Originally posted by: ...Areeba...Hahahaha !! 😉 yeah Di plz help her 😉 😉 😆
Originally posted by: ...Areeba...Hahahaha !! 😉 yeah Di plz help her 😉 😉 😆
Originally posted by: coronapsycheWow! An awesme update👏
Loved it😃
I hate this Anjali🤢
Originally posted by: Punkin22Loved this update, Rozyln, beautifully written and thought out closure.
Arnav begins to see what is going on around him in his own home. He finds cameras. He sees and hears betrayal from the one person he has lived for. I could feel Arnav pain through your superb writing.Khushi is his only support. I love the Arnav you have penned. His Harvard University brain is finally working. He found all the horror of what Shyam was doing. And worst, Anjali part in it. His many feelings were on display through your words. Outstanding.The confrontation was awesome. I have wanted this conflict to happen for a long time. You have each character's personality intact perfectly. I really enjoyed this part because it seems to me that IPKKND rewards evil and punishes innocence.Shashi finally comes forward and tells his truth of Shyam. My heart went out to Khushi hearing this painfrul truth. I loved Khushi's slap, everyone of them. ASR finally takes Shyam down.Lovely ending dear, I enjoyed it so much...
Originally posted by: chavvi16kash he had done this naa
but no worries you did it so much better
cool os dear
thank god arnie had the sense to do this
Originally posted by: Samaira32Amazing Rozy...
Ah i so wish Arnav did the same thing in the show too...
Left right to creepwa...
Anjali is blind...
I was actually imagining the whole thing... It was beautifull... (:
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