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SwaRon OS :The return gift (Page 5)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged
rutu!u are a awesome writer!!the OS made me smile right from the start!!i loved it hw sharon got jealous frm the economics topper n shoving off her anger showed him the answers!!den the part wen she decides to leave behind the thought dat he didnt wish her bt stil goes behind to look for him n comfort swayam!it wud really be great if u continue this!!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sudha-SK

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Me first Cool
Rutu Hug  this was super awesome OS.
Loved all the classroom antics of Swayam. Sharon's thought on what he would have done if not study and Swayam's insight on why he would wish her the last was a nice touch. 
Sharon's mop gesturing anger and just how immediately Swayam opened the surprise fearing more trouble and the kiss that followed was cool. But it was really not fair on Swayam's part to not wish her at all..

SudhaHug
Thanks for the comment.Big smile
Well about Swayam wishing her late, I had a personal experience of the same. And to tell you frankly I still remember my birthday where my friends had wished me late night and then we had a blast. So even Swayam must have planned something memorable for herEmbarrassed 

Originally posted by -swaron-

 
love it 
poor Sharon ... swayam didn't wish her on her b'day 
and that kiss ... hayee 
but still he didn't wish her 
lovely os

Thanks for the commentBig smile.And wishing her late, our philosophical Swayam had decided to wish her late, so that she will remember the day for her lifetimeEmbarrassed

Originally posted by Nehal92

aww!! Rutu Hug
i had smile plastered on my face all the time i was reading it!! 
i just love your work!!
keep posting regularly !! :)

NehalHug
Glad my OS made you smile while reading. And also for the lovely comments. Will definitely write moreEmbarrassed

Originally posted by surbhimathur

Res 
*edited*

Lol amazing onee rutu! Thumbs Up
swayam's antics in the class were hillarious! LOL
and he's sucha jerk..he didn't wish sharon and den he's telling that he was preparing a surprise for her! and to the top of that he also revealed dat he's gonna call her at 11.59!  Goshh..boys!! LOL
but it was cute..romantic..fun..sweet! Embarrassed
all together a really nice work!! Star


Thanks SurbhiHug
I know Swayam revealed the surprise and also told her the timing for the same. BoysLOL
Thanks for the comment. But as I have mentioned he did really plan for her birthday and made it memorable for herEmbarrassed

Originally posted by marauder

Amusing piece of work I would say. Swayam's character was really interesting in this and his philoshphy was definitely not for mere mortals like us. LOL . I loved how you developed the plot but the best bit was definitely the classroom antics of Swayam. It was awesomely penned. I loved how you included almost every emotion in just an OS. Loved it.

I know Swayam reason for wishing her last truly described how unpredictable he isWacko
But as he reasoned he wanted to make her feel special that day and remember it for her lifetimeEmbarrassed 
Thanks a lot for the comment Shishir.

Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Awesome os...:)

Thanks a ton SadiyaBig smile

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tanukaswaron

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unres  Embarrassed

RUTU Hug
Awesome os rutu !!
fantastically written Clap
loved swayams antics in the class .Big smile
sharon getting jealous by seeing swayam cheating from another girl was funny LOL
bechari sharon , swayam will wish her happy bday at 11.59Ouch but he has planned some suprises which is good Big smile
keep showering ur wonderful os's on us...
thanks for the PM.


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Thanks for your always lovely commentsEmbarrassed I know Sharon would allow him to cheat from her, but not from any other girlLOL
And no worries even though he is wishing her late,he will make sure that she will remember every bit of it.Embarrassed

Originally posted by Nirju99

awesm

Thanks a tonBig smile

Originally posted by ShrutikaSwaRon

Awesome os...sharons way of giving a return gift amazing...luved vicky n swayams part...it was hilarous...n swayams idea of wishing sharon last is grt...n jealous sharon n her expressions r perfectly described by u.

Thanks a ton for the comment Shrutika.Embarrassed Glad you thought Swayam's idea of wishing her late was great. And jealous Sharon is a treat to watch and read as wellLOL 

Originally posted by nature2

 

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Luvsd3

awesome os rutu...so economics topper in trouble...want to copy...luvd it...swayum vicky prt ws entertainig...swayum and his philosophies...amezing wrk rutu...and the kiss litrally added more flavour to os...
do write more..!!

HimiHug
Thanks a lot for the commentEmbarrassed
I know economics topper this time was not thinking about topping the test but had to scrape through itLOL

Originally posted by ---Priya---

Rutu lovely OS...
Swayam's class antics were really funny LOL the vicky scene was hilarious.. ROFL he was writing the wrong answer and swayam who was copying from him knew that it was wrong  ROFL
awww... how swet.. he wanted to wish her the last Embarrassed
Swayam loves a subject which i hate the most LOL
thnx 4 da pm... 


Thanks a lot Priya for the commentEmbarrassed
And about Swayam copying from Vicky, although he didn't study he could make that Vicky was writing the wrong answer for the wrong questionLOL
And you know even I didn't like the subject back in schoolStern Smile

Originally posted by -Nia-

This was so cute Rutu! Swayam's EH antics were hilarious.
And Sharon's jealous of Amelia.LOL
This was well written.
 
Thanks for the PM.

Neha Hug
Thanks a ton for the comment and jealous Sharon makes her look more adorableEmbarrassed

Originally posted by kool kanz

ur ff's cant be ignored rutu...awsum 1...sharon gettin angry n jeolous..i just love her wen she does dat...n poor swayam test ke liye pada nahi aur upar se birthday suprise bhi outCryCryCryplzzz update soon...thanks for d pm..SmileSmileSmile

Thanks a lot for the lovely comment. And test ke liye Swayam didn't study but he will pass because of the return gift that Sharon gifted him(she showed him the answer na)Embarrassed

Originally posted by nature7

superb

Thanks a lotBig smile

Originally posted by drooler

beautifully written rutu

Thank a ton Big smile
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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Jum-RulzZ-

 Res !! 
Excited to read it!! Hold on... ! 

-UNRES- 

Rutuuu Hug
Hats OFF!!!!! 
Now the concept was different, the story was different, the title was different! and OMG! everything seemed perfectly new to me, and i enjoyed every bit of it, ok! now seriously.. to tell the truth! I was stuck up studying this subject the whole night from yesterday till morning now!! after returning from college, And wanted to chill out over the AT and simply read some OS's or FF's.. when i popped in, and when i saw ur Pm, i went like "Yippeee rutu finally updated an OS!!!" now i was super super super super super Excited to read it! and when i came to know that they were all in the exam hall, and that too on the subject that i just Left! had suddenly popped in with SWARON!! den i was like HELL.. SWARON FOLLOWS ME!!!! and i was bored studying my subject, but now! after reading this.. and when i assumed the fact that the subject of the test is "ECONOMICS". i Started laughing hysterically, clutching my stomach and being unbearable to stop my laughter, That was because of the situation i was  running through, It was the kinda the same, for me! haha.. i loved the part when sharon got jealous of swayam staring at Amelia! :P Lol lol lol.. ahem! somebody is furious! 
and most of all..
I Loved the way you expressed each of their doings, swayam's part was way funny here! and sharon's hahaha.. stuck up in the jealous line! Oh darn!! hated the fact that swayam had to spill out the surprise, i still wanted to see sharon's expression in the ending, but it ended so fast :( ! awww! now dats super cute, Swayam going to wish her at 11:59!! ok! now till today i havent actually seen any romantic ways saying that i'll wish u at 11;59! most of them wud be the  first one! but in this story.. everything is different and beautiful..
Now to frankly let out, i've read many Birthday os's they mostly depend on the surprises but in yours? i saw a WHOLE new "Birthday" story!!
i thought that it might be the same! but.. You changed my words gal.. !
you really did!
HATS OFF to u and ur works!!
Clap 
You deserve a ROUND OF APPLAUSE! 
Embarrassed
im setting myself off to read all ur other works again!! as i tend to feel good after a One head stressed up night preparations! 

JummmHug
Thanks for such a long and lovely comment.Glad you liked the concept and title as well. And for the coincidence agreed with you SwaRon is definitely following you. See na they are giving exam on the subject that you were studyingEmbarrassed 
And jealous Sharon looks adorable. And about Swayam's surprise and his idea behind wishing her late, that's our unpredictable Majnu boy. He leaves no stone unturned to make his girl feel specialEmbarrassed
Glad you liked it.Big smile

Originally posted by tashu20

awesome...loved it...!!!!Smile
poor sharon, swayam didn't wish her on her b'day
do writemore...!!!

Thank a lotBig smile

Originally posted by pooja123456

hey...do continue well written...
sharon getting jealous...
pls pm me if u update this!!!


Thanks a lot for the comment Pooja, but I am not continuing thisEmbarrassed

Originally posted by chimpukli10

hey awesum OS rutu..i really loved all d swayam antics in d clsrum..nd d end when he rmbers..that happens with almost evey1 i guess..nd here swayam is i mean he is going to wish her @11:59 ? seriously i guess no one would think like him..

Thanks a lot Vaishnavi for the comment. And i know it happens with me most of the times where suddenly I remember some answers when the supervisor is about to snatch the paperLOL And yeah he is going to wish her 1 min before it strikes 12. That's style of our unpredictable Majnu boyEmbarrassed

Originally posted by meevee

Rutu that was an awsum piece of writing, I am still grinning at all the antics and the way he handled Sharon's queries about not wishing her yet...the quintessential Swayam philosophy of thinking differently was adeptly brought out...absolutely luvd the last bit and the humor with which their convo was carried out including her return gift...the romance, the comedy and the philosophy all made a mark...u r a gifted writer to say the leastSmile    

Thanks a lot Meera for the lovely comment.
And about Swayam's philosophy of wishing her late, although seems weird to us, but after experiencing the same we get to know that its always the last bits of our day that we remember the most.Embarrassed
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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tanzz15

Hellaaa Rutu!!Wink

great job girlClap ,i really liked all the antics! liked the sentence- i wanted to be the last to wish you...oh!our philosophical swayam!!...thanks for the pm bud...

love tania;)

Thanks for the comment TaniaEmbarrassed

Originally posted by swaron_d3

awesome OS!
swayam proved his statement right that he is unpredictable. loved sharon being protective of swayam.the way you penned down the points which should be there in a relationship be it a trial-relationship was so true. i wish CVs get some brains soon and have a look at your OS and know what a relationship is like.i liked the part where she patted his back to calm him down. you have kept the plot very simple yet captivating. the philosophy was commendable.
thanks for the PM.
P.S:me too love economics..LOL

Thank a ton Ananya for the lovely comment Yeah Swayam proved that he is truly unpredictable. And even though Sharon was angry with him, she could not resist to find out why he didn't study and consoled him thinking that he might get cranky.Embarrassed But look at him, he shamelessly confessed that he didn't study and also let out the surpriseLOL

Originally posted by abhilasha_dream

Simply Superb !!

Thanks a lotBig smile

Originally posted by namratajadhav

lol even i do d same...
juzz loved it..
dey r so cute..

Thanks a tonBig smile

Originally posted by Suku_SwaRon

Absolutely Incredible!!! Full on masti wala update. A blockbuster on in that case. Well Rutu I am not surprised coz your updates are always super duper one. Swayam the nautanki, poor sharon he wants to wish her the last, Rutu wah What an idea sir ji LOL I loved it and each moment gave me so much pleasure that I read several times. Thanks a bunch for lighting up the moment. YOu are the best.

SukuHug
Thanks for your always lovely comment. Glad you liked it. And true Swayam was really a nautanki baaz hereLOL

Originally posted by ABBY92

LOL, I can't believe Swayam would actually result to copying and that too, from Vicky !! Loved how Sharon let him copy her answer even if she was mad at him just so he stays away from Amelia !! And that had to the sweetest return gift ever !!! 

Thanks a lot Abby.
Desperate times made Swayam copy from VickyLOL And yeah she didn't want Swayam to copy but when he was staring at Amelia, she pushed away her thoughts and gave him a full view of the answersheetLOL

Originally posted by swayamsharon

awsum os!!!!
loved swayam's tactic to copy & specially that one with vicky was very funnyLOL... sharon was jealous, so she showed him answer aw... ..
& return gift was very cute!!!

Thanks a ton for the comment ShreeBig smile

Originally posted by --Rumeli--

rutu!u are a awesome writer!!the OS made me smile right from the start!!i loved it hw sharon got jealous frm the economics topper n shoving off her anger showed him the answers!!den the part wen she decides to leave behind the thought dat he didnt wish her bt stil goes behind to look for him n comfort swayam!it wud really be great if u continue this!!

Thanks a ton for the comment RumeliEmbarrassed.But this was the last part dear and I can't continue it .

Originally posted by frankyfio

loved it

Thanks a tonBig smile
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Eeep! I must have missed the PM for this one or maybe you just didn't send me one! Angry

Anyways, so this is an unusual concept. It's not about the birthday but the return gift. Nice!

Ahh! The classroom antics! Really someone tell Swayam there is an exam going on! He apparently doesn't know it yet. And he endeavors to copy from Sharon so blatantly and shamelessly! Tch! Tch!

And Sharon gets jealous in the middle of an economics paper? Really? That girl is a bundle of insecurities! Stern Smile

And Swayam groveling for more time! Story of everybody's life! Stern Smile

So Swayam wants to be the last one to wish Sharon. Good! That boy has creativity. I like it.

Hilariously written with an interesting choice of words, for instance:

grueling session of mental harassment

LOL How true!

Thanks for the PM. NOT! Tongue

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