Taming of the Sherni FF/SS... Page55 NOTE - Page 12

Originally posted by: niksidfan

woow...yaar...the story and the characters are opening up.soo jeevika is not that bad..her emotions are justified and relistic..but now sime she is matured enough to realise her immature behaviour  before..she is all guilty..

hope deir relations improves...again manvi too needs to be by her side..she also need  to understand her sister...

i m loving the spicy and different behna track too...

waiting for virat..it would spice up more den...

about the update...

bruno seriously its perfect this time👏 just bang on...i loved each and every word of this update.⭐️..

and u know what...dnt be afraid of the expectation sice u r soo good at it...i m sure noone will be having any complaints...

will be waiting pateintly for the  next update...😊

Originally posted by: niksidfan

haha...ankita and bruno u r both hilarious..

by the way  i loved ur update with jeevika full on too... but i guess virman lovers are not too much pleased with jeevika nowadays😉 u might have struck the wrong cord at the wrong time 😛

Originally posted by: chandana123

awesome update...

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

Note!

Heey guys,

Okejj, this really turns out to be diffirent from the orignal

thing, but no worries! Will try to keep up with your expectations...

Uhm, the next update is actually Jeevika's point of view...

-Yeah, that's what I meant with turning out to be diffirent-

Srry, VirManians, but don't wrry, I will keep it as VirMan oriented

as possible... And that's a lot!

And I know You want Virat's entry, but patience! Please?

Okejj, that was it I guess...

 

Special Thanx to; nisha33 Avika26 Thanx for you sweet PMs!

And Niksidfan love your comments yaar!

aww..thnkx for mentioning my name..i feel soo good..thnx again🤗 but i coment what i feel..nothing fake..just dat sometime i m too lazy to comment else i always comment dil se ..and u deserve everything i write about u😊

Originally posted by: niksidfan

aww..thnkx for mentioning my name..i feel soo good..thnx again🤗 but i coment what i feel..nothing fake..just dat sometime i m too lazy to comment else i always comment dil se ..and u deserve everything i write about u😊

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

 

Ahw, you broke my heart with this! *Dramatic old heriones positions with hands on head*

But I was mentally prepared for this, I knew no VirMan would be just, just terrible!

I promise I will start working on Virat's entry, but you know, I want his entry at last,

so Viren has to come in the picture first, so two or one update more...?

 

Yeah, I like humans, though I like aliens to -I prefer Mars...-

 

P.s. Ahw! I hate you for this, you are doing the cute chines girl?!

How can you do this to me?! No, no, *looks away and folds arms while pouting*,

*takes one more glimpse* Sigh! Okejj, I will wtart writing Virat's entry,

though as I said, it may take some time...

Originally posted by: niksidfan

haha...ankita and bruno u r both hilarious..

by the way  i loved ur update with jeevika full on too... but i guess virman lovers are not too much pleased with jeevika nowadays😉 u might have struck the wrong cord at the wrong time 😛

Originally posted by: AngelicDemon

*pretending to behave like a stern school teacher* You better bring in my Viraat, or else...

Now that I know how baby faces affect, Imma use them every time in my posts

*googling for more chinese baby gifs*

You can delay Viraat's entry, and I can keep spamming ur post with ridiculous baby expressions...so the choice is up to you Bruno 😆

Wokay?

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

 

I don't know how much effort it took for me to find a proper

thing to explain why the behnas are how they are, I really hadn't

thought about that when I updated the first chapter, how stupid of

me! It seemed good enough and totally forgot about the JeeMan love,

how is that even possible, really a thing for me to do...

But this seems realistic enough? Phew~! Glad at least that one is solved.

Yeah, coming to their improving realtion is some other thing I will

have to find some kind of thing that will make them come closer and

understand eachother...

 

Indeed Virat will spice everything up... Though you will have to

read a lil bit further to have the masala thing'Virat'.

 

Perfect? AHw how much I love that word and you are using it for me?

Thanx! Thanx! Well, I do understand if complains do come, there is no

VirMan, there is not even Man in this one, but I needed to make this clear...

Before letting anything else happen...

 

Thanx for understanding, hope I don't let you wait to long...

yeah its understandable dat u didnt heed too much attention on behnas since this is virman ff and they are the main focus here...but ur justification is on right track in fact it has newness and its interesting...have something more to  read other than virman too...its like ek ke saath ek free...i find it nice wen in an ff every relations  are defined in a specific way..then the story seems to  be more endearing...

Originally posted by: AngelicDemon

actually, this time around, I like Jeevs.

Coz if she hadn't donated the marrow, Viraat wouldn't have seen her. He wouldn't have broken down. We wouldn't have gotten the much needed VIRAT BREAKDOWN. Also he wouldn't have been emotionally weak and he wouldn't have hugged Maanvi 3 FRIKKIN' TIMES DUDE!

So yeah, I'm pretty pleased with J right now *evil smirk*