Posted: 06 September 2012 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NeelimaSJ
Disclaimer: This story is a work of fiction. I have no intention of hurting anyone's sentiments. If your sentiments are hurt then you need to get a sense of humour asap!!! Ok ok ok I am sorry if any of you are hurt.
Ok here goes nothing
It is midnight and someone knocks on Guru's door. Guru is scared that it is a ghost. He opens the door to find that it is Raddi at the door. He tells her that Bhaiya is not at home. Raddi forces her way into the house. Guru wonders what to do and offers Raddi some bacchi hui daal and roti. Raddi pounces on the food as it is bought from the hard earned money of her hubby. She greedily gulps down the food. She looks around for a book to read and notices a bottle hidden behind books. She grabs the bottle and suddenly there is a gleam in her eyes. After sometime Raddi is seen walking out to of the house on all fours. She sets out to find Mohan. She walks into Vyas house and peeps into a room. She finds someone sleeping and thinks it is Mohan. She enters the room and shuts the door behind her. She thinks to herself "Mohan aaj main tumhe paa kar rahungi. Apna bana kar rahungi. Tum sirf mere ho sirf mere." She gets on to the bed and...
Next day morning
Raddi wakes up in the morning with a splitting headache. She opens her eyes and wonders where she is. Suddenly the events of last night flash in front of her eyes and she smiles. Raddi thinks "Mohan ab tumhe mujhse koi alag nahi kar sakta". She gets up and steps out of the room. She runs into Megha. Megha asks her what she is doing here. Raddi says "main apne pati ke saath thi aur waise bhi tumhe batana main zaroori nahi samajhti. Yeh meri and mere pati ke beech ki baat hain" and walks away. Megha wonders what the hell Raddi was talking about as Mohan was sleeping in her room with Nanhi and Addu. She walks towards the kitchen and finds Renu grumbling. She asks Renu what is wrong? Renu says "ab kya batau main tujhe. Kal poori raat sophe par so kar meri toh kamar hi akad gayi". Megha asks Renu"Par Bhabhi aap sofa par kyun soyi?". Renu "Pata nahin aaj kal tere bhaiya ko kya ho gaya hain. Kal raat jab main sone gayi toh mujhe apne kamre ka darwaza band mila. Main 1 ghante tak darwaza khat khatati rahi par inhone darwaza hi nahi khola". Megha looks confused and walks into the living room only to find someone singing loudly. She walks up to the person and finds that it is Sanjay. Sanjay looks very happy and pleased. Megha asks him if he got a promotion. Sanjay says "Nahin Megha. Kal raat bohat samay baad tumhari bhabhi ne mujhe se..." He blushes and walks away. Megha looks mega confused now.
A year later
Megha and Mohan come out of the courtroom looking very pleased. Mohan and Raddi's divorce has finally come through. Raddi has a baby in her arms and is found crying bitterly. Indu looks at her scornfully and walks up to Megha and hugs her. She takes Megha's hand in her hand and says "chal beta apne ghar chal. tu hi toh meri sacchi bahu hain".
Mohan & Megha walk up to the camera and say "alcohol is injurious to health"
neelu..darling..a big hug to you for this.i absolutely loved it...but you should have stretched it a little further.You should have shown renu finding out about it and crumbling..and literally roasting sanjay...and mohan having a field day..and sanjay...oh god i am howling with laughter thinking of it...you should have written about how rondy finds that she has blundered and goes pagalpan...please can you rewrite with all these details and more? I dont mind if it is in installments..pleej..pleej..