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Taming of the Sherni FF/SS... Page55 NOTE (Page 11)

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Excellent as always!

Very intriguing and interesting !

Well done xx

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 5:38pm | IP Logged
 
 
Guess who...?
 
 
Yep me lol, first of all OMG I had no idea you write!  You kept a dark secret from me Tongue, but anyways because I was so curious to see what you wrote about I flew over LOL but I haven't forgiven you for not telling me *shrugs cold shoulders*, but anyway getting to commenting, I haven't done this in a while so bear with me, (I know you will, but I thought I should just say so in case lool).
 
 
So I'll begin with what I've read so far, and that's your prologue - I'm gonna be totally honest here and tell you that I've never read Taming of the Shrew but I saw a comment just beneath your index by a generous soul who stated that the movie version has Heath Ledger in it - so I will be catching up with that soon Wink)
 
 
Okay okay I'm commenting now Embarrassed...
 
 
 
Omg yeh kya, Virat ko pehle hi scene main bekaari banaa diya! Shocked  Nahiiin!!!!  "Virat you are not a failure, take it from me hun, your good looks will get you anywhere and I'm sure in coming chapters you will prove me right!" 
 
                       
 
 
That's like my guy, go get up and prove to the world you can do this!  "I'm totally rooting for you Virat."  But man, the world is being cruel to my hot property, yeh zaalim duniya! Angry  Okay so Virat was thrown out for something that wasn't his fault, who dared to betray him - Tink wonders what's in stock. 
 
 
                     
 
 
Oh oh oh Virat in the rain equals to double hotness!!  Day Dreaming
 
 
Oh Virat babe's don't despair, I will set that dumbass studio alight lool, satyanaas ho uss studio ka that rejected you!
 
                                                     
 
And finally ek ladki bheegi bhaagi si holds his attention!!!  Whoop whoop, Manvi ki kya style se entry maari!  And moreover he thought she was beautiful!!  Haye loved the way her curves held his attention hun, nice work Wink.
 
 
 
The End
 
 
...of my comment LOL lmao - you must be thinking about time lol, but I can't help it, I'm like a pringle once I pop I can't stop lol - in talking ofc Tongue.
 
 
But but but great work chica, or shall I say "booyakasha" LOL, but seriously girl I like what I read so far, will read the first chapter now and if I'm awake I will comment in a bit if not then phir milenge, chalte chalte...Wink until then...
 
 
Ciao babe, peace out
Luv Tink
xxx
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
Wow nice!!

 Completely different from what i expected but totally great!!

 Update soon, and thanks for the PM!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Brilliantly written story...! Thumbs Up ...ok frankly speaking I'm not surprised by Maanvi's eccentric behaviorLOL ...and as usual her sis is there holding a white flag in hand lol...one thing I'm confused about...is Jeevika playing negative...??Confused it just came into my mind because of Maanvi's negative sentence...Ouch
And one more objectionTongue why are you pairing her with Manan...who wants him lol...Viraat knows how to handle this wild cat...Wink anyways waiting how the story unfolds...love...

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutyvirman

hmm its different 
i like it
Glad You Like it!
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by missmystic

Aww jus read it and i loved it. Really looking forward to reading it. Hehe the first chapter was hilarious, so manvish. Im so glad your writing, keep up the good work
And please do pm me :)
 
Hey!
Happy to see you! Has been really
long I've seen something from you...
Happy to read you think so. I know
I love Manvi-ish! Well, it is really
unbearable, people actually expect
things from you! But the lovely comments
are worth it...
I will! Thanks!
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Niha-

wow maanvi has to marry first
does that mean she's da older sis?
plz do pm me
update soon
 
Yes, and No.
Yes, Maanvi has to marry first.
No, she is the younger sister,
but her dad is afraid that Maanvi
won't get married as she distances
herself. And this way he gets Jeevika
distancing from boys, as they will
have no chance until someone marries
Maanvi, that will not happen anytime
soon -,since no one dares to do so-
Hope you get it now.
I will!
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Saraa.7

Excellent as always!

Very intriguing and interesting !

Well done xx
 
Thank You!
AHw, that is sho shweet!

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