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Taming of the Sherni FF/SS... Page55 NOTE (Page 12)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tinkerbe11

 
 
Guess who...?
 
 
Yep me lol, first of all OMG I had no idea you write!  You kept a dark secret from me Tongue, but anyways because I was so curious to see what you wrote about I flew over LOL but I haven't forgiven you for not telling me *shrugs cold shoulders*, but anyway getting to commenting, I haven't done this in a while so bear with me, (I know you will, but I thought I should just say so in case lool).
 
 
So I'll begin with what I've read so far, and that's your prologue - I'm gonna be totally honest here and tell you that I've never read Taming of the Shrew but I saw a comment just beneath your index by a generous soul who stated that the movie version has Heath Ledger in it - so I will be catching up with that soon Wink)
 
 
Okay okay I'm commenting now Embarrassed...
 
 
 
Omg yeh kya, Virat ko pehle hi scene main bekaari banaa diya! Shocked  Nahiiin!!!!  "Virat you are not a failure, take it from me hun, your good looks will get you anywhere and I'm sure in coming chapters you will prove me right!" 
 
                       
 
 
That's like my guy, go get up and prove to the world you can do this!  "I'm totally rooting for you Virat."  But man, the world is being cruel to my hot property, yeh zaalim duniya! Angry  Okay so Virat was thrown out for something that wasn't his fault, who dared to betray him - Tink wonders what's in stock. 
 
 
                     
 
 
Oh oh oh Virat in the rain equals to double hotness!!  Day Dreaming
 
 
Oh Virat babe's don't despair, I will set that dumbass studio alight lool, satyanaas ho uss studio ka that rejected you!
 
                                                     
 
And finally ek ladki bheegi bhaagi si holds his attention!!!  Whoop whoop, Manvi ki kya style se entry maari!  And moreover he thought she was beautiful!!  Haye loved the way her curves held his attention hun, nice work Wink.
 
 
 
The End
 
 
...of my comment LOL lmao - you must be thinking about time lol, but I can't help it, I'm like a pringle once I pop I can't stop lol - in talking ofc Tongue.
 
 
But but but great work chica, or shall I say "booyakasha" LOL, but seriously girl I like what I read so far, will read the first chapter now and if I'm awake I will comment in a bit if not then phir milenge, chalte chalte...Wink until then...
 
 
Ciao babe, peace out
Luv Tink
xxx
 
 
 
 
 
Oops! Never intended to keep secrects, but guess it just happens...
Actually it isn't my fault! I just forget things after reading your
story, it is so briljant how can you expect me remember my terrible
written stuff, after reading something you wrote...?
 
I will tell you a secret... you have to promise you won't tell anyone,
neither have I... I haven't seen the play, I have read in big lines,
but I really love the story, not a very big fan of Romeo and Julliet,
though hopelessy romantic... -Yeah I don't get the combination either-
But I love the Taming of the Shrew, maybe the preference of hawt instead
of cute again...
 
You don't know how much I laughed reading your comment,
but indeed, 'yeh zaalin duniya!' *does that thing old heriones always did*.
 
No yaar! Not even once thought about the time... ALready read
your comment thrice...
 
'Booyakasha'? Really? How good do you know this guy?
I mean I haven't really heard of him till you called me Ali G...
Guess should be doing more research.
 
I think you have fallen asleep. But thank you for taking time to read
this.
 
Love you!

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Palkhi_08

Wow nice!!

 Completely different from what i expected but totally great!!

 Update soon, and thanks for the PM!
Thanx,
I hope you expected something
terrible and turned out to be otherwise...
AHw, great is good...Thanx!!
will try... Thank You!
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by manu9

Brilliantly written story...! Thumbs Up ...ok frankly speaking I'm not surprised by Maanvi's eccentric behaviorLOL ...and as usual her sis is there holding a white flag in hand lol...one thing I'm confused about...is Jeevika playing negative...??Confused it just came into my mind because of Maanvi's negative sentence...Ouch
And one more objectionTongue why are you pairing her with Manan...who wants him lol...Viraat knows how to handle this wild cat...Wink anyways waiting how the story unfolds...love...
 
Thanx!
Nope that's why I thought Maanvi was perfect for this.
Well, actuaully Jeevika should be very shweet, but I
always think about other things while writing and it turns
out totally different than planned so I hope I will get a
good explanation for Maanvi's way of thinking...
 
Hey! Manan is a shweet guy... But agree Virat is just, just
you know...
 
Thank You!
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
wow!!
Manvi is bad tempered...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chandana123

wow!!
Manvi is bad tempered...
 
Yeah, she is...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 7:34am | IP Logged

Note!

Heey guys, thanx for your lovely commets,

I am writing, but noticed I a go a little of track,
so please don't compare it a lot with the
orginal play as it won't be fair, I mean me Vs. Spakespeare,
is the most unfair thing possible, so it is based on the play,
but you can't compare, okejj?
Thanx.
 
And don't get high expectations, I won't be able to handle
it!

 

 

 



Edited by BrunoMars - 09 September 2012 at 7:43am

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
awesome girl Clap
do cont soon & thank u so much 4 d PM Hug

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
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awesome girl Clap
do cont soon & thank u so much 4 d PM Hug
 
Welcome! Rhanx for liking it

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