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ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15* (Page 2)

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 12:37am | IP Logged
Res..

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Nahiii Ridz how could you.. Cry dammit..made me cry..

Bachari khushi always caught in the middle..
I'm glad she stuck by her mother, without her she wouldn't be the woman she is today..
Ergh, arnav needs to move on.. I can't believe that he still hates garima even though she is innocent..
The last sentenced killed me :'(



Edited by .._sonii_.. - 27 September 2012 at 2:37am

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 12:44am | IP Logged
omg ...that was sad :'(

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 12:48am | IP Logged
beautiful..loved it...really emotional...

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Thank you for the dedication. And, the scene was beautifully done... It actually did take me back to that part of CE, so you got the emotions down pat.

I love the turn you added in there, and how well you drew it out... It flowed and blended well, you could feel it building, and then it came about... and I adore when that happens in a story.

You're a marvel, Ridz Cracker!!

Muuuahhh!!

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by HeadOverHeels

Thank you for the dedication. And, the scene was beautifully done... It actually did take me back to that part of CE, so you got the emotions down pat.

I love the turn you added in there, and how well you drew it out... It flowed and blended well, you could feel it building, and then it came about... and I adore when that happens in a story.

You're a marvel, Ridz Cracker!!

Muuuahhh!!


You really are too good to me! This makes my day...err night! ;) LOL! And that siggy would keep me occupied very well in my dreams!

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:03am | IP Logged
heart wrenching.. i can understand where arnav is coming from.. but as khushi.. what is garima's mistake if his father lied to her.. she didn't know he was married.. if garima is at fault then khushi is as well.. because the same scenario is with khushi-shyam.

beautifully written..

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Broke my heart. . I wish he hadnt asked her to make a choice.. Disapprove

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:07am | IP Logged
ooofff. res. Goddammit. I'm crying at work. AGAIN.

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