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Posted: 11 years ago
its awesome dear do update it soon waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: NadaCinta

Hi Priyanka


Thanks for a lovely update on a weekend๐Ÿ˜›

For once Purvi is shown as excited to meet Arjun and its so cute that she was looking at the mirror for the tenth time.

Both their hearts yearns to meet as without them realizing, they have developed love for each other. 

The parts I liked most were:

a) she had arrived the basketball court and her eyes was searching for him and vice-versa;
b) the way he keeps thinking of her as Beautiful and she of him as Sadu is so cute;
c) his first kiss on her cheek and she blushed; and finally
d) from gentle to passionate to hunger kiss. This was shown so beautifully as at that moment, neither of them could control their emotions which has been bottled up.

Lastly but not the least how smartly he put his words to tell her that he loves her as he was afraid that he'll be rejected not knowing the actual truth that even his Beautiful loves him the same way.

Overall an awesome update๐Ÿ˜ƒPrecap seems interesting. Please do update soon.

 
thanks dear
 
arvi will never say each other name until i want them to
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

heyy Priyanka ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
This part was amazing..liked it so much..
Your updates are always worth waiting..
and thanks your update made my day coz the first thing for me to do today was to read your update..
arjun and purvi's feelings were shown very beautifully..
this part is one of my favourites..
and also liked arjun's posesseiveness towards his Beautiful..
and that ArVi kiss was superb..loved it so much

Thankyou for this lovely update...
do update soon as possible..
thanks for PM dear.

 
thanks dear
 
glad that it made your day
 
you r welcome
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Angelfreak_96

Ok first of all...I owe and apology to you...really sorry dear...I totally forgotten to comment...sorry...anyways coming back to ur update...really fntastic one...beautiful...loved it a lot...Great job Priyanka...I didn't write which I like the most because I loved almost all of it...so a big ๐Ÿ‘s for u...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

 
its ok neha
 
thanks sweetie
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: rithika2012

fabulous update priyanka...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
u gave such a beautiful arvi scene after a long wait...it was sooo cute...
i loved the whole part and specially arjun's and purvi's realisation and their kiss part was so beautifully written... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
thanks for pm and do pm me again...
๐Ÿ˜Š

 
thanks dear
 
for sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Fleur_de_Lis

I love this jodi...and i like your story๐Ÿ˜Š

 
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: sweeti_cutie

its awesome dear do update it soon waiting for the next update

 
thank you