Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

problem free viraman n virika love story (Page 8)

avni_19 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
ohhh wow... too goodd concept...luving each n evry bit of this storyy.pls do continueee soon and plss PM me tooo...

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after few mins manvi is shifted to ward..evry1 went to c her 1 by 1..bt virat refused saying he vl c her wen she gets conscious..

Nidhi iz serving snacks to J evry after 2hrs..viren n others r happy seeing dat..dada iz awake now..he can sit but cant gets up from bed n walk for 24hrs according to dr..in short all are happy..

After 5 hrs manvi gets consciousness.. Dr calls her familly says dat they can all meet her for few mins n then only 1 person can stay wid her in d ward...

Evry1 goes to ward..
M: welcome..kaise ho aap sab??
Viren: welcome back salisaiba..evry1 smiles at her..
J: mannu ab kaise feel kar rahi hai ab tu?
M to viren: jiju ye di hai??? Wid shock..
Viren gets confused: han manvi aise q puch rahe ho??
Manvi in srs tone: mera surgery se ab tak kitna waqt hua hai??
Now evry1 r tensed..
Viren: around 10 hrs..q manvi aise q puch rahe ho??
J: mannu tume kya hua hai??itna srs q hogayi hai?? N tum muje aise q kaha ki ye di hai??
M: jiju nidhi bhabi kaha hai??ignores jeevika totally..
Viren...woh dada k pas hai..med de rahi hai..aati hi honge abhi..q??
J.: mannu tu mujse bat q nahi kar rahi hai ?? Me tumri di...pehchana nahi?? (wid teary eyes)
M: jiju ye sach me di hai??i mean sirf 10 gante hue hai aur ye aise???mera mtlb hai...(stops looking at j)
Viren: kya matlab manvi?? Tum apne di ko nahi pehchaan rahe ho??(really worried now)
M: pehchanugi kaise ??sirf 10 gante me ye itni moti jo lag rahi hai...n burst out laughing..
J: mannu ki bacchhi...tera b waqt ayega ab..tab me tume dekhlungi...saying dis she hugs m very tytly as if its her rebirth..
M: bas bas di ab se no rona dona..only kushiyan...saying dis she hi5s wid her jiju n asks hows dada??
J: he z fine bt he cant get up from bed for nxt 24hrs..
M: ohh take care of him di plz...n btw whrr iz...she pauses n looks at viren..
Viren..:smiles n says ur partner z w8ng outside..may b w8ng for sm privacy wid his partner..
Manvi blushes a bit n says i thot wen i open my eyes he vl b infront of me w8ng eagrly for me to c getting consciounss..(says in a complaing n sad tone)
Evry1 undrstnds d situation..vanshika : ok beta i think hum sabko abb chalna chahie taki tum b thoda rest le sako..evry1 agrees n say gud bye to manvi..all elders Gives m hug n leave..
Viren: j chalo abb thoda partners ko b akele me partnershp nibhane dete hai n winks at m..
J: viren ji partnership tho hai..humare samne b nibha sakte hai ye dono..n smiles..n waise b ye dono 10 min b bina fyt kie nai reh sakte tho hum dono ko inhe sambhalne k lie yahi rehna chachie..n winks at viren..
M gets frustrated n says di aapko rehna hai na tho raho aap..i dnt mind..par plz virat ko bulao..itni der hogai hai ab tak nahi aaya wo mujse milne..actually na me hi pagal hoon jo usse milne itna itna...chodo na di..aapka devar na waste hai..total waste... Ab tak nahi aaya mujse milne..me yaha itni badi bimaari se ladkar uska w8 kar rahi hoon par wo hai ki...leave it di...muje nahi milna usse..
J: sachhi??nahi milna virat se??
M: di aisa koi karta hai kya???mera mtlb hai...i knw woh...par di...forget it...n turns her face d otherside looking at d wall...
j: mannuu...
M: di muje sona hai..plz
Viren: manvi
M: jiju plz muje todi der akele rehna hai..
Virat...aur muje b.
M:: jiju isse kahiye yahan se chala jaye..still looking at d wall
No response ,...slowly manvi turns n sees only virat standing der wid pooja taal..he sits beside bed..n tie a small black thread on manvis hand n says
Virat: partner tumare surgery k bad i went to mandir to do a small pooja..n 1 saadu baba gave me dis n i asked 1 more 4 my partner..c maine b banda hai apne hath me..n shows to manvi..n put a tilak on manvis forehd..
M in tears: i am sry...
Virat: for wat??
M: me tumpe gussa hui..aur tum mere lie..
Virat: dats ok..bade bade deshon mein aisi choti choti baatien hoti rehti hai menorita..n touches manvis nose tip wid his finger..
M: menorita...
Virat...yar kuch tho apna dalna chahie na..ditto jaisa hai dlg waise tho nai bol sakta na..me b tho hero hoon..winks at m
M:smiles n says hero???tum tho heroin the na remember??
Virat...wo purani baat hai madam..aaj se me hero aur tum meri heroin..
M: hmmm ok done..bt tume prove karna hoga ki tum hero ho...fir maanu..
Virat: mtlb??(confused)
M: socho ..socho socho...apne dimaag pe.. Nahi nahi isme dimaag ka koi kaam nai..haan apne dil pe jor lagao...n blushes..
Virat: hmmm ok...after acting as if he iz thinking for a min he goes near to manvis face..manvi closes her eyes..virat goes still very to her n wispers in her ears sry dilpe mera jor nahi hai n moves back..
M opens her eyes in disappntmnt...
Virat sings: aashique hai ye chor nahi hai me kya karu ..
          Dilpe mera jor nahi hai me kya karu..
(goes agn near manvis face very close n manvi shuts her eyes agn) virat takes medicine which are kept on side table on d other side of d bed n move away 1ce agn from manvis face...
Virat: manvi(in a very seducive tone)
Manvi opens her eyes...virat signals her to take med holding med..(he is enjoying seeing manvi like dis n thot i m lovin it)
Manvi is very disappntd nw..without wasting a sec she takes med n turn to d other side n closes her eyes...
Virat: manvi...
M: shuts her eyes more tytly..nw tears falling from her eyes..
Virat notices dis..turns manvis face towards him n says gussa ho..
M: no..still tears r rolling..
Virat: sry
M: me gussa nahi hu..i need some rest..shuts her eyes..tears r nt stopng..she is trying hard to stop dem..
Virat: m sry plz
M: opens her eyes n says dnt b sry..tumari koi galti nahi hai..maine hi kuch jada expect karli thi..i thot itna bada victory hua hai mere lyf ka tho i deserve atleast a hug...waise tho i should b happy k muje 1 nai kai sare hugs mile ghar k saare logon se bt...she pauses den says bt i was expctng 4m u..1 passionate hug..smiles wid teary eyes n continues mein b kitni buddhu hu..janti hoon ki tum ye sab shadi k baad karna chahte ho phir b expct kia tumse..its actually my fault...woh kya hai na virat i am nt strong enuf like u to control my emotions..tabhi ye sab expect karti hu 1 gf ki tarah.. I am sry...wipes her tears finally..takes a deep breath n says..forget it virat ye sab meri galti hai..n smiles..i need sm rest if u dnt mind..
Virat in tears: m sry manvi..hero banne k chakkaar me style marte marte samaja hi nahi ki...cuts off by
M: dats ok...no need to b sry..i will w8 till marriage..tab tak...
Goes near virats face( who is still sitting beside her bed on knees)n sings 'no touching touching..only seeing only seeing' ...touches his nose tip wid her finger 'samje partner'(which was completely a challanging tone) move away slowly..
Virat.:no manvi...i did nt mean to hurt u..agn cuts off by m
M: partner muje sona hai..plz...shuts her eyes.

To b continued...


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sweetdollashita Goldie

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 1:07am | IP Logged
very nice...
continue soon ...
sushmakryan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 1:17am | IP Logged
nice update thanks for the pm 
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nice update...continue soon
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Virman are awesome!!
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Awesome. .contsoon

Edited by avika26 - 29 September 2012 at 2:52am
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