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awesome start cannot wait to read more please pm me when you update next thanks

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continuation..

D door bell rang..

J n M gets all excited n becomes emotional..they stand motionless looking at d door..dont understand what to do n how to react...after so many yrs...

tarun opens d door n a tall n very handsome man who looks stylish wid his specs yes very decent enters d vadera house..

J n M : Dada in low voice.. tears are still der in eyes..

Aditya: gudiya  mannu...

after hereing this from him dey cant stop demselvs n run to him n hugs him tightly... adi also did d same..
3 of them started to cry for few mins...den mannu breaks d hug slowly n says

M: dada aapko pata hai aapki rockstar ki halat kya hai?? n aap abb aarahe ho??pehle q nayi aaye agar aapko sab pata tha toh??

n btw dada aapko pata kaise chala ye sab???

Adi: bina break ki gaadi..badli nahi tu bilkul..

M: dada bataiye na plzzz...
Adi : ok pehle gudia ko b tho sambhalne do muje..tu tho rockstar hai sambhal gayi.. 
den he looks at J...
J: dada me b sambhal gayi hu..aap bahot sahi tym pe aaye hai...hame aapki bahot jarurat thi..
Adi: hmm i know..sab bata tha hoon pehle muje apne apne hero se tho milayie...n jaldi plz 2 hrs me hume hospital jana hai mannu ki surgery k lie..

wid this evry1 becums hell shocked..

Adi facing to all family members: actually maine Australia me hi pata chalte hi meri test karli n meri bonemarrow bilkul match hoti hai..so airport se aate waqt surgery ka sara preparation karwake aaya hoon...

Listening dis J nM shocked n asked d same qun ki aapko kaise pata chala ye sab??
wo b Australia me aapko pata chala?? par kaise??

J realises dat she still did nt invite his dada to d house n introduced to d family..so she says "sry dada plz aayiye..hammare family se milvate hai"
Adi just nodes n hold J's face n smiles..

J introduces dada to family..Adi takes blessings from dadaji bua ji n n vanshika ..n hugs chaha chachi n shlok..
n now J introducing dada to viren..
J: dada ye viren ji hai mere husbond..
Viren: doesnt undeerstand wat to say becoz he was shocked n happy n confused..mixture of feelings..he just say hi n shake hand karne hath aage badatha hai..
Adi: looks at him for a min den says " gudiya k husbond ho aur sirf hath miloge.." saying dis he opens his arm for hug n viren hugs him tightly n says "thanks a lot" n starts crying slowly..
Adi pats him on back n says "its ok me sab teek kardunga..kuch nahi hoga kisi ko b"
now its virat turn..
J comes to virat, looking at manvi says dada ye hai na.. ye merre pyaare devar hai..jisse manvi bahooot ladti hai..tang karti hai..pareshan karti hai n...manvi cuts her n says "nahi dada di jhoot bol rahi hai...me tho isse bahot pyaar karti hu...mera mtlb hai haan ladthi thi isse bt abb nahi.."
Adi just stares at mannu n virat n says "perfect jodi hai..dono dikhne me rockstars hi lagte ho"
den he hugs virat also bt unfortunately virat starts crying loudly n he cud nt stops his crying n trys to tell smthing..

Adi takes him to outside n tells J n M dat he wants talk to him for few mins akele me..

nw agn evry1 confused except virat...


vl continue soon 



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very nice story...
continue soon n pm me plzzz...
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After few mins virat n adi comes back..virat looks much releaved now..
M: kya hua tha dada?? Sab teek tho hai na??
Dada: kitna bolti hai..ab chalo muje sabko short me sare confusn clear karna hai..
Adi facing d family: i m a Dr..a Cancer speclst..3 days back maine mere 1 frnd jo delhi cancer speciality hospital me hai, usee call kia tha n wen he was talking to me, nurse ne kaha usse ki 1 aadmi aaya hai jo manvi chowdary ko bone marrow donate karna chahta hai..my frnd said uski teSt k lie le jao..i was on d other line..wen heard manvi chowdary name i was hell shocked n asked my frnd abt d patient n told him fax me manvis report immidietly..wen rcvd d report 1 i saw was manvis postal address..i understoon dat its my mannu only..den i searched who identified her cancer 1st..i saw Dr manan name..i met dr manan 3-4 tyms wen i came to delhi 4 conferences n seminars..i had his number..i/called him n asked wthr he knws abt manvis family..i told him who i am to manvi..i took info abt j n m,s whrabts n abt whts happng in thr life..i took j n m's numbers also..

Immidietly i did my tests to check whthr my bone marrow matches wid mannus n report came positive..it matches..i took nxt flight n reached hear..while coming here i went dr mehra hospital n told him to b ready for d surgery..

All r happy listening to adi..viren n virat gave him a tight hug agn..
Adi: lets go now.. Mom n dad r also w8ng for u in hospital..

M n J: wat???aunt uncle b aaye hai???unhe ghar q nahi laye aap dada??
Adi: sry unhone kaha beti ka sasural hai hum pehli bar jarahe hai khali hath nahi ja sakte bt i said i cant w8 i vl go..
N yup aap dono k lie 1 aur gud news hai..mom n dad k sath apki hone wali bhabhi b aayi hai..she z also eagerly w8ng 2 meet u..


   


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amazingly written...
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M n J: bhabhi?? sacchiii dada????
M: dada bhabi kaisi hai dikhne me??unka naam kya hai??wo b australia se hai ya indian hai??
Adi..:break mar mannu..uska naam Nidhi hai..she is also a Dr..wo indian hai bt settld in aus like us..ab baki kudh hi dekh lena hospital me..n smiles..ab chale..
M: dada itne sare khushiya?? ek hi din me?? Thank u dada n she hugs adi tightly..dada me itni kush hoon na aaj k me bina surgery k hi teek hogayi...

whole family : manviii
Dada: nautanky ab chale..
M : shworrryyy..haan chalo chalo..me dada k sath baitungi
J: me b...

J n m sits wid dada in middle in back seat of a car,
Viren n virat sits front..virat z driving..n all other family members leaves for hospiltal in diff cars..

On d way j says muje bg ko inform karna chahie ye sab..she calls bg n tells evrythng..bg is happy n says teek hai beta me paise lekar aati hoon..
J: nahi bg paiso ka chinta mat kijie aap..bas aap abhi aajayie..
Adi asks j to giv him ph..
Adi: namastey bg..bg me surgery ka paise dunga..me mannu ka bada bhai hoon..mera haq hai ye..aap inkaar nahi kar sakte..itne saal me aap bado k ego k waje se apne behno se door raha bt ab nahi..aise situation me tho bilkul nahi..aap bas aayie baki me sambhal lunga..
Bg: feels guilty n says as u wish beta n dc d call..

After d srs convo evry1 r silent in d car..to lighten d mahool,
M: dada apki gudia se kahiye wo apna khayal rakhe..wo srgry kthm hone tk bilkul kuch nai kayegi i knw..
aur chutki bechari bhook reh jayegi ..
J: mannu??? Gets angry
M: dekha dada..ye apne gusse me bechari chutki ko bhooki chodthi hai..wo kya hai na dada chutki b apni mannu masi pe gayi hai..hammesha kch na kch chahie khane ko aur ye hitler didi apne sath sath usse bbhooki rakti hai..
J: mannu???me hitler didi???tumne muje hitler didi kaha???mannu ki bacchi tu teek ho ja dekhlungi me tuje...
M: arre di meri bachhi abhi bht tym hai pehle apne chutki ka tho kayal rakko..wid dis she holds dadas hand n hides herself...
Viren: dada manvi sahi keh rahi hai..apki gudia bilkul b apni kayal nahi rakti...
J: viren ji aap b?? Jayie muje aap dono se koi baat nahi karni..
M: jiju thankuuu...luv u jiju..n says mhuuuaaahh...
Viren.: sali saiba anytym... Luv/u 2..
Virat...: dada aisa kuch nahi...bhabhi agar apna kayal nahi rak paati tho puchiye in dono jiju sali se ke kiske waje se??...dada in jiju sali k seva me hi bhabhi apna khayal nahi rakh pati aur ye dono ehsaan faramosh log bhabhi pe complaint kar rahe hai..
J: thanks virat..tum hi 1 ho jo muje samjte ho..luv uuu,...n by looking at m n viren says, mere/pyaare devar mhuuuaaahhh...
virat : luv u 2 bhabhi n gives flying kiss to j...
M: di?? Viraaat?? Kya tha ye...???mere samne di??di aap aise kar b kaise sakte...usse flying kiss aur mere samne??
J..:.Ab ayega maja..q mannu??ye mat bhool k tujse pehle wo mera devar tha aur hai,..tho uspe pehla haq mera banta hai..
M:haq??kaisa haq di??me uski hone wali biwi hoon..aur viraat sirf mera hai..aur uspe sirf aur sirf mera haq hai samje di...
J n viren were shocked to c m's posessivnss..aftr few secs dey both sarts to smile..
J..:mannu itna pyaar karti hai usse??muje yakinn nahi horaha hai..
Viren: maan gaye saali saiba aapke pyyaar ko..
M: realises wat she did just now..she covers her face wid her hands n says di i am sry..wo me..me wo..wo bas..hufff..di sry...
Viraat was looking at m in d mirror n smiling silently..
dada z happy to c his sisters happiness...
Dada: aap sabko gudiya ki chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi..usse nidhi sambhalegi..she is a gyno dr..n mannu jitni strict ye tumare health k bare me rahi hai na usse double strict nidhi hai inn mamlo me..
Now viren n mannu looking at j wid lot of happiness n j is getting scared nw...virat iz smiling silently..


Dey reach hospital nw...


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nice one...manvi's possessiveness wow...

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