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A Swaron FF : soul partners (Page 36)

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Your cockroach scene reminded me of sharon entering boys locker  room wala scene...
sharon saying , cockroach hi toh hai main nahi darti cockroach se and swayam saying...haan haan cockroach se kaun darta hai..dekh hi liya humne LOL LOL 
Loved the update Smile

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
hey peeps ...here the 8th part of this ff ...plzz bear with grammatical mistakes and typo errors

part 8

The next morning

Swayam as per his routine was working on  treadmill and was was sweating beacause of workout….he took his bottle and went out to garden area………took a sip and splash water on his face….somewhere there kriyaansh were having their cute little moment that suddenly kria looked upward and saw sharon looking at someone …she followed her gaze and saw that she was looking at swayam…..kria signalled to rey to look at sharon but he did not paid heed to it

Kria: rey app sharon ki taraf dekho who swayam ko kese dekh rahi hai

Rey: kya karun usey dekh kar yaar

Kria : rey apko apni bestfriend ki bilkul fikar nae hai

Rey : agar who swayam ki taraf dekh rae hai toh ismai fikar krne wali knsi baat hai

Kria: leave it rey …app nae samjho ge

Rey : theek hai leave it

They both proceeded towards the living area ,swayam also joined them

Swayam: good morning rey, good morning kria

Kriyaansh : goodmorning

Meanwhile sharon came down..upon looking at her …he greeted her with morning wishes and pass on the bottle to her …sharon blinked her eyes as pass on the bottle in the air to her….no one was this easy going with not even after a decade of friendship nor she was that obliging to anyone but is seem to be all over different for him

 

They had breakfast together and now they were all set to play the earlier decided volley ball match …..all were there at pool side except swayam and sharon…while passing from the way he saw sharon in swim suit she was lookink sexy in it …he went near her an whispered in her ears

Swayam: you're looking sexy in this swim suits of yours

Sharon eyes popped out on hearing his comment but didn't said anything and went away …..as sharon came in front of every …the boys wnt gaga over her whilst swayam reached there……he didn't appreciate thre looks…he didn't like it but decided to ignore …he was confused why he didn't like it but surpassed his thoughts and went near them

Gang: finally swayam you are here…we had done all the preps …we are just required to make teams

Swayam: ok then we'll have two teams ….team A and team B

Team A

Kria

Rey

Simmi

Nilesh

Vishaka

Bharat

Team B

Swayam

Sharon

Vickey

Neha

Rinni

Amar

Both the teams will have two match…… a team need two extra points from other team to win

They took their position and the game begin……the game had the elements of romance fight and mast for everyone….. except from romance for  swayam and sharon

Swayam: kya yarr in logon ka minute minute main look look shuru hojata hai

Sharon : yes your correct

swayam: I am always correct

sharon : whatever

vickey: kya dude tum donu baaton main masruf ho…pay attention to pay

swayam: tu toh kuch mat bol vickey

it was half time..the teams switched there sides…..this time sharon was in front line and swayam behind her….. the second half of the game begin ….ad sharon was about to hit the ball to make point but swayam assumed that she might not be able to make it so he proceeded forward, hit the ball ,made the point but in this process somewhat looses his and for support holds sharon's waist which made them fall in the water ….it took them 5 mins to gain their balance…gang was waiting for them ……as sharon gain her balance she started shouting

sharon: yeh kya tha swayam ??

swayam: kya kya tha…tum bas paani mai gir gayi…waise bhi pool main hi toh khari ho

sharon: han aur tumhari wajah se giri…apni position par tik kar khare nae reh skte

swayam: oh god …tum miss krdeti point ka chance toh

sharon: toh kya han

swayam: ssshhh ! ( indicated her by the expression)

swayam:  (whispers to her) sherni dhaar rahi hai

gang was watching them quietly and atlast rey interrupted in between

rey: if you both are done with your arguments….so lets get back to the game

they resume their game…it was a draw between the team so to declear the winner it was decided that swayam and rey will have a match …..as every one was moving out of pool sharon looses her balance and again both fell into water

swayam : hogaya tumhara revenge pura ???

sharon : knsa revenge  ???

swayam: wahi jo tum ne abhi pura kiya mujhe apne saath gira kar

sharon: swayam!! Maine revenge nae liya its just that I lost my balance

swayam: arey main to aise hi bol raha tha ..just kidding

swayam and rey were playing neck to neck and other were cheering for them …atlast swayam won which directly means team b won….sharon become so excited that she jumped into the pool …everybody else started laughing because it was third time that swaron were dipped into water …swaron were standng close to each other with 'look look hawa hawa"…kriyaansh comment brought them back to earth

kriyaansh: aj tum donu ki hatric hogai yar

with this laughter roared among them …swayam helped sharon to come out and then they decided to leave back to their places 


i dont if it is upto the mark and i even dont knw what i have written in it so sorry to them who dnt like this part


criticism and suggestions are most welcumed
plzz hit like tab and comment 


your comments are sole reason ehch encourage me to write more
next update after 25 likes and on page 50 

regards
aruba

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Wow Very beautiful and cute update dear:-):-):-) I jus loved it:-):-):-)

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Nice and fun filled updateBig smile
waiting fr the next one
and thnks fr the pm dearSmile

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Rose--

Wow Very beautiful and cute update dear:-):-):-) I jus loved it:-):-):-)
thanx for your comment
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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pri_swaron

Nice and fun filled updateBig smile
waiting fr the next one
and thnks fr the pm dearSmile
you're welcum
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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
sooo cute...
swaron ki hatric ho gyi...
hehehe...awesome...LOLLOL
this FF is such a pleasant readEmbarrassed
update soon dear Smile

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Fabulous update...please PM me when you will update next...StarStarStar

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