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ArShi SS: Destined Accidental Love* Note Pg43 (Page 39)

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
isnt it moving too fast?? they realized thr luv,,,!!

at first arnav was on d way of imp meet but ended up wid dropping khushi home,,!

thn nxt day he barged into her offc n ended up a date with a planning of nxt date...na jan na phchan..mai tere mhman typs but p luvd d date

...all this is hpnnin..whn khushi just had a broken engagement!! moved on so easily---though lav advice her its not so easy to link up jst after a big brk up----lyk she wsnt jst datin shyam...he ws he fiance??nd now arnv khushi r feeling for each othr also!!...

i feel its running too much dats why i m feeling d lack of emotions..of both arnav khushi side.

aprt frm dat...arnav charactr is reallu adorable...their intro nd date  was cute..Smile



sry fo d feedback but i m giving my honest feelings,,




Edited by awroneema - 04 January 2013 at 12:25pm

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by awroneema

isnt it moving too fast?? they realized thr luv,,,!!

at first arnav was on d way of imp meet but ended up wid dropping khushi home,,!

thn nxt day he barged into her offc n ended up a date with a planning of nxt date...na jan na phchan..mai tere mhman typs but p luvd d date

...all this is hpnnin..whn khushi just had a broken engagement!! moved on so easily---though lav advice her its not so easy to link up jst after a big brk up----lyk she wsnt jst datin shyam...he ws he fiance??nd now arnv khushi r feeling for each othr also!!...

i feel its running too much dats why i m feeling d lack of emotions..of both arnav khushi side.

aprt frm dat...arnav charactr is reallu adorable...their intro nd date  was cute..Smile



sry fo d feedback but i m giving my honest feelings,,



Hahaha !! Thanks for the feedback ! i really didn't mind ! 
I would like to tell you when i posted the first chapter i was like why did i post this? that day & now this day I'm still trying to end this SS as soon as i can !! 
I'm not a writer , this is my first attempt n last too !! 

I'm not gonna update this as i'm out of the idea , story & emotions too LOL !! 

Thank you for reading ! 

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Posted: 11 January 2013 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Areeba...

Originally posted by awroneema

isnt it moving too fast?? they realized thr luv,,,!!

at first arnav was on d way of imp meet but ended up wid dropping khushi home,,!

thn nxt day he barged into her offc n ended up a date with a planning of nxt date...na jan na phchan..mai tere mhman typs but p luvd d date

...all this is hpnnin..whn khushi just had a broken engagement!! moved on so easily---though lav advice her its not so easy to link up jst after a big brk up----lyk she wsnt jst datin shyam...he ws he fiance??nd now arnv khushi r feeling for each othr also!!...

i feel its running too much dats why i m feeling d lack of emotions..of both arnav khushi side.

aprt frm dat...arnav charactr is reallu adorable...their intro nd date  was cute..Smile



sry fo d feedback but i m giving my honest feelings,,






Hahaha !! Thanks for the feedback ! i really didn't mind ! 
I would like to tell you when i posted the first chapter i was like why did i post this? that day & now this day I'm still trying to end this SS as soon as i can !! 
I'm not a writer , this is my first attempt n last too !! 

I'm not gonna update this as i'm out of the idea , story & emotions too LOL !! 

Thank you for reading ! 



hey...don stop writing plz...its not dat i didn like ur wrting...u r good...its just thr were some area i felt u cud have elaborate to hit on the actual emotion...thats it...:)

keep going on...i know dat day is not too far whn i myself  will be commenting on ur flaeless writing skill...Star

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by awroneema

Originally posted by ...Areeba...

Originally posted by awroneema

isnt it moving too fast?? they realized thr luv,,,!!

at first arnav was on d way of imp meet but ended up wid dropping khushi home,,!

thn nxt day he barged into her offc n ended up a date with a planning of nxt date...na jan na phchan..mai tere mhman typs but p luvd d date

...all this is hpnnin..whn khushi just had a broken engagement!! moved on so easily---though lav advice her its not so easy to link up jst after a big brk up----lyk she wsnt jst datin shyam...he ws he fiance??nd now arnv khushi r feeling for each othr also!!...

i feel its running too much dats why i m feeling d lack of emotions..of both arnav khushi side.

aprt frm dat...arnav charactr is reallu adorable...their intro nd date  was cute..Smile



sry fo d feedback but i m giving my honest feelings,,






Hahaha !! Thanks for the feedback ! i really didn't mind ! 
I would like to tell you when i posted the first chapter i was like why did i post this? that day & now this day I'm still trying to end this SS as soon as i can !! 
I'm not a writer , this is my first attempt n last too !! 

I'm not gonna update this as i'm out of the idea , story & emotions too LOL !! 

Thank you for reading ! 



hey...don stop writing plz...its not dat i didn like ur wrting...u r good...its just thr were some area i felt u cud have elaborate to hit on the actual emotion...thats it...:)

keep going on...i know dat day is not too far whn i myself  will be commenting on ur flaeless writing skill...Star


Hahaha  !! Naaa !! I'll not write anything from now !! 
But I'll try to complete this ss for sure now Wink

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 10:15am | IP Logged
@...Areeba...: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!Smile

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Posted: 16 February 2013 at 8:38am | IP Logged
just loved all the updates...
when will u continue...Day Dreaming

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
hey nyc ss
cn u plz pm me d nxt update...
Smile

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Posted: 16 June 2013 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Hey very nice SS mind-blowing! plz do continue sooon i cant wait to read further!!

HUMBLE-REQUEST!!

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