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ArShi SS: Destined Accidental Love* Note Pg43 (Page 42)

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Originally posted by sunny1111

interesting story line ...update soon


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Originally posted by Shilpasabui

nice story...
continue soon...

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rockingchamp

hey areeba a new reader of ur ff its lovely...yeah its very much destiny that they marriage broke off arnv giving her lift then meeting her again ...both surely are attracted to each other ...would love to see how they fall in love wid each other...arnavs character is adorable i love him and u for making him such a adorable character...plz update soon waiting for it eagerly...add me plz...God blesss...
Tk care...
Keep smilin...
Merry christmas...

I'll not disappoint you ! I'm a bad Writer Wink Tongue
Thanks alot ! 


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Originally posted by cool_sakina

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isnt it moving too fast?? they realized thr luv,,,!!

at first arnav was on d way of imp meet but ended up wid dropping khushi home,,!

thn nxt day he barged into her offc n ended up a date with a planning of nxt date...na jan na phchan..mai tere mhman typs but p luvd d date

...all this is hpnnin..whn khushi just had a broken engagement!! moved on so easily---though lav advice her its not so easy to link up jst after a big brk up----lyk she wsnt jst datin shyam...he ws he fiance??nd now arnv khushi r feeling for each othr also!!...

i feel its running too much dats why i m feeling d lack of emotions..of both arnav khushi side.

aprt frm dat...arnav charactr is reallu adorable...their intro nd date  was cute..Smile



sry fo d feedback but i m giving my honest feelings,,




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Originally posted by awroneema

isnt it moving too fast?? they realized thr luv,,,!!

at first arnav was on d way of imp meet but ended up wid dropping khushi home,,!

thn nxt day he barged into her offc n ended up a date with a planning of nxt date...na jan na phchan..mai tere mhman typs but p luvd d date

...all this is hpnnin..whn khushi just had a broken engagement!! moved on so easily---though lav advice her its not so easy to link up jst after a big brk up----lyk she wsnt jst datin shyam...he ws he fiance??nd now arnv khushi r feeling for each othr also!!...

i feel its running too much dats why i m feeling d lack of emotions..of both arnav khushi side.

aprt frm dat...arnav charactr is reallu adorable...their intro nd date  was cute..Smile



sry fo d feedback but i m giving my honest feelings,,



Hahaha !! Thanks for the feedback ! i really didn't mind ! 
I would like to tell you when i posted the first chapter i was like why did i post this? that day & now this day I'm still trying to end this SS as soon as i can !! 
I'm not a writer , this is my first attempt n last too !! 

I'm not gonna update this as i'm out of the idea , story & emotions too LOL !! 

Thank you for reading ! 

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Posted: 11 January 2013 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Areeba...

Originally posted by awroneema

isnt it moving too fast?? they realized thr luv,,,!!

at first arnav was on d way of imp meet but ended up wid dropping khushi home,,!

thn nxt day he barged into her offc n ended up a date with a planning of nxt date...na jan na phchan..mai tere mhman typs but p luvd d date

...all this is hpnnin..whn khushi just had a broken engagement!! moved on so easily---though lav advice her its not so easy to link up jst after a big brk up----lyk she wsnt jst datin shyam...he ws he fiance??nd now arnv khushi r feeling for each othr also!!...

i feel its running too much dats why i m feeling d lack of emotions..of both arnav khushi side.

aprt frm dat...arnav charactr is reallu adorable...their intro nd date  was cute..Smile



sry fo d feedback but i m giving my honest feelings,,






Hahaha !! Thanks for the feedback ! i really didn't mind ! 
I would like to tell you when i posted the first chapter i was like why did i post this? that day & now this day I'm still trying to end this SS as soon as i can !! 
I'm not a writer , this is my first attempt n last too !! 

I'm not gonna update this as i'm out of the idea , story & emotions too LOL !! 

Thank you for reading ! 



hey...don stop writing plz...its not dat i didn like ur wrting...u r good...its just thr were some area i felt u cud have elaborate to hit on the actual emotion...thats it...:)

keep going on...i know dat day is not too far whn i myself  will be commenting on ur flaeless writing skill...Star

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