotions without outside interference, you know whilst their in their own little Arshi bubble. 

LOL Shyam's demented, now that there is one right psycho. LOL I'm sure our boy will give his best Wink.

Because my own twisted mind is working on overdrive LOL. But I'm sure it won't turn out too bad Wink.

I love Aman! Lol I think if I wasn't so in love with Arnav (well Barun Sobti's looks) I'd have made Aman the lead Tongue. He's just too cool man LOL.

Oh dear lord! Aah I do love your brainstorming sessions on these comments! Yes yes yes! I wanted to include the name part in somewhere where it wouldn't be that clearly obvious and you've got it spot on! She wasn't given a name and then people just stuck to just calling her Chutki and hence why he doesn't know who Khushi is. The rest of it and his revelation will obviously be wrapped up in the next chapter, so wait for it Wink
And I'm glad you like the flashback, I really wanted to show how strong their bond had been, especially from his side and you'll see why with future updates Smile.

Hahahahahaa! That revelation sentence of yours actually takes the cake! LOL
Okay so lemme give you a hint, an Arnav sort of hint Wink;
She was twelve when she was adopted in by the Guptas who were the ones that changed her name to Khushi. They adopted her in straight after all that happened in the past, so at the age of twelve again. If she had been called Diya before that then that would have sent alarm bells ringing in Arnav's ears. Payal knows of Shyam and that he is Aakash's boss and yet took Khushi to that event when she knew he would be there. Khushi has been living in the same city for eleven years.

Wink wink nudge nudge, that was Arnav's little message to you to sort of put you out of this dilemma. 

I like the second option *wink wink nudge nudge* again. 

Thank you so much for the lovely comment again! I get so excited on seeing your comments, I've told you that already though right? Tongue
And I love your assumptions which always tend to flow in the right track! Damn it, it's difficult to catch you out! LOL

Take care hun, lotsa love! Hug Heart

OMG, praise the lord that you like OPTION 2... Personally I was hoping for that one... Man am I relieved LOL... Awww, thnx for the response to my comment dearie... And I feel happy that I have got a Arnav style hint! Wink So am gonna put my detective brain to work and figure this one out! 

Hmmm...  The chapter begins wonderfully, with Arnav having flashbacks and realization dawns on him... It's such a feel good chapter that I can't describe how glad I was that finally he knows who she really is and why it's more imperative that Shyam never reaches her... His emotions when he accepts what his heart has to say are simply beautiful dear... I mean especially this para:

"He moved his hand away again, his fingers still unwilling to let go, they carried with them the urge to touch her, to never let go, to interlock his fingers through hers and keep them in that embrace forever. He wanted to take her into his arms, kiss away her every worry to listen to her for days on end, watch the features of her face as it changed from word to word, the tiny changing intensities of the light that sparked in her eyes every time she spoke. But for now he had to make sure, although he knew it he had to make sure." 

Aman is a darling yaar! How I wish I could give him a bear hug for being sooo darn helpful and perfect in timing... He has all the answers !!!! LOL Basically he is the info guru! Whatever you need details about just give Aman a PC and an internet connection and you are good to go!! Tongue
I simply love the camaraderie the guys share in your FF.. Their reactions and statements are simply hilarious yet realistic and that just adds to the charm of this FF...Clap

So now we get a teeny tiny bit of info about what happened in the past, the Mallik murders eh? It even SOUNDS gruesome... She was a witness to that, that too at such a young age??? No wonder she had to run away from people all her life... But I gotta give it to her, even after all this happening to her, she continues to live life so happily and normally, boy she has guts and gumption... It aint easy to let all that go and start life anew and I applaud Khushi for being the fighter she is and living life with such positivity and cheer... Clap Approve Cool Thumbs Up Heart 

Aman's reaction was justified and Arnav's reaction just blew me away... You have a talent for portraying emotions very accurately and it just amazes me how you make me feel what the character might be feeling at that point of time... Great work dear... Wink

Hmmm, his sudden change in demeanour has caught Khushi off guard but she knows that she is safe with him and follows him without much questioning... I love the bond these two share... They dont require words at  all, their eyes and heart do all the talking and it's just adorable to read... Embarrassed

So, my brain isn't upto it's usual decoding speed and hence am not making any guesses at all right now but rest assured I will... I just wanna say that the pace of this FF is fantastic and I love it... Please continue soon...

thnx a ton for the PM dear! take care and lotsa love Hug 

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shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:55am | IP Logged
finally read all the chapters.. too good.. waiting for Arnav to tell Khushi..

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casker IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Awesomr update.

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Reader_Hobby Goldie

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 10:04am | IP Logged
An emotional chapter to say the least. Well from Arnav's perspective anyway.
I think that he would've helped Khushi anyway as he was doing before he actually found out that she was his childhood best friend. Chutki. Sweet name. Arnav wears a mask, but he does have feelings and emotions which do show thorugh it at times ... Smile
I'm glad that Khushi sees the truth in Arnav's eyes. Beautiful.
Anyway, thanks for the PM.

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