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Sajan FF: Love after Marriage (Ch 14 Updated) (Pg91) (New Update) (Page 31)

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Awesomee update fatima...loved it...woww 3 months chalenge...maza ayega...

Cnt soon
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sorry for being late

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snowwhite28

Nice update. Very interesting.
I am happy u liked it Smile
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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 5:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Kinjal--

Awesomee update fatima...loved it...woww 3 months chalenge...maza ayega...

Cnt soon
n
sorry for being late
I am glad u liked it Kinjal. Smile
Don't  be sorry its all right.Wink

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 2:39pm | IP Logged

Thanks Guys for liking my work and appreciating it. I am really very pleased and thankful to all of u. Without u people it won't be possible. As many of u complained that the last update was a short one so I hope this one will compensate for it. As many of u wanted me to update it regularly so from now I'll update it quite frequently as I have 3 more updates so will try to finish this one soon so that I can concentrate better.

So Here it goes. Will meet u all at the end of it'..

 

At Night'

Samrat heard a knock on his door and found Sooraj there. He was told that SM is calling him in his room. Samrat told Sooraj to tell her  that he is coming. After thinking for a while Samrat went to his room and found the two ladies sitting on the bed and chatting. He interrupted them.

S: Mom aap ne mujhe bulaya?

SM: Are Sam aao an beta behto. (SM loving asked Samrat to sit)

S: Mom aap bas bataiye k kaam kya hai mujhe ja k apni presentataion complete karni hai.

SM: Uff Oh Sam apni mom k liye bhi ab tumhare paas waqt nahi hai na?

SM complained to her son. Seeing her sad face Samrat bent down and took her hands and spoke gently/

S: Kya Mom ab aap bhi? Ap to janti hai na k apka Sam jitna marzi busy ho par apke liye wo time nikal hi leta hai. Baataiye kya kaam hai main aram se suno ga I promise.

Gunjan was just staring at the mother son duo. She could not believe her eyes and her ears. She was pleasantly surprised to see her angry husband in such a jovial mood.

SM: To chalo yahan aao mery paas betho.

Samart obeyed like an innocent child and sat on the bed besides Gunjan.

SM: Han ab lag rahein Mr and Mers Shergil

S: Mom! A' kuch kehna than a apko.

SM: Han Samrat maine tumhari aur Gunjan ki baatein subah suni bhi or kafi der un par socha bhi jiske bad mein is natejey(result) par pohnchi hoon k''

S and G: Kya?? ( both spoke together and then looked at each other and then at SM)

SM: Batati hoon sabar rakho. Han to wo ye k tum dono ne ab is deal par agreement de hi diya hai to ise sahi tarah se nibhana. Jaan booj kar khaas kar tum Sam jaan booj kar Gunjan ko harane ki koshish mat karna. Cheating not allowed!

S: Mom mujhe chating karne ki zaroort nahi kyun k'

SM: Hun. Abhi meri baat khatam nahi hui Sam. Beth jao aur suno. Itni jaldi mat kia karo beta. To main yeh keh rahi thi k tum aur Gunjan ek saath ise room mein raho ge.

S: What? Mom aap kya keh rahi hain. No way. Main esa kuch nahi kar ne wala.

He was about to leave the room when

SM: Matlab tum har gaye.

He turns back

S: Har gaya? Aap kya kehna chahati hain Mom?

SM: Han to aur kya! Har hi gaye ho tum beta. Jo aese behave kar rahe ho. Kya problem hai is kamre mein Gunjan k saath sone mein?

S: Main kyun soyun iske saath?

SM: Beta yeh karma tumhara hai iska nahi to tum kyun nahi so sakte yahan han? Dekho tum bed ki is taraf aur wo us taraf. Bas simple.

S: It's not simple Mom main yahan

G: Han theek to keh rahe hain yeh. Yeh yahan merey saath kyun sayen ge. Main inke us caliber ki jo nahi? Kyun Mr.Shergil? (she taunted him)

S: What do you mean?

G: I mean k main un cheap ladkiyon mein se nahi jin k saath aap'..

S: Mind your language!

G: Kyun bura laga na? Aap kya samajhet hain k mujhe bolna nahi ata? Maaf kiye ga lekin mujhe baron ka lehaz tha lekin ab jab k yeh deal sign ho chuki hai to ab main apko aur apki in senseless baton ko aur tolerate nahi kar sakti.

SM: Gunjan Beta?

G: I am sorry. Lekin main ab aur bardasht nahi kar sakti. Yeh deal main ne islea sign nahi ki kyun k main apne aap ko inke samne prove karna chahati hoon balke islea ki hai ta k inhen yeh pata chal sake k mein baki ladkyon se alag hun aur khas kar un jesi to bilkul nahi jinhein yeh istemal kar sakte hain.

SM: Han beta main janti hoon. Tum se achi ladki Samrat ko dhondane par bhi nahi mil sakti.

G: Aisa nahi hai. Duniya mein bohat achi ladkiyan hoti hain lekin pata nahi kyun kuch log ladkiyon ko sirf isetmal karna jante hain.

Now Samrat was unable to control himself

S: Hello, hello yeh sab kya ho raha hai?

G: Kuch nahia apki samaj mein nahi ayega

SM: To Sam kya socha tumne?

S: Samrat Shergil haar manne walo mein se nahi hai. Agar mujhe iske saath ek kamre mein sona bhi parega to main tyaar hoon. Lekin isse don't think k yeh deal iske favour mein chali jaye gi.

SM: Nahi nahi beta maine aisa kab kaha? Tumhein kon haara sakta hai

SM winked at Gunjan and then after wishing good night to her children she went to sleep peacefully after so many years. She was content that Gunjan can take care of her son and he can change him for good.

In Samrat's room:

G: Mujhe bohat neend a rahi hai

S: TO?

G: To aap apna kam band kijiye. Light mein mujhe neend nahi ati.

S: Yeh tumahri problem hai meri nahi

G: Apki bhi hai warna abhi mein mom ko bulati hoon aur'.

S: Mom? Wo sirf meri mom hain.

G: Par ab meri bhi hain. Ab aap khud hi dekh liyjiye k aap ko kya karna hai.

S: Tum yeh sab jan booj kar kar rahi ho na?

G: Maine kya kia Samrat? Main to ap ko yeh batay a rahi hoon k mein zulm sehne walo mein se nahi hoon. Aap ne sab k samne mujhse sahadi ki hai aura b main apki responsibility hoon.

S: Whatever!!

G: Whatever nahi RESPONSIBILITY!! To please kya aap light band karein gein?

S: OK. Fine.

G: Thank u so much. I am honoured k aap ne mere liye Ek ORDINARY SI LADKI ke liye itna sab kiya Mr. Shergil.

Her tone was laced with sarcasm. She lay on the bed.

G: Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap?

S: Yeh meri side hai utho yahan se.

G: Light off karein. Main nahi uthon gi yahan se.

S: Uthti ho ya nahi.

G: Kaha na nahi

S: To theek haia ab tum dekho.

He lifted her up in her arms and it seemed as the world stopped there. They kept staring each other.

What a timing the cell phone has got. It started ringing and both came back from their world. So Samrat had no choice so he made her sit on the bed and went to receive the call. While Gunjan mumbles to herself.

G: Waise yeh itne bure bhi nahi hain bas thori polish ki zaroorat hai. Aur yeh abhi mujhe jante nahi hain. Agar yeh ziddi hain to main maha ziddi hoon.

After getting free from the call Samrat came back in room and found her sleeping looking so inncocent. He smiles looking at her and then also decides to sleep.

So Sajan were finally in a room together. Facing on the other side but it was the first step towards'..??

 

That's it guys. I hope all your complains are now over. I will try and update soon.

Press the like button and leave your comments.

 

What a timing the cell phone has got. It started ringing and both came back from their world. So Samrat had no choice so he made her sit on the bed and went to receive the call. While Gunjan mumbles to herself.

G: Waise yeh itne bure bhi nahi hain bas thori polish ki zaroorat hai. Aur yeh abhi mujhe jante nahi hain. Agar yeh ziddi hain to main maha ziddi hoon.

After getting free from the call Samrat came back in room and found her sleeping looking so inncocent. He smiles looking at her and then also decides to sleep.

So Sajan were finally in a room together. Facing on the other side but it was the first step towards'..??

 

That's it guys. I hope all your complains are now over. I will try and update soon.

Press the like button and leave your comments.

 



Edited by HSFA - 26 November 2012 at 2:40pm

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
ANGEL updated finally lolsurprised smiley
feeling so happyhappy earth emoticon
sajan dreamland...samrat gunjan finally in one room..happy day dreaming emoticon

the lift...samrat gunjan staring ...n gunjan thinking about samrat...deeply in love emoticon
Sajan getting affected of each other..happy jumping emoticon
awesome lovely update...giving thumbs up emoticon
so next update kab miley ga jaldiiihappy bunny emoticon
M SOOO HAPPY to see this tigress chashmish hehe..she rocks..mr.shergill gona have tough time now..cant wait dy gona fall in love <3 <3hayeee.
after reading update m really happy i wish kbhi khatm na hoti.. u done awesomei'm happy emoticon
Love
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Edited by MSluvsSI - 26 November 2012 at 2:52pm

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MSluvsSI

ANGEL updated finally lolsurprised smiley
feeling so happyhappy earth emoticon
sajan dreamland...samrat gunjan finally in one room..happy day dreaming emoticon

the lift...samrat gunjan staring ...n gunjan thinking about samrat...deeply in love emoticon
Sajan getting affected of each other..happy jumping emoticon
awesome lovely update...giving thumbs up emoticon
so next update kab miley ga jaldiiihappy bunny emoticon
M SOOO HAPPY to see this tigress chashmish hehe..she rocks..mr.shergill gona have tough time now..cant wait dy gona fall in love <3 <3hayeee.
after reading update m really happy i wish kbhi khatm na hoti.. u done awesomei'm happy emoticon
Love
Urs Sweetheart <3 <3pink happy heart emoticon

Bas itna sa comment?Ouch
Update was long.
I told u no long comment no update. No u see What I do.LOL
Next update very very late. Tongue
 U liked it phir bhi the comment.
Not fair na.Cry I worked sooo hard.
Yeah with Mr.Shergill no u will always have a tough time.LOL But I am happy that My Sweetheart liked it.
 
Keep Waiting for the next update LOLWink
Jitna comment utni update dungi next time.
U just wait and watch Jani LOL
 
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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by HSFA

Bas itna sa comment?Ouch
Update was long.
I told u no long comment no update. No u see What I do.LOL
Next update very very late. Tongue
 U liked it phir bhi the comment.
Not fair na.Cry I worked sooo hard.
Yeah with Mr.Shergill no u will always have a tough time.LOL But I am happy that My Sweetheart liked it.
 
Keep Waiting for the next update LOLWink
Jitna comment utni update dungi next time.
U just wait and watch Jani LOL
 
Urz Angel

update bhe utna he sa tha ROFL
 we will see jani u cant say no to me at leastApprove
u r not gona make me wait for next i already waited so long...u gave only one sajans sceneOuch
okay let me complete me comment
reading from begning i had thought SM wil not come to know about dis deal but u made lol so it was a bit surprising for me but liked it in this way too.. i loved sm support for gunjan.. n i loved da most gunjan s straight forwardness.. da tigreess one which we had always wished for... m very eagerly waiting for seeing sajan falling for each other...n i am loving sam s attitude too however he is rude but yet cuteLOL da light scene was really nyc Embarrassedwould love to see sam taking her responsibility <3 fine wid comment ?? ya aur likhon Embarrassed

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