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SwaRon OS :The return gift (Page 3)

TANHA_H Goldie

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 1:32am | IP Logged

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drooler Senior Member

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
beautifully written rutu

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-Jum-RulzZ- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 3:16am | IP Logged
 Res !! 
Excited to read it!! Hold on... ! 


Rutuuu Hug
Hats OFF!!!!! 
Now the concept was different, the story was different, the title was different! and OMG! everything seemed perfectly new to me, and i enjoyed every bit of it, ok! now seriously.. to tell the truth! I was stuck up studying this subject the whole night from yesterday till morning now!! after returning from college, And wanted to chill out over the AT and simply read some OS's or FF's.. when i popped in, and when i saw ur Pm, i went like "Yippeee rutu finally updated an OS!!!" now i was super super super super super Excited to read it! and when i came to know that they were all in the exam hall, and that too on the subject that i just Left! had suddenly popped in with SWARON!! den i was like HELL.. SWARON FOLLOWS ME!!!! and i was bored studying my subject, but now! after reading this.. and when i assumed the fact that the subject of the test is "ECONOMICS". i Started laughing hysterically, clutching my stomach and being unbearable to stop my laughter, That was because of the situation i was  running through, It was the kinda the same, for me! haha.. i loved the part when sharon got jealous of swayam staring at Amelia! :P Lol lol lol.. ahem! somebody is furious! 
and most of all..
I Loved the way you expressed each of their doings, swayam's part was way funny here! and sharon's hahaha.. stuck up in the jealous line! Oh darn!! hated the fact that swayam had to spill out the surprise, i still wanted to see sharon's expression in the ending, but it ended so fast :( ! awww! now dats super cute, Swayam going to wish her at 11:59!! ok! now till today i havent actually seen any romantic ways saying that i'll wish u at 11;59! most of them wud be the  first one! but in this story.. everything is different and beautiful..
Now to frankly let out, i've read many Birthday os's they mostly depend on the surprises but in yours? i saw a WHOLE new "Birthday" story!!
i thought that it might be the same! but.. You changed my words gal.. !
you really did!
HATS OFF to u and ur works!!
You deserve a ROUND OF APPLAUSE! 
im setting myself off to read all ur other works again!! as i tend to feel good after a One head stressed up night preparations! 

Edited by -Jum-RulzZ- - 06 September 2012 at 3:39am

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tashu20 Senior Member

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 4:39am | IP Logged
awesome...loved it...!!!!Smile
poor sharon, swayam didn't wish her on her b'day
do writemore...!!!

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pooja123456 Goldie

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged continue well written...
sharon getting jealous...
pls pm me if u update this!!!

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surbhimathur IF-Rockerz

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MirageSwaron IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Rutu that was an awsum piece of writing, I am still grinning at all the antics and the way he handled Sharon's queries about not wishing her yet...the quintessential Swayam philosophy of thinking differently was adeptly brought out...absolutely luvd the last bit and the humor with which their convo was carried out including her return gift...the romance, the comedy and the philosophy all made a mark...u r a gifted writer to say the leastSmile    

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--Tanzz-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Hellaaa Rutu!!Wink

great job girlClap ,i really liked all the antics! liked the sentence- i wanted to be the last to wish you...oh!our philosophical swayam!!...thanks for the pm bud...

love tania;)

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