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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome OS!

swayam proved his statement right that he is unpredictable. loved sharon being protective of swayam.the way you penned down the points which should be there in a relationship be it a trial-relationship was so true. i wish CVs get some brains soon and have a look at your OS and know what a relationship is like.i liked the part where she patted his back to calm him down. you have kept the plot very simple yet captivating. the philosophy was commendable.

thanks for the PM.

P.S:me too love economics..😆

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honeyangel

@honeyangel

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

Awww 😳 This was one of the cutest and sweetest OS i have read.. 😳 Really awesomely written 👏 Loved swayam's thought of wishing sharon at the end of the day 11:59 😆 and poor sharon waiting for the suprise which was not a suprise anymore... 😆 I loved the OS and post the rest of the part soon 😛 Im eagerly waiting for swayam's suprise for Sharon...PLEASE DO PM ME 😃

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeyangel
Awww 😳 This was one of the cutest and sweetest OS i have read.. 😳 Really awesomely written 👏 Loved swayam's thought of wishing sharon at the end of the day 11:59 😆 and poor sharon waiting for the suprise which was not a suprise anymore... 😆 I loved the OS and post the rest of the part soon 😛 Im eagerly waiting for swayam's suprise for Sharon...PLEASE DO PM ME 😃

Glad you liked it dear,but this was the last part. Swayam sure will plan somethng awesome and out of the world for Sharon☺️I need not specify. Thanks for the flattery comments😳

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

lol even i do d same...

juzz loved it..

dey r so cute..

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

Absolutely Incredible!!! Full on masti wala update. A blockbuster on in that case. Well Rutu I am not surprised coz your updates are always super duper one. Swayam the nautanki, poor sharon he wants to wish her the last, Rutu wah What an idea sir ji 😆 I loved it and each moment gave me so much pleasure that I read several times. Thanks a bunch for lighting up the moment. YOu are the best.

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ABI

@ABBY92

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

LOL, I can't believe Swayam would actually result to copying and that too, from Vicky !! Loved how Sharon let him copy her answer even if she was mad at him just so he stays away from Amelia !! And that had to the sweetest return gift ever !!!

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swayamsharon

@swayamsharon

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

awsum os!!!!
loved swayam's tactic to copy & specially that one with vicky was very funny😆... sharon was jealous, so she showed him answer aw... ..
& return gift was very cute!!!

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

rutu!u are a awesome writer!!the OS made me smile right from the start!!i loved it hw sharon got jealous frm the economics topper n shoving off her anger showed him the answers!!den the part wen she decides to leave behind the thought dat he didnt wish her bt stil goes behind to look for him n comfort swayam!it wud really be great if u continue this!!

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
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Me first 😎
Rutu 🤗 this was super awesome OS.
Loved all the classroom antics of Swayam. Sharon's thought on what he would have done if not study and Swayam's insight on why he would wish her the last was a nice touch.
Sharon's mop gesturing anger and just how immediately Swayam opened the surprise fearing more trouble and the kiss that followed was cool. But it was really not fair on Swayam's part to not wish her at all..

Sudha🤗

Thanks for the comment.😃

Well about Swayam wishing her late, I had a personal experience of the same. And to tell you frankly I still remember my birthday where my friends had wished me late night and then we had a blast. So even Swayam must have planned something memorable for her😳

Originally posted by: -swaron-

love it
poor Sharon ... swayam didn't wish her on her b'day
and that kiss ... hayee
but still he didn't wish her
lovely os

Thanks for the comment😃.And wishing her late, our philosophical Swayam had decided to wish her late, so that she will remember the day for her lifetime😳

Originally posted by: Nehal92
aww!! Rutu 🤗
i had smile plastered on my face all the time i was reading it!!
i just love your work!!
keep posting regularly !! :)

Nehal🤗

Glad my OS made you smile while reading. And also for the lovely comments. Will definitely write more😳

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
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Lol amazing onee rutu! 👍🏼
swayam's antics in the class were hillarious! 😆
and he's sucha jerk..he didn't wish sharon and den he's telling that he was preparing a surprise for her! and to the top of that he also revealed dat he's gonna call her at 11.59! Goshh..boys!! 😆
but it was cute..romantic..fun..sweet! 😳
all together a really nice work!! ⭐️

Thanks Surbhi🤗

I know Swayam revealed the surprise and also told her the timing for the same. Boys😆

Thanks for the comment. But as I have mentioned he did really plan for her birthday and made it memorable for her😳

Originally posted by: marauder
Amusing piece of work I would say. Swayam's character was really interesting in this and his philoshphy was definitely not for mere mortals like us. 😆 . I loved how you developed the plot but the best bit was definitely the classroom antics of Swayam. It was awesomely penned. I loved how you included almost every emotion in just an OS. Loved it.

I know Swayam reason for wishing her last truly described how unpredictable he is

But as he reasoned he wanted to make her feel special that day and remember it for her lifetime😳

Thanks a lot for the comment Shishir.

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Awesome os...:)

Thanks a ton Sadiya😃

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
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unres 😳

RUTU 🤗
Awesome os rutu !!
fantastically written 👏
loved swayams antics in the class .😃
sharon getting jealous by seeing swayam cheating from another girl was funny 😆
bechari sharon , swayam will wish her happy bday at 11.59 but he has planned some suprises which is good 😃
keep showering ur wonderful os's on us...
thanks for the PM.

Tanuka🤗

Thanks for your always lovely comments😳 I know Sharon would allow him to cheat from her, but not from any other girl😆

And no worries even though he is wishing her late,he will make sure that she will remember every bit of it.😳

Originally posted by: Nirju99
awesm

Thanks a ton😃

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon
Awesome os...sharons way of giving a return gift amazing...luved vicky n swayams part...it was hilarous...n swayams idea of wishing sharon last is grt...n jealous sharon n her expressions r perfectly described by u.

Thanks a ton for the comment Shrutika.😳 Glad you thought Swayam's idea of wishing her late was great. And jealous Sharon is a treat to watch and read as well😆

Originally posted by: nature2

Thank you😃

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