Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG OS:"Kehna Hi Kya"Pt 3/New Note Pg 49/69/24th March - Page 37

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Posted: 10 years ago
yeyyy

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Posted: 10 years ago
gosh u r outstanding in word dear no one can beat u i think i love all writer n there story no doubt in it  but the way u write this part i cant express my feelings as n reader dear its superb, marvelous , outstanding  above the word he yar they way u start maans pov frankly speaking firstly i found it how long it will going on its to lengthy when i start reading it litterly m just staring it 1/2 n hour without blink what n pov dear i just love each n every word of maan his feelings towards geet so pure n divine yar n its all credit goes to u dear . just love the update lot mostly i like part in it that breej prank litterly m laughing half n hour yar cause itne emotional part k bad ye jo prank tha its like icing on cake yar ssly . 
thanks for his lovely update and pm waiting for next update eagerly so pls update fast as possible dear  
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank You so much fro coming back ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love Ya ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
hii me back again
arey to comment on part 2
kal ki baat hai maaneet miley n in part 2 a leap of 3 years wowww๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
first rano mohinder scene was so sweet
n ya all parents r same๐Ÿ˜†
n yes her dad said r8 geet is one in million
bt omg i cant blv  maanu n geet didnt talk for once in those 3 years๐Ÿ˜ฒ
n still she lvng  him so much
ab obviously maneet hai toh lv banta hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
me lv the song n her confidence in her faith๐Ÿ˜›
n mujhe toh phle pta tha the guy coming to see her is none other than my maanu
n lv the every word they said to each other
awww it was so amazingn dreamy
n brij aww ye brij toh bhut ht accha nikla๐Ÿคฃ
lvd it


n ya comment on part 3
coming soon
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wait 4 it๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks dear 
waiting for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
hiii me back๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
KK PART 3   ๐Ÿ˜‰

hila in part 3 shadi b ho gyi aley wah๐Ÿ˜†
she read his diary haww
its bad
bt maaneet mai chalta hai haina๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
he has opened his heart in his diary
lv the every word he wtote i hsi diary
lv the wy u portrayed every emotion
aww it was so beautiful๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
n the thing cracked me was the way maanu was looking at the pic n saying all that about that guy whom brij selected for geewt n his expression when said Why don't you say Champ that you don't like him at all nd you want me to reject him so that I can accept you for my sister.๐Ÿคฃ
aww lvd it
bt i must say brij is  sweet heart here๐Ÿ˜†

it was whole so lovely n beautiful bt SR T9OH REH GYI๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
waiitng 4 next

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hayeee... Kya update tha re...
I totally lost myself into it...
It was worth waiting yaar... Simply flawless...
The way geet found maan's dairy 
and then she went through their love journey but with maan's view...
That was tooo goood...
and How maan kept taking her pics and their khamoshi speaking...
Awww... I just loved it to the core...
And Then brij coming to maan... lolz I can imagine maan's face their u knw...
But Brij is best bro and frnd yaar.. He caught his frnd...๐Ÿ˜†
Finally They were going to get one...
and Hayee Maan ki mishty sirf maan ki.. Uff I sooo much loved it...
Hats off for this lovely part yaar...
Continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
haiii akku i really dont know about this storu of urs thank god i got pm 

u started this long back but why soo much delay two years why soo 

woww i loved this story silent love and there acceptence everything was superb awesome story loved it 
i dont have to tell you about your writing skills i loved it mai hogaya fida long back only 
you know my story i mean my 1st os "My honey bee" also same like this ~ MY HONEY BEE~

read this if you are imterested you know we both have same wave lenghts in writing i am just thrilled after redaing it 
you written bothe maaneet emotions very well outstanding must say 
and the title mar jawa loved it 
the title itself gave me some special feeling and after reading story you made me speechless
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear, u will continue n complete this OS! Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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