ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15* - Page 2

Thank you for the dedication. And, the scene was beautifully done... It actually did take me back to that part of CE, so you got the emotions down pat.

Originally posted by: HeadOverHeels

Thank you for the dedication. And, the scene was beautifully done... It actually did take me back to that part of CE, so you got the emotions down pat.

I love the turn you added in there, and how well you drew it out... It flowed and blended well, you could feel it building, and then it came about... and I adore when that happens in a story.

You're a marvel, Ridz Cracker!!

Muuuahhh!!

You really are too good to me! This makes my day...err night! ;) LOL! And that siggy would keep me occupied very well in my dreams!

<3

heart wrenching.. i can understand where arnav is coming from.. but as khushi.. what is garima's mistake if his father lied to her.. she didn't know he was married.. if garima is at fault then khushi is as well.. because the same scenario is with khushi-shyam.

beautifully written..

Broke my heart. . I wish he hadnt asked her to make a choice.. 😒

ooofff. res. Goddammit. I'm crying at work. AGAIN.

Wohoo !!

This was great Ridz !
And thanks for the inspiration too Anne, I wanted an OS from Ridz so long !!

And this was beautifully written ! And something that's so possible seeing teh current epis !
Gosh man, Im telling you CVs surely do wanna lead us into depression !

And this was written beautifully !
And the last line, about him not having to choose in the end ! Gosh !

Loved it !

*sigh*

wow...how amazingly heartbreaking...I hope that makes sense...if it doesn't then all I want to say it was great...and the end...*sigh* something I hope we won't have to see but a part of me wants to...Thank you for the PM

u r so rite it isnt about choices i know what garima did was wrong but how can arnav expect khushi to break all ties with her she took care of here when she had no one

Such a heart wrenching os.. Very touchy.. Beautifuly written.. Loved it to core