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ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15* (Page 14)

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
got goosebumpsa while reading 

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Oh  no, poor Khushi!! feel awful for her! this was so emotional xx

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
poor khushi

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Hey Guys,

I wrote a sequel of sorts to this OS in Arnav's POV :)

I can't post the blog link here, but if any of you are interested, and are not on my pm list, send me a pm for the link.

Love,
Ridz

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 12:46am | IP Logged
Read the first part now..
My eyes really stung...
You have an awesome way with words to display emotions...

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Posted: 07 September 2013 at 5:09am | IP Logged
200th like!

This was one one fatal blow to the gut. I have always maintained one line through your OSs; saying that I wish things would have proceeded or showcased in the way you shopwed in your OSs. But I beg to differ with this one.

By last September, we were in on the remarriage track and as the CVs kept us hanging on the fate of Arshi, it was a sigh of relief that had been given out collectively when Arnav chose Khushi over Dadi. Of course  his bearing towards Garima was questionable and by highlighting that you brought out something which I wish would have remained covered.

The melancholy that Khushi's distress induced throughout the OS only escalated with the parting shot...

P.S. You do have a way with giving us a sucker punch through a single lineClap

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Posted: 07 September 2013 at 6:25am | IP Logged
loved the first part. Arnav is gonna repent a big time..

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Posted: 07 September 2013 at 6:35am | IP Logged
omg!!Shocked that was so heartbreaking to readCryCry
poor khushiUnhappy
and daadi...arrrgh i just hate herAngryAngry

i'm sure, arnav's really gonna repent a big time if anything happens to khushiDisapprove
i just hope that nothing happens to her & she's just fineEmbarrassedSmile

that was a really good piece of writingClap, if possible please give us one more part where we get to know what happens after khushi's accident and whether arnav is aware of it or not!EmbarrassedBig smile

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