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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bonibright

wonderful update..ClapThumbs Up
I wish Rithvik n Asha are casted in such a youth based show,away from all these rona - dhona of PR..Big smile
 
thanks dear
 
i also want the same

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Part-3

Purvi's pov

Another date with Sadu I am so excited but why I am thinking about that Sadu and blushing trying to reason her thoughts

His eyes are so deep I just want to get drown in his eyes I thought

God purvi you are getting mad go to sleep now I told myself and went to sleep but to be get lost in his dreams

Next morning

Purvi woke up with a jerk when her alarm rang

OMG Sadu will be waiting for me at the basketball court I thought and rush to get ready

After checking how I was looking for the tenth time I left for the basketball court

Where is he? I asked to myself while looking for him but couldn't find him anywhere but then see saw him

Arjun's pov

Today is my big match and I am thinking about Beautiful but why? I thought

Arjun where are you lost buddy? Get your head in the game sachin said

Nothing dude lets go and practice I said and we moved to the court

Will she come? But why would she come? No she had promised she will come all this was going on my mind when I saw her looking like an angel in white salwar suit

I smiled waved at her and she smile and waved back in return and went to seat

Sachin was observing them very keenly asked arjun who is she?

Purvi deshmukh, my friend I replied

Friend, really dude? It looks more than friendship to me sachin said

No nothing like that let's go the game is about to start I said and moved to the court

During the whole game I was lost  was thinking about what sachin said and was again and again staring at Beautiful

Dude I know you are in love but that doesn't mean you will forget about the game get back to reality sachin whisper in my ear and I shot a glare at him

I was about to reply when I heard vinay of virus commenting on my Beautiful

I looked back and saw him staring at her

I lost my cool and just grab him by shoulder and started beating him

How dare you look at my Beautiful? I asked

Whoa, dude relax I was just looking I didn't do anything yet he replied

That I punched him hard and he fall on the floor 

I was asked to leave the court which I obeyed

While heading back I saw Beautiful staring at me didn't say anything and went to locker room to change

Why I am behaving like a possessive lover? Does this mean I am in love with Beautiful? I asked myself

God help me I prayed and closed my eyes and saw beautiful's face

I immediately open my eyes and thank god to help me realize I feelings

I love you Beautiful I declared

Purvi's pov

Why are Sadu staring at me again and again? Does he also feel the same thing that I feel for him? I thought and again looked towards the game

Who is that guy staring at me? Why has Sadu started beating him like a possessive lover? I again thought

Just then I heard the referee asking Sadu to leave the court

I thought he will argue back but he didn't he just went away to the locker room

I went outside and waited for him

I saw him coming with a wide smile on his face

You were just asked to leave the court and here you are smiling may I know the reason? I asked him

Nothing Beautiful he said and kissed my cheek

I looked at him in shocked and then blushed

Shall we leave? I have important work at home I asked

Sure he smiling replied

Arjun's pov

She blushed that means she enjoyed the kiss. Does she also feel the same for me? I thought while walking with her to her home

I suddenly stopped walking and held her hand and asked for her mobile number

Why? She asked

So that I can talk to you anytime I want I replied

We exchanged our numbers and again started moving towards our destination

After reaching her place she looked at me and said goodbye

I didn't want to leave her and wanted to kiss her so I just went with flow and pulled her towards me by her waist

She looked at me with a surprise face and then blushed

We slowly lean towards each other and started to gently kiss each other and then our passion took over, we kissed each other hungrily. We broke the kiss after 10 mins

Thanks she said and kissed my cheek and went inside

I caress the place where she had kissed and left for my place

After I reached home I saw sachin waiting for me by playing a game with samrat and adhiraj

So, enjoyed your date? Sachin asked

Date with whom? Adhiraj enquired

Purvi deshmukh sachin replied

The one who studies in maurya? Adhiraj asked

Purvi deshmukh, the music student in maurya samrat conformed

I didn't replied and went inside my room

She kissed me back that mean she also loves me I thought and dialed her number

Purvi's pov

He kissed me does that means he loves me? I thought just then my cell rang up

Hi Sadu I said

Hey Beautiful I want to ask you something? He replied

What does he want to ask me?  Ithoght

What is it? I asked

What will you say if I say that I love you? He asked me

I would say you are out of your mind  I replied and hung up

He loves me I jumped with joy

I love you too Sadu I declared

Precap –arjun and his dad's conversation

I know guys its not big but I am buzy in colleges so I don't when I will be able to give next update

Will try to give asap and bigger one too

Do comment and criticize

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
Hi Priyanka

Thanks for a lovely update on a weekendTongue

For once Purvi is shown as excited to meet Arjun and its so cute that she was looking at the mirror for the tenth time.

Both their hearts yearns to meet as without them realizing, they have developed love for each other. 

The parts I liked most were:

a) she had arrived the basketball court and her eyes was searching for him and vice-versa;
b) the way he keeps thinking of her as Beautiful and she of him as Sadu is so cute;
c) his first kiss on her cheek and she blushed; and finally
d) from gentle to passionate to hunger kiss. This was shown so beautifully as at that moment, neither of them could control their emotions which has been bottled up.

Lastly but not the least how smartly he put his words to tell her that he loves her as he was afraid that he'll be rejected not knowing the actual truth that even his Beautiful loves him the same way.

Overall an awesome updateBig smilePrecap seems interesting. Please do update soon.



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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
heyy Priyanka Big smile
This part was amazing..liked it so much..
Your updates are always worth waiting..
and thanks your update made my day coz the first thing for me to do today was to read your update..
arjun and purvi's feelings were shown very beautifully..
this part is one of my favourites..
and also liked arjun's posesseiveness towards his Beautiful..
and that ArVi kiss was superb..loved it so much
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Thankyou for this lovely update...
do update soon as possible..
thanks for PM dear.

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Ok first of all...I owe and apology to you...really sorry dear...I totally forgotten to comment...sorry...anyways coming back to ur update...really fntastic one...beautiful...loved it a lot...Great job Priyanka...I didn't write which I like the most because I loved almost all of it...so a big Claps for u...Big smile

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 9:52am | IP Logged
fabulous update priyanka...ClapClapClap
u gave such a beautiful arvi scene after a long wait...it was sooo cute...
i loved the whole part and specially arjun's and purvi's realisation and their kiss part was so beautifully written... EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
thanks for pm and do pm me again...
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 2:17am | IP Logged
I love this jodi...and i like your storySmile

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 12:35am | IP Logged
its awesome dear do update it soon waiting for the next update

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