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ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15* (Page 3)

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Wohoo !!

This was great Ridz !
And thanks for the inspiration too Anne, I wanted an OS from Ridz so long !!

And this was beautifully written ! And something that's so possible seeing teh current epis !
Gosh man, Im telling you CVs surely do wanna lead us into depression !

And this was written beautifully !
And the last line, about him not having to choose in the end ! Gosh !

Loved it !

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:15am | IP Logged
*sigh*

that was wonderful, and amazing and s touching.. I loved the Last line, "guess he didn't have to make a choice afterall"

its amazing how people can go so mental, blaming, abusing and in this case hurting and punishing somebody with no fault of theirs. It's not Khushi's fault, heck she didn't even know wat happened. But she's the one who will face it all, Because arnav decided to punish her for something his father did, to not only his mother but to khushi's too. Stupid Bafoon. gaaahh!!

Loved it, and this was bloody brilliant!

p.s. i just love how every1 is in OS mood nowadays!! yayyiee :D :D :D

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:15am | IP Logged
wow...how amazingly heartbreaking...I hope that makes sense...if it doesn't then all I want to say it was great...and the end...*sigh* something I hope we won't have to see but a part of me wants to...Thank you for the PM

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:33am | IP Logged
u r so rite it isnt about choices i know what garima did was wrong but how can arnav expect khushi to break all ties with her she took care of here when she had no one

just amazing work dear loved the OS

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:41am | IP Logged
Such a heart wrenching os.. Very touchy.. Beautifuly written.. Loved it to core

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:44am | IP Logged
You wrote this one 5th Sep and episode airs now...wow its same even dialogues too how come???CV's borrowed your idea???

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Wow the os was heart breaking . And breath catching. Arnavs cold choice . Dadi s plans. They resulted in the accident of kushi.that was a beautifully written Os. I luved it . Thnx for the Pm

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:51am | IP Logged
amazing os..loved it.. Smile

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