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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ...Areeba...

Hahahaha !! 😉 yeah Di plz help her 😉 😉 😆 



areeba yee shyamu hai see now u also running away  

dar gayi dar gayi areeba 
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice, cant wait to read the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! An awesme update👏
Loved it😃
I hate this Anjali🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: coronapsyche

Wow! An awesme update👏
Loved it😃
I hate this Anjali🤢


Ya dear this woman is getting dumb every second
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: kookoo864

nice, cant wait to read the next part



Dear this was the last part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Punkin22

Loved this update, Rozyln, beautifully written and thought out closure.

 
Arnav begins to see what is going on around him in his own home.  He finds cameras.  He sees and hears betrayal from the one person he has lived for.  I could feel Arnav pain through your superb writing.
 
 
Khushi is his only support.  I love the Arnav you have penned.  His Harvard University brain is finally working.  He found all the horror of what Shyam was doing.  And worst, Anjali part in it.  His many feelings were on display through your words.  Outstanding.
 
 
The confrontation was awesome.  I have wanted this conflict to happen for a long time.  You have each character's personality intact perfectly.  I really enjoyed this part because it seems to me that IPKKND rewards evil and punishes innocence.
 
 
Shashi finally comes forward and tells his truth of Shyam.  My heart went out to Khushi hearing this painfrul truth.  I loved Khushi's slap, everyone of them.  ASR finally takes Shyam down.
 
 
Lovely ending dear, I enjoyed it so much...



Thanks a lot dear.
You really bring out small details that I love everyone to notice.
Ya I want our actual IPKKND to be like this.
This is our real Arnav and Khushi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
kash he had done this naa
but no worries you did it so much better
cool os dear
thank god arnie had the sense to do this
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Rozy...
Ah i so wish Arnav did the same thing in the show too...
Left right to creepwa...
Anjali is blind...

I was actually imagining the whole thing... It was beautifull... (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: chavvi16

kash he had done this naa
but no worries you did it so much better
cool os dear
thank god arnie had the sense to do this



Ya i wished this thing to happen in the show too much but it didnt happened
so i wrote this OS.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Samaira32

Amazing Rozy...
Ah i so wish Arnav did the same thing in the show too...
Left right to creepwa...
Anjali is blind...

I was actually imagining the whole thing... It was beautifull... (:



Thanks Sami.
We all have high hopes from Arnav.
Ya wanna give nice bashings to creepwa.
Anji is really too blind. She cannot see the reality of her husband.