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ProngsPadsMoony IF-Sizzlerz

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Part 4

After 6 months

Karan's pov

I rang the doorbell and stood waiting for the door to open

Hello uncle how are you Atul asked while he opened the door

I am fine how about you ? I asked him

I always liked the boy I wish my son would have few of his qualities

I am fine uncle I will call armaan he replied

Armaan your dad is here to meet you Atul called out

I went inside and saw him talking to his friends

Dad what are you doing here? He asked him

I wanted to have a man-to-man talk with you son i replied

He led me to his room

Is this your room? why don't you  live with us in the place? just see how small this place on the earth do you survive here i asked him

Dad pls we have already talk about this before and my answer is not going to change I will not come back to the palace he replied

Ok son as you wish let's get straight to the point let's just sit and talk i said

What is it dad? he asked me although I very well knew what was coming

Why does he want to live away from us, from all the comfort I can never understand my son why is he so complicated I thought

First,how are you son? I asked him

I am fine dad how are you,mom and brat he replied

Your mon and your sister both are fine they miss you a lot I told him

Please tell them that I miss them too he said

I will tell them but son even I miss you I told him

I miss you too da he said

Really? I asked

He look at each other for a while

Leave it dad do you want to go for lunch so that we could talk freely he asked

Sure son let's go to our favorite restraunt I said

Armaan's pov

At the reaustrant

What would you like to eat he asked me

Anything dad I said

As you wish he said and ordered lunch

During lunch he asked me did you hear from law college?

I am yet to decided on a college I replied

I can help you out ,you just decided on a college and let me talk to the owner he said

No dad you don't talk to anyone I want to heard with the rest of the students I replied

Ok son as you want he said

Let's go dad I said

You go ahead I am coming  he replied


Hi armaan how are you? Siddhanth called out to me

I am fine siddhanth I told him

How is your girlfriend? hope she is fine you know armaan you are quite lucky to have ridhhima as your girldfriend she is soo sexy he said

That it I punched him hard and they we broke into a fight until my father came and separated us

 What the hell armaan where are your manners he asked me

Leave me dad I want to kill him I replied

Come with me son he said and took me away

You shouldn't be fighting like this you need to see a doctor I said

No need dad I will do my dressing I replied

You will be needing a doctor son he said

No need dad I am getting late for a study session shall I take your leave? I asked him

Let me drop you he said

I will go on my own I said and took his leave

Ridhhima's place

She opened the door and then turn away while talking on phone

Who is she talking to? I thought

Uday I am really fine you don't worry about me she said on phone

Who is this uday I thought

Finally, she saw me

Ridhhima's pov

What the hell happened to him? I thought

Uday I will talk to you later I said and hung up

What happened to you Richie rich? I asked him

Nothing basket I am fine he replied

You don't lie to me tell me what happen? I orderd him

Do you remember siddhanth? He asked

The guy you beaten up on the during our second date? I asked

Yup well we had a fight he replied

Fight but, why?

He was talking all rubbish about you he replied

Aww so sweet I love your possessiveness I said and kissed his cheek

Let me do your first-aid I said and went to bring the first-aid box

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.Naruto. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Nice part sis.
Update soon.
Sid is a jerk.

Edited by krazykiller - 11 November 2012 at 3:11am

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pinky.padda IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 7:17pm | IP Logged
very sweet and romantic
teenorchid IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged part... Armaan had a fight...hawww loved hs possessivenesss
Fleur_de_Lis IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 2:16am | IP Logged
liked it...had a great similiarity with your arshi storySmile
KaJen_addiction IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 2:17am | IP Logged
so sweet! i just love 2 c Armaan getting possessive 4 Ridz!
cont soonish
thnx 4 pm:))
sakshiA Goldie

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
sorry for late comment, diwali so busy.
now the part, loved it. Loved possessive Armaan.
sid is uff...
cont soon and thanks for pm.
so sorry I missed 3rd part.
wow a romantic one.

Edited by sakshilksg - 15 November 2012 at 6:25am
ProngsPadsMoony IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 6:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Arman.

Nice part sis.
Update soon.
Sid is a jerk.
thanks bro

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