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She took perfect decision.

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awesome update

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i m sooo happy. good lesson 4 maanEvil Smile

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Part 28


It was one week and now Maan could take no more.


Maan picked his cell to call her when he was returning from university. Whole day, he was today missing er like hell.. each day was increasing his restlessness, the want to tell her what he feels was increasing, he wanted to make her feel secure.


But again remember his promise and kept his cell back.


Another one week passed and this was now getting on Maan's nerve.


On the other side it has almost been 20 days for Geet in India. She was getting love and care from both families but her heart was not at all at rest.


Restlessness was unbearable when Yash's call came the other day


"What PC, you had said he will come soon. He will break his promise and listen to his heart but see he has not yet come. This idea of taking promise from Maan was really bad. You know how strong minded he is, he will not break promise."


"Calm down Senorita, just few more days, I will not say anything but you will see for yourself. Woh pyar he kya jiske liye saare haden na paar hoon… let him break all his rules. Have faith in your PC for once."


"Keeping faith in you is costing a lot to me PC. And you know, I am not able to concentrate even a bit. I can do nothing with him being far from him."


Geet was cribing and disconnected the phone. Later she went for shopping to divert herself.


It was 6pm when she returned home, with packets in her hand and the moment she entered she froze for moment, packets automatically dropped from her hand.


He was sitting between whole family.


Maan had reached home almost just after Geet had left for shopping and since then he was just waiting for her. Neither could he say to family how restless he was and how impatient he was becoming with each passing second. He just tried to be normal and meet them after so long but his mind and heart all were lost.


He did not want to call her as he wanted him to see in real first.


"Geet Beta" said Dadima and Maan's eyes immediately went up. His heart beat were erratic inside and it was getting tough for him to show his normal faade.


"Maa-aan" Geet said after a while. Till then there eyes were just locked.


And she ran towards him, Maan automatically got up from his seat. Geet came and hugged him tight while Maan was still lost.


After unbearable two weeks of separation, she was in front of him. He had no regret of breaking his promise. It was getting impossible to keep the promise. He would make them all up but he badly needed to see her now or else even breathing was not bearable.


He wanted to crush her, but ended up giving light hug in return. Maan was man in control, this was in built in him. He would not show his feeling in front of all. He so wished he could at that time.


Vicky the suddenly said "What Bro, you are answering Geet's enthusiastic HUG with such a light one, not fair."


Geet suddenly separated and instead of getting shy got angry on Maan


"Vicky Bahiya, don't expect more than this from Maan"

Maan felt offended with her statement but also at the same time felt, how much painful it was that she was used to his not expressing or returning her feeling.

"What? Bro is like this with you? Comeon, you guys are newly married…"

Geet saw confused look on Maan and soon realized things were coming to their relation

"I mean, sabke beech." She managed

At that very moment, he wanted to take her in private and tell her, how he felt and she can expect more from him. So much to say but family were gathering them.

Annie was talking non stop. Geet and Maan both were dying for private moments but it seemed impossible as family were so excited and his mother was all planning what to make for her son and his Dad who was busy telling Maan how irresponsible he was, running away from family and responsibility.


His dad badly wanted Maan to join Khurana enterprise, he knew one day he will but Maan's not agreeing to it always took his patience away. So he did not want to leave the chance when Maan was here. He immediately took off and came.

And unlike all dad, he was here not to show love but to lecture him. Maan was his perfect copy after all.

Man sometime was getting restless, wanting to hold Geet's hand from side, pull her near him but he could not in public. The man he was stopped him to do it in public, that too before he confessed to Geet.

Geet – as now Maan was infront, she felt so secure, he was there that she was ready with all her complains and stories ready for him.

After dinner, Dadima saw how Maan was every now and then looking at Geet.

"Now everyone, let Maan take some rest..aur baten kerne doo sab in dono ko bhi "

The moment they reached their room Maan closed the door.His heart beat racing with abnormal speed. At last he was there with her. But before he could say anything Geet hugged him, Maan hugged her tight this time, feeling the relief of finding her alone.

"I am sorry" "Sorry won't work. I am not talking to you" and she took her night dress to change.

100 butterflies were in her belly that he was there at last. She can say anything, while Maan smiled, at last he was here for her, to pamper her to show his care and love..

Love!!! , he shake his head with smile at that thought. He did not care that he was not like himself, he just loved this feeling, something which made him feel so lively from inside.

Geet went and stood near window, looking outside "you are really very bad" bu she did not knew he reached behind her. Maan was not hearing her complain.. they were just like swet melodies to his ears while his eye was fixed on her soft white skin peeking at her shoulder.

Maan lifted his hand and hesitatingly was about to touch her bare skin… it was with different feel with which he was going to touch her for first time. Something was running up and down his body… so with this slow process by the time he would touch she turned and he immediately folded his fingers…

"You are not even replying to my complains… chaddo you care nothing" with this she jerked his hand that were about to touch her and went and sat on bed with pouted lips.

Ohhh how sweet she looked, he was still lost in her act rather than her real complains. He looked at his hand which his wife had jerked and smiled. How madly he has missed her. What was more pulling him more, her cuteness or his desire for her was tough to decide for him.

He went near her, knowing he have not heard any of her complain he tried to do damage control…

"Bohoot naraz ho" "loo abb yeh puch rahe hain"

Geet was about to take her sheet and sleep when Maan held her wrist.

Next: Maan abb kuch bol bhee do

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Maan broke his promise...

PC u rock!

Maan came to geet. Wow!

Maaneet wanting sum private moments... Ab lag raha hai dey r newly weds.

Maaneet hug was too gud bt vrrry short.

Geet strts her train of complaints.
Sab yaad krke rakhaa hoga achhe se.

Haaye! Maan trying to move ahead, to touch her in "diffrnt" manner...
All moments were so cute, actually fo fute.

Plzzz conti sooon.
Maan bolne wala hai aakhir.
Pta toh chale maan manayega kaise geet ko? Wo bhi family ke beech rehte huye.

Strted waiting fr next :)

Edited by sekhonpuneet - 15 September 2012 at 5:02pm

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Abby-GC-Crazy IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 5:01pm | IP Logged
omg omg omg omg omg
Anu di...
honeslty, this is all i feel ryt nw...

gosh... thruout the update i had that tickling sensation in my stomach... hehehhee...
This is what is called subtly portraying innocent love...
there ws absolutely ntg...
nt even a physical touch...
but yet the feeling n bond ws sooo mesmerising and tickling...

it was such an awww moment for me.. wen Geet hugged him tight n he hugged her light bcz of evry1s presence bt as soon as they wer alone he hugged her tight...
this connection made butterflies jump in my stomach...

I was sooo blushing wen Maan ws all lost in his wify...
this is srsly INNOCENT LOVE...!!!!!!!

sooo beautiful Anu di...
sooo cute n mesmerising...
love you... Heart

Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 15 September 2012 at 5:12pm

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Oye hoye maan Latoo on his mishti
Mishti all complaining but maan more
 is all caught in mishtis jadoo
Not fair to end at his point this update
Not fair 

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awesome update 
loved it 

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